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Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Wow, great chapter. I am so loving this story. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Great chapter. I'm glad that you'll be updating more frequently.
Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Brill chapter....wish Bella actually kicked Tanya's ass though!!
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Yay! looking forward to this...
2 Shields huh? cool.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
love it! i hope you update sooon!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Well someone's going to go running to the Cullens to tattle. Too many people know now of Bella's presence. I was really hoping Bella could show off her gifts on Tanya, I'm disappointed.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
you have me addicted.
I love this story. :)
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
OMG! I love this! I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Wow I love it, I can't wait to see what happens next it's so wonderful to see a new Marcus other than a totally bored one.lol
Great work =D.
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
For a first fic... WOW, I am impressed! I think your writing style rocks and is a pleasure to read! I love this take on Bella, she deserves to be a tough strong Vamp, after what dearest Edward did!
Keep on writing please, I Love It so far! :) I can't wait to hear from Jasper
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Great chapter - looking forward to more.
Reviewer: onashing (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
it beaitful please update soon
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Wow, very well done. Can't wait for more. I like your premise, and I love yout style of writing. You have a new fan :) I'm sticking around. Please update soon.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Hmm I wonder what Bella (I assume she is the 6 month old guard) and Tanya were fighting about? So did Alice tell the Cullens what was going on on the way over and that's why they closed their minds to Edward?
Still liking this. Moving on ...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
Still liking this story. I'm guessing Alice has seen Bella in volterra? Can't wait for more. So glad I'm still behind...
Reviewer: bleachgirl4 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Wow. This story is so interesting! I love your Bella. PLEASE update again soon.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Prologue
Holy shit lady! Talk about starting with a cliffie??!!
Tons of questions in this, of course the Cullens are the past, but who is the present? The Volturi? Some other band of nomads?
Arrgh, so glad I just found this story so that I can just click *next*
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Very interesting - looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Jane_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
a great chapter, and a brilliant story. just wanted to let you know that you posted the same chapter twice in one.
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
oooohhh i cant wait
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Holy crow. That was intense and I freaking luv it! I am anxious for the next chap. I am hoping even thru her hurt and anger that they can get thru to her. She is luved byt them..... btw I think she should smack Tanya, never really liked her anyway. LOL
Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
I love this story. You must update soon. Please!
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
awwe esme's pov was so sad.. but i wonder what the volturi want..
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
WOW!!!! please make more! i love this story!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Great chapter, and the teaser was exactly that, a tease. Update quick.
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