good good,

more pleaaase

if you need a beta im here ;D

x

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I'm happy you like it so far, hopefully the rest of it can live up to everyone's expectations. Lol. 

And thanks for the Beta offer, I already have a beta though. I might contact you about being a Beta for one of my other fanfics when I un-block myself from that story later okay.

Thanks for the review, I hope you keep reading this story and tell me what you think.

bubbalicious_91 xoxo 

Interesting. Can't wait for more :)

Can I just say how freaking awesome it is that Alice snapped and attacked him? I've read countless fics where Alice gets furious or cries, etc, but NEVER, EVER have I read one where she actually loses it and jumps him. And yet, it's SO appropriate for emotions of the moment that I can visualize it easily. And it's surprisingly not at all out of character for Alice, either. Perfection.

More soon, please!  

Author's Response:

Hehe!!! Glad you liked the little Alice snaps bit. I had originally thought that she was just going to yell and everything like she does in all those other fanfics but I started to get really upset it kind of reflected itself and I couldn't help but add it in when I saw it in my head, lol It looked so awesome in my head. I hope it looked as awesome to you as it did to me. I agree I don't think it's out of character for her either I mean she was in hysterics, loosing her best friend and sister and she knew that she was going to lose Edward by the end of the night too, so I mean why not, right?

Thanks for reading and the awesome review. 

Bubbalicious_91 xoxo

I really like where this is going...next chapter plz!!!!

Great chapter. I wasn't expecting to see a Cullen POV so soon but it was really good.

This is going to sound really weird but at first I was so confused as to where to go with my story after I read the beginning to yours but then like two day ago my writers block just disappeared and I haven't been able to pry myself from my mac book ever since. Lol. I'm still not exactly sure about the whole story line yet because like you said I am also kind of switching around and writing from different points in the story.

But I don't think are stories will be all that similar. The Cullens don't come into mine for about four or five chapters I think.

Anyways...I am so excited for the ball room scene. I'm hoping for some major drama between Bella and Edward. I've always thought she took him back to easily.

Oh and I love the banner. It's definitely one of the best I've ever seen. Really fierce!

Author's Response:

Lol well I am glad you got rid of that block, I hate when that happens it's so annoying. I know what you mean about the Cullen POV coming so soon but it was needed. If I had started off on Bella's POV well it wouldn't have really worked and it would have been confusing as hell, it was just better starting off with Esme. 

Lol I'm glad your looking forward to my future chapters, especially the ball room scene, because I'm rewriting it for like the third time. I'm just not happy with it so far, it just needs that little something extra but I have time to work on it as it's still a few chapters away. And don't worry about Edward and Bella...I always thought she was to soft when she took him back no questions asked as well. ;-)

I hope your writing is going well and I hope to read it someday and despite what some people say writing from different POV's and just jotting down random scene that maybe able to work later are a great start. Don't put all your attention on the actual story line too much at the moment just let everything out onto the paper and see how you go from there... the line and plot will form on it's own. 

Bubbalicious_91 xoxo

I'M CRYING!!!! And I got tears on my keyboard. The 'q' isn't working anymore...you are so awesome. This story is so awesome. Awesome. ^_^ Hee-hee.

Updatemarates soon? Please?

Rose

Author's Response:

Hey Rose,

Lol Thanks for the awesome review though I'm sorry I kinda ruined your keyboard. I had a little teary when I was writing it but I had no idea that it would have the same effect on other people. 

I'll submit the next installment later today but I don't know when it will be posted, it will depend on whenever my Beta can get around to it so just be patient, it gets better I promise. 

bubbalicious_91 xoxo

What's the hold up? I'm eagerly waiting for this!!!

Author's Response:

lol I know I know. I submitted the next chapter a couple of days ago and Texbelle, my Beta, hasn't gotten to it yet. I'm not sure how long it will take until she gets to it. Sorry.

bubbalicious_91 xoxo

Sounds like a great story. I hope you plan to continue and update. It's hard to stay with a story after a while. This one sounds like it would be a great one. Good luck.

Looks good, cant wait to read more :)

I'm intriqued. Looking forward to the next installment. I did notice just one teeny-tiny mistake in the second to last sentence of your prologue. "All of them in agreement with whom I should fight, with whom I should protect and to who’s arm I would be running to after this was all over." I believe you meant to put arms. Just one letter, :).

Also, have you considered posting this at FF.net as well? You don't have to wait for validations on that site, and it would give you a chance at seducing more readers with your eye-catching summary and dramatic proloque.

Take care!

Later,

Baela

Author's Response:

Hey Beala,

Thanks for the review and the spelling correction, I didn't even notice and i've read it over like 6 times. I guess I just automatically think that it's the right word and skip over the last half of it lol, I should really stop doing that. 

Thanks for the fanfiction.net tip, I totally forgot about that site since I haven't been on there for a few months. I just started an account but it will be 2 days before I can post any chapters on there. My FF.net address is on my profile so check it in a couple of days and see how many chapters i've put up. 

Thanks again for everything and reading it, the response i've gotten for just the prologue is so much more then what I was hoping for. Now I'm reading and editing all my chapters again 'cause I'm nervous it won't meet everyone's expectations lol. 

luvs bubbalicous_91 xoxo

I can't wait to find out who Bella's new family is and who she chooses. This story is looking very interesting.

Wowza - if that's just the prologue, I can't wait to see what leads up to this!

Very hooking, and I love your Bella.  I love that she still sounds the same, just slightly altered - as she should, given the AU.  Can't wait to see where you take this, hun.  C=

~ Ver

great cliffhanger!  can't wait for more!