“The other thing you should know about Isabella is that she means what she says. Provoke her again and she will dispose of you in seconds and trust me when I say that you wouldn’t be the first of our kind to suffer an untimely death by her hands.”..,.....OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I mean, Damn!!!

You have a very interesting plot going here and I'm looking forward to seeing where it all goes.  I've always liked Marcus and wished better things for him.  I am a bit surprised about the friendliness among the guard though....I had always thought they were cutthroat due their diet bringing out their competitive/possessive nature.

Perhaps that is another facet of Bella?  Since she changed the Cullen's so much, it will be interesting to see if/how she can change the Volturi. 

I'm also pleasantly surprised to see that your Bella is keeping to the character you created for her and her diet is more traditional.  Afterall, if she doesn't relate to her humanity, then she won't feel the need to abstain.  I know this may be considered a bold move with the readers, but I find that to be refreshingly honest in your writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much got the great review. I am very happy that you like it so far and agree with the characteristics that I have given Isabella for this fanfic. 

There is a lot of friendly behavior among the guards but i thought that was necessary since Isabella needed to build stronger relationships and to actually be happy to get out of her catatonic state and get over the Cullens as much as possible. If the guards had violent and overly competitive, as they have been portrayed in other fanfics, Isabella's 'recovery' wouldn't have happened, she wouldn't have all these different relationships and different people to help pull her through all the tuff times. And of course we wouldn't have all the interesting who love who situations and what not.  

I am glad to here that you like Isabella on human blood in away because it is true, if she doesn't have any or much human memories to relate too then she looses that piece of humanity that stays with most vampires at the beginning of their change. I also thought that since this is the Volturi we are talking about, and we all know how they like to feed, it would fit better in the story for Isabella to be 'like them' so that she wouldn't be outcast by the other vampires. 

Thanks for the review and please let me know what you think of the later chapters. 

Next chapter should be up in a few days depending on when my Beta's finish with the draft. 

bubbalicious_91 xo

great chapter.

*Does a happy dance in anticipation* Oh my dear this chapter was very revealing as well. Thank you for putting it in JPOV, it really did help me understand some people. Tanya really is starting to tick me off and you know I won't feel to bad when Bella kicks her ass...lol

A cat fight between Tanya and Isabella should be quite entertaining. I wonder what Edward will think? Will the Cullen's be able to convince Bella of the truth that they really do love her. Please update soon.

Oh this is great, I am totally digging evil Bella.  I really want her to follow through on her threat to Tanya! :)

Jaspers POV was perfect with this chapter to get to "see" all of the emotions.

 

I can't wait to find out what happens next... 

Excellent chapter - this story is so intense - love it.

very good got me on the edge of my seat to know how this plays out please update soon

Okay so I'm a new reader and this is already my favorite story that I have read here. It seems that Marcus is a major character in this story and that thrills me to no end. This plot is amazing and I LOVE what you've done with Bella's character and her relationship with Marcus I've always had a soft spot for some of the Volturi members and he's at the top of the list. Can't wait to see where this goes!

THIS WAS INCREDIBLE - I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! CANT WAIT FOR MORE - SO BELLA AND MARCUS HAVE A COMPLEX REALATIOSHIP -  ARE THEY MATED - IS IT SEXUAL?

Awesome chapter! Oh cant explain how much im looking forward to reading more :)

LOVIN' IT!! Bella is soooooooo awesome! i see she has made a connection with Marcus... great great great great great great!! moremoremoremoremoremore!!

Wow oh Wow Bella's story completly rocks!! I can't believe how much she went thru, I am totally amazed by how well the Volturi took to her and she even brought Marcus out of his little bubble. Hmmm well they do have quite a bit in common. I am just floored by how you are spinning this story...

LOL...god Tanya is such a dense bitch and it would have served her right to get her ass kicked. (hope that still may be a possibility, hint hint) I can't wait to see what happens next.