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Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

I really do enjoy this story its very orginal. I look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

EEEEeee!  I can't rave about the awesomeness of this chapter enough!  I read it twice!  Yeah! *happy dance*  You were true to all of the characters, there was enough of angst without it being overwhelming.  And Carlisle interaction -PERFECT- ... Their conversation was just what I wanted, and Bella's dance with Marcus AWESOME! 

I do hope you will explain more of the sharing meal thing, I am dying to know!  Your choice of dresses I thought were great, they fit the characters for sure!

This was a super awesome chapter, you are always a pleasure to read!  Thanks for updating!!! Much love and kisses your way :) !  If I could I would give you a rating of 100!

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

This was a brilliant chapter and I am looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

This is just so incredibly sad,,, for Edward, Bella................You've got me teary eyed...

 

 

Reviewer: Queen_apples (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

I do like how the ball part was written. Hope you get the next part out a.s.a.p.

Reviewer: brit77 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Ok  I am usually a staunch E/B supporter with the occasional trip tp Jasper or Jacob land but I will have to say that the thought of Marcus and Bella is interesting... Both broken over prior loves and then them putting each other back together... Just seems right ... but I will still read this story no matter who is paired with whom well unless it is Aro he is just creepy!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

This is like my favorite story right now. I do want Edward to suffer for a bit, but in the end I hope there is a happy E and B story. I do feel for Marcus. Rosalie needs to mellow out lol.

Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

I love the song once apon a december... U know whats werid i was just thinking of that movie!!!!!

Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

I LOVE Once Upon A December and Anastasia! I also love this chapter and Icy Isabella! Esme's dress is beautiful too! I can't for the next chapter. I wonder what Isabella will do to Victoria.

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

another great chapter.

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

I like this so far. I have not seen a Bella that is so closely tied to the Volturi and one that is so different from the Bella we know.  I do hope that over time she becomes more like the Bella we know and love.  I am all about the HEA ending and I'm really really hoping you are too   : )

I hope to hear more from Japser's POV and Edward's as well.

PS. I love your banner; very fitting.  Kristen is absolutley beautiful in the original photo as well.

Reviewer: Much2shy142 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

I am loving your fic. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: shelby524 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

AMAZING!!!!   I can't wait for the next installment :-)  Get it to us as soon as you can because i can't wait to read this next chapter!!!

Reviewer: rungrady23 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

cant effin wait till next chapter!!!! always keeping me on edge!! love it!! keep it coming

Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

IT LOOKS LIKE MARCUS FOUND A NEW MATE.. OR SO HE THINKS.  CANT WAIT TILL NEXE CHAPTER. IT WOULD OF BEEN COOL TO GET EVERYBODYS POV ON ISABELLA

Reviewer: Mentalistecbm (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Bela's a bitch now. but it's a bit fair, i guess.

 

will she ever fuind out that marcus loves her?

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Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Interesting update.   I know that Edward feels sad and still loves Bella but he should leave her to Marcus.  He could apologise for saying what he did to her but, not for leaving as he was trying to protect her.  I like a strong and confident Bella, but Isabella here is spiteful.

Update soon.

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Wow!!

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Ohh how i love this story, cant wait to read more :D

Reviewer: TRACY6315 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

LOVE IT!!! can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Looks like Marcus is tryin' to get some lovin'. Don't know how I feel about that. Kinda nauseating.  It also looks like Tanya has a death wish. Stupid bitch. I've never been able to take a liking to her character. Can't wait for next chapter, looks like fun.

Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Wow, that was great.  I really wanted to have Bella rip into Rosalie.  Hopefully she will have the chance to knock her down a peg or 50.

Man, I a just loving this story.  Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Cant get enough of this story! Have fun at the formal!

Reviewer: KayCullen 2009 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

i luv this its amazing cany wait 2 c more bad ass bella hope that'll be around for a while longer

plz plz update soon

=)

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

“Don’t. Apologize. For him.” I hissed through gritted teeth and Carlisle recoiled slightly. “What he did and said is for him to apologize for, if he feels the need too, but I will not listen to you apologizing for the golden boy. You and every other member of your family should only be sorry for leaving me without a word of explanation, not for the words and actions of your son. That was his choice. That was what broke me completely. You hurt Carlisle, Esme hurt, Alice hurt but what he said to me, what he made me think for all those months we were together, was unforgiveable.”


 


You tell him, Bella! Stop covering for the little brat!

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