I LOVE ESME!!!! and I am soo glad that Bella didn't kiss Demetry!!  I am so glad Esme tore Edward a new one, he deserved it!!!  Kick ass!

Love it !! I cant wait till she realizes. I wish she wasn´t so stubborn sometimes!
xoxo

Tati

JESUS GIRL THAT WAS AWSOME - DEMTRI AND BELLA MAYBE - I WANT TO KNOW WHAT ESME SAID TO EDWARD -

 

I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! EDWARD IS GOING TO GET HIS AS KICKED!!!!!!!!!

love this ff omg! i cannot wait for the next chapter!! wow its really good!

Wow...that is all T can say...wow.

This has to be one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my entire lifetime (and I have read ALOT). Everything was beautifully written down with so much detail and emotion. I felt like I was the watching through the character's eyes as I read every amazing word you placed in this story. You write better than SM.

I also have absolutely no idea who I should bet on. I can't decide on who should keep Bella (or Isabella). I mean every paragraph makes me change my mind from wanting Bella to forgive Edward to wanting her to hate him for eternity. Though I am such a perfectionist that I might just bet on Edward because that would be the Canon thing to do.

Please update whenever you can! I truely enjoyed this story.

P.S. I hope you enjoy your formal!

Author's Response:

WOW. Thanks for the amazing review and comments you made on my writing style and everything. I've had a lot of compliments about my writing and detail but never, EVER, I have I been compared with a published author let alone SM, so your compliments mean a lot to me as I am trying to A) Decide on a career path and uni course for next year and B) have about a hundred idea's running through my head for my own novel/s. I just haven't got the confidence to put them down on paper and let people read them lol. 

Funny that you should say that you feel like your watching through the character's eyes because when I write, or read, everything plays through my head like a movie. All the movements, expressions, words, plot, personalities, appearances - everything is sitting there just behind my eyelids and writing them down is the only way I can get people to see what i see, and feel what I feel, so I feel very lucky, and relieved, that I can express myself so well that you, and other readers, relate, feel and like my story.

Lol even though I am writing the story and know what's going to happen sometimes I have to rewrite chapters because it leads down a totally different path to what would really work lol, so annoying sometimes.

Keep your eye out for an outtake that should be up sometime next week. I am writing it per request from the guys I have been talking to on the thread, it is Edward's POV of the ball chapter. I will be adding other outtakes down the line because some other characters POV are important but are unable to blend in nicely with the main story line.

Thanks for the awesome review.

bubbalicious_91 xoxo

P.S. Formal was awesome and so was the after party. I just got back from schoolies on the gold coast and sent the next chapter of to PTB so I should get that back sometime soon.

P.P.S you should come join us on the thread and have a chat.  

That was fantastic. I loved this chapter

 

Please keep up the great work

whoa. prob one of the best prologues EVER.

Often I just am confused after reading a prologue and want to read so I'm not but with yours I couldn't be any more eager to read the following chapters. I'm sure they will deliver!

I love Rosalie & Esme's Dresses, but I don't really like Alice's & Bella's dresses.

This was so cool!!!!!!! Jasper's POV was pretty cool. Watching a powerful, millennia old vampire plead with the newborn he loves was pretty neat! I know its weird but I really like how Bella goes by Isabella now  & how Marcus has an Italian nickname for her.

I really like how the Volturi & the guards are blocking their minds from Edward. I loved how Caius smiled coyly at Edward  & how Marcus' eyes were alight and that he was aware of everything going on, which is unlike him, but I like him this way!

I really liked Esme's POV. Its was well written.

I love the tangled web with Marcus and the Volturi.... and the teaser!  Ahh!

Mmmm, Enjoyed that.  Nice party, Nice dancing to drive that dagger home.  I'd love to read the conversation that The Cullens will have now that Bella has spilled the beans on what she believes vs what Edward told them.  Wonder what you have in mind for Marcus and Carlisle, what history is there. Looking forard to the rest, that teaser was great.