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Reviewer: izabo69 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Prologue
What has Marcus done??
Reviewer: skiwithme (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Prologue
Completely enjoying it so far. Nice work.
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Wow! Hurry the next one up will ya? lol
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
oooooooooo! I cant wait for edwards dumbfounded reaction
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Minx! Please update soon :)
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Holy crabapples. That was great. I love seeing into her thoughts. It's like you are there with her, going thru the motions. I so can't wait for more. BTW I like long chaps!!!
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
I enjoyed this, thank you, looking forward to the next.
Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Ahh... a cliffie. Please. you must update soon. Love this story!
Reviewer: Gerolling (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Wow long chapter! I really like the story so far.
Reviewer: jhrbrown (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
effing wonderful!!!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
I can't wait to figure out what the deal with sharing a meal is. I LOVE that dress btw. It's beautiful.
Reviewer: sezzyjane (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
i am so in love with this story =) pleaaase dont make me wait too long for an update!!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
This is by far the best chapter yet and the most pivital! I wonder what drinking with another vamp means? I hope he didn't trick her! But I only see bad things for the future! Oh dear! I wanted Marcus to be a father figure but it does NOT seem like that is where this is going. But what depth that adds to the story line! ; )
This story will for sure be one of those with like 1,000 or more reviews! It is like nothing I have read before! I admire your writing and creativity soooo much and I know others do/will too!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Very very interesting chapter. You answered a lot of questions regarding Bella and Marcus' relationship, but then added more with "sharing a kill" significance. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Okay I won't pretend that I'm not sad there's nothing going on with her and Marcus. But do I detect a little something in the sharing of the meal? I'll keep the hope alive. I'm really digging this story and I've read a few stories where Bella turned her back on the Cullens but this is first time I've wanted it to stay that way. I like Volturi Bella, she holds her own. I can't wait for the Edward showdown!
Reviewer: MybrandofHeroine_04 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Loving it. Im am certainly addicted!! Please update soon!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! I wanted more... I needed more. I loved this chapter! Loved the whole setting up of the ball. Had to laugh at Garrett.
I'm thinking that sharing a meal together is liked to engagement or something serious like that?
And your teaser was just plain awful. Now I'm going to be wondering whats going on until you update.
Oh please put me out of my misery soon!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
Wow, what a lot of emotions there. You wrote it incredibly well. So glad i'm a chapter behind so that I can just move on.
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Well first you should NEVER aplogize for having a long chapter? wft? You will never hear us (your devoted fans) complaning about that :)
Bella's dress is beautiful and perfect for her. I LOVE the marcus and bella interaction it was perfect. I'm so excited for her confrontation with Edward! EEEEeee
As always, it was a pleasure to read, thanks!
Reviewer: KayCullen 2009 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
omg luved it its become one of my fav stories excellent amazing lol
plz plz update soon
=)
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Whoo hoo I cant wait for the next chapter. This is also a great chapter please dont make us wait long am so excited for the next one
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Excellent - can't wait for the next chapter - love to see what Bella does to Edward.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
OMG it is hard for me to see Bella haveing so much hate to the Cullen's. But I can understand her pain and the reason she feels like she does. I just hope that in the chapters ahead maybe she will change.
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
Yep so I'm addicted to this story and I LOVE MARCUS so much it wouldn't dissappoint if he and bella had a romance I think he deserves LOVE !! Can't wait for the next chapter:)
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Preparations
I really liking your story, but am also nervous about what is going to happen. I hope you get the next chapter up soon.
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