Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:19 PM · On: In Which Edward is Schooled
Nice again.
Favs --
Oh sweet baby Kermit, my karma bank must be full tonight.
Her knees were wrapped around my hips – firm, sexy, intimate. Her arms were wrapped around my neck – soft, lovely, asphyxiating me.
Good tie in with canon - Chuckling quietly I asked her, "What if I’m not a superhero? What if I’m the bad guy?"
Reviewer: just_me (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:18 PM · On: In Which Edward Has An Epiphany
ooooooo!!
I love your Jasper too!!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:14 PM · On: In Which Edward Contemplates the Space-Time Continuum
It is sad to say goodbye to this story. It was definitely hard to predict the journey that these characters would take after that disclosure about her rape, but I feel that this chapter allowed Bella to finally close the door on her past while embracing her life and future with Edward with both hands.
It was great that we got to see their first time having sex and watch them get over that hurdle together. I liked that Bella insisted that they needed to do this together.
The arrival of Rosalie and Emmett was a nice surprise as was their announcement. It cracked me up when Carlisle asked for the date of arrival for his first grandchild and everyone started either choking on drinks or laughing.
Edward's marriage proposal to Bella was really adorkable. I love that he never got to the words, "Will you marry me?, before Bella tackled him with her answer. I also love that his mother was included in the planning of this proposal since she missed out on Jasper's impromptu ceremony.
I will miss Geek Bella and Edward, but thank you for a great story. I will look out for the two outtakes to come.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing on both sites!! Hugs!
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:11 PM · On: In Which Edward is Cantaloupey
Drunk Bella is hysterical.
Particular fav bits --
At rooster-ass o'clock, Clocky, my robotic alarm went off, leaping off my night stand, rolling through the apartment dinging like a fucking arcade game. Sweet love of sleep, why did I ever buy that thing??
I felt something dark, angry, and very dramatic inside.
Reviewer: gillies (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:08 PM · On: In Which Edward Contemplates the Space-Time Continuum
Hahahaha that was awesome!! And damn you have some funny lines in here!! I almost wet my pants several times during this!! Especially the mmmm bop bit hahahha!
Your awesome! Congrats on this love!!
xx
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:05 PM · On: In Which a Door is Closed
Lovely.
I moved over here to Twilighted to review. Now I can read it with apples, lol.
Loved "Dead kittens in a plane crash." and "Your suffering - it's like a balm to me." -- This story is super quotable.
Author's Response: Oh. My. God. When I read your "apples" comment I about lost it. I'm still laughing 5 mins later. That really got my funny on. LOL!
You rock for reviewing on both sites.
*pets*
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:49 PM · On: In Which Edward Contemplates the Space-Time Continuum
I have said it before and i will say it again - I absolutely love your edward - the internal thoughts, the banter, etc. I will sincerely miss Geek Love but will look forward to the outtakes. I can actually relate tothe proposal in this story as I also said yes to my husband before he actually asked and I joined him on the ground where he was kneeling (he says I fell down but I protest).
Reviewer: just_me (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:45 PM · On: In Which Edward is Schooled
How could I have missed this story??
I'm completely hooked - in a 'notleavingthehousereadingallchapters' kinda way.
Thank you for this story - I'm thoroughly enjoying it!
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:18 PM · On: In Which Edward Contemplates the Space-Time Continuum
That was so damn cute. I'm sad it's over.
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:17 PM · On: In Which Edward Contemplates the Space-Time Continuum
LOVE the last line! <><3
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:00 PM · On: In Which Edward Contemplates the Space-Time Continuum
Yay! I'm so happy for your Geekward and Nerdella :) Thank you for this story, I've loved reading it and look forward to the outtakes.
Oh, and "I Messed My Panties" is hilarious!
Reviewer: AugustaBlue (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 09:45 PM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Fantastic story. I adore Nerdward and Geekella! The nerf war in the first chapter is hysterical. Hell, most all of the story is funny as heck! I love how patient and understanding Edward is with Bella. The Charlie and Edward talk was very very well done. I enjoyed their 'cage match' too. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:11 AM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! THAT CAN'T BE THE END OF THIS CHAPTER!!!! It's torture waiting for updates!!
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:29 AM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Very hot.
Reviewer: karilyn_yvonne (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 01:31 AM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
hot chapter
Reviewer: Jeccabee (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:42 PM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Another great chapter. You had me laughing so hard with the coughing game. Esme and Carlisle are adorable. I hope that she warms up about the Alice and Jasper wedding. I have a feeling she will.
The love birds are getting so much better at communicating. I am so excited to see where they go from here.
*hugs*
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:36 AM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Holy Hale and then some...Jasper is married!!
Wow...Edward and Bella have definatly have come far...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:33 AM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Holy Hale and then some...Jasper is married!!
Wow...Edward and Bella have definatly have come far...
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:05 PM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Yeah, a new chapter! I so love this crazy pair. They are finally getting past Bella's history and creating a positive one of their own. Jasper & Alice are so sweet. I actually know a couple who were married after a very short amount of time and are happy and contented with kids many years later. When you know you know!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:58 PM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
love alice and jasper eloped!
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:46 PM · On: In Which There is a Dare (or two)
Jasper and Alice got married? Bella and Edward hit third base? I've missed SO much! GREAT chapter! I loved it!! =) Hopefully more soon? =)
Merry Christmas... Eve!!! =P
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:22 AM · On: In Which Edward Has An Epiphany
that was quick!
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:21 AM · On: In Which Some Porn is Watched, Redux (Jasper)
.... a very f*ckable bunch? yeah! I am so diggin on Jazz right now!
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:19 AM · On: In Which Some Porn is Watched
awww he's got it bad! so cute! Jazz is a freak - too funny!
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:18 AM · On: In Which Edward is Schooled
ooo yuck! but me thinks eddie might not be too upset.
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