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Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
great chapter i cant wiat for the next update! update soon please!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
great chapter!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Prologue
great chapterr!!!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
LOOOOOOOVED IIIIIIIIIIIIT!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
hmmm.......interesting......
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
LOL dude this is getting good. Okay is Edward dense or what? Don't play with the volturi....... BTW I hope the fight or disturbance with Bells and Tanya is explained...I don't like Tanya so I hope Bells gets a lick in...... teasing, slightly. But I am excited for more.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
I love this story. I cannot wait for them to find eachother again. There will be many questions and emotions to deal with for certain. I can't wait!!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
Oh girl this is my second time and it is great!!!!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Prologue
Hey I had to read again. I like where I think this is headed. I am very much so looking forward to more and more. I wish you happy writing and look forward to your new endevers once this is completed.
BTW... I think I found a typo for you. I am not sure, please don't be offended ,I just want to lend a hand. 14 lines up from I am sorry.....Yet he had bewitched me (MY) mind
Barbie
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Well, I'm baffled, but in a good way--I want to continue with this story.
Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
can u like put ch 3 out plzzzzzz>??????!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey
I am very glad that you like it so much and are seeming to have a great time reading it. I have no idea when chapter 3 (Bella's POV) will be up because I am currently waiting on Project Team Beta to catch up to how many chapters are posted. Currently we (PTB and Myself) are going through the first chapter for the second time so I should be sending them chapter 2 in no time. Hopefully everything goes well and quick and the next chapter will be up for you to read.
I am sorry for the delays, I hadn't intended to take so long when updating when I first submitted it. I suppose the fact that I am terrible at punctuation probably doesn't help much lol.
Anyway I will try to update soon and thanks again for the review.
Bubbbalicious_91 xo
Reviewer: SalividorSanchez (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Good start, I look forward to more.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Love the story
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
bring on bella :) i really like it by the way
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
great chapter. can't wait for the confortation.
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
ooooh...i can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
So the newborn that Tanya has taken an interest in is Bella? That's my guess.
Reviewer: bleachgirl4 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Wow. This story is awesome. I like the idea of it and I also like that you aren't immediately revealing Bella. The buildup of suspense is really good. Please update again soon!!!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
nice
Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
i absolutely love this!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Ack, looking forward to next chapter! lol, having Alice send Jasper up to help. cute.
Reviewer: nicoleyoo (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
omgosh its bella whos the newborn that they were talking about!
someone turned her and she got a power that the volutri wanted and she agreed to go with them
or someone from the volturi changed her !
omgosh ! genius !
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
I hate to complain, but I had to re-read the first two chapters just to find my place in the story again. Which was fine, but that might get old after a while. Hopefully updates will start to come with a little more frequency now??? *begging*
Yes, it's taking a while to find out what the heck is going on with Bella, but I always enjoy a good mystery. Most writers can't stand to wait long enough for the reader's curiosity to really start to boil, so bravo. It's definitely boiling now, though, so some illumination will be a welcome relief. :-)
Poor Edward. It must be infuriating that everyone can so easily block his powers. Makes me wonder what's so great about being a mind-reader if it's so easy for people to hide their thoughts. I guess there's always the weak-minded humans, though.
Can't wait for more. And it sounds like we'll get to see Bella (assuming she's the newborn) give Tanya the smack down. Most excellent!
Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks for the fantastic review. I know that the updates have been very spacey so far and I am really sorry for that but I am terrible at grammar and punctuation so I have been waiting for a Beta to pick my story up through Project Team Beta and I am happy to say that I got picked up yesterday. But due to there policy she has to start editing from the first chapter. I have made the changes she suggested on the first chapter (Esme's POV) and am waiting for her to go through it again to make sure it is ok before she can the next chapter which is the chapter you read today. I am unsure how fast she can Beta as she does it in her free time but I promise that most of the story is already finished it just needs to be Beta'd and stuff before it gets posted and I will try to et it done as fast as I can.
Thanks again.
Bubbalicious_91 xoxo
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
awsome again cant wait to read the next chapter soo will keep it quick thanx again 4 writting this awsome story! love it!!!
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