OMG!!!!!  Ahhh...left hanging just when things are going to heat up!!!!  Love it!!!!  Pleaase, please update soon.

luv it all can't wait for the next chapter.

I loved this chapter!  Seriously, I like this Bella so far.  She's strong and independent and she's got friends.  I am relieved that she and Marcus aren't mated, although I am getting a little worried about that.  The whole feeding thing seems like it was a big deal.  Trust Bella to get herself into a situation without knowing what it meant.  I'm kind of guessing it is fueling the whole mates rumor going around.  The other thing that is bothering me is Marcus himself and Jasper's reactions around him.  I get the feeling Marcus may be having more feelings around Bella than she realizes?  I don't know.  I'm kind of curious as to how you picture your Marcus to look, btw.  I have this kind of bad image in my head, because of the whole papery skin thing that they describe.  It just doesn't sound very appealing, you know? 

Thanks for the update!

Oh my goodness, what a great chapter! Wow, you've really prepared us for what's to come--and you're making the Volturi acutally likeable! You may even have me persuaded to let go of my B & E-only obsession!

wow is all i can say

nooooooooooooooooo u left a cliffi!!! oh but ur goood!!!!!

Love the story

Please kill Tanya

Umm OMG!!! I loved the fact that this was in Jzz's POV. I am still trying to figure out exactly why bells is so pissed. I mean I know sir dumbass (Edward) left her in the woods but there has to be something else. Right? I so can't wait for the next chapter.

I am so blown away with this story. I love it. Great writting.

I know in the end I would want a happy E and B ending, but I have always felt sorry for Marcus, who obviously loves Bella. Can't wait to see how E reacts. Please, don't let E do anything with Tanya. Tanya just needs to die.

Well I for one certainly hope Bella gets to rip Tanya's stupid head off. How has she survived for so long when she's so stupid? I'm intrigued by the relationship between Bela and Marcus. I am curious to see how that happened, hopefully it's paternal and not more. Or if it's more, I hope Marcus isn't creepy like Aro.

Thanks for the update!

Jasper's shock at the emotions radiating off of Bella makes me wanna slap him and scream "Duh! You idiot!" If they woulda taken one second to consider what they would have felt at being completely abandoned by the people they considered family and the love of their life, then it would be obvious that what they did was the wrong decision. ESPECIALLY Edward and the words he chose. What a dumbass! I love your Marcus though. And Felix and Demetri too.

Author's Response:

Yes I know that Jasper seems like a bit of an idiot at the moment but what you have to understand is that Edward never told his family what he said to Bella. As far as everyone, but Alice, knows Edward just told Bella that they were leaving to protect her and to keep her safe not that he didn't love her or anything like that. 

So Jasper is shocked because her emotions are so wild, consuming and i guess unhealthy in a way. He doesn't understand why Bella would be feeling that way she does if she understood that they left to protect her and starts to understand that Edward wasn't telling the truth. 

Edward is in for a big butt whopping. 

Thanks for the review.

bubbalicious_91 xo

You were right about the "feelings" needing to be expressed.  It was a good glimpse into what is to come I think.  As always I enjoyed your update!  I can't wait for the ball!

Is it wrong of me to want Bella to kill Tanya?

Author's Response:

No that's not wrong at all in fact I have had many fantasies about Isabella ripping Tanya's head off but it doesn't fit in with the story. It's okay though I can give you the next best thing, Tanya smack down. It will happen in later chapters but I promise it will come. lol.

Thanks for the review.

bubbalicious_91 xo