Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
I really liked this chapter...I hope we get to hear exactly what Esme was yelling at Edward.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
Great writing!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Wow. It's nice to see some emotions besides hate coming from Bella. Can't wait for EPOV.
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Wow. I am loving this story. I can't believe she just took Victoria down like that in front of everyone. Of course it was totally deserved and Victoria needed to be taken down. I totally want to know what Esme said to Edward. I am glad someone finally told him a thing or two. Of course I was screaming to myself........don't kiss Demetri, don't do it. I will be waiting to see what happens from here. Great story!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
OOOOOOOh! I can't wait for the next chapter. An ass kicking is exactly what Edward needs right now.
I was shocked at Esmes actions. Well done! The fact she was the one that lost it made it even more so shocking. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: cgrbuddon (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Love it....it's fun to see where this is going....please update soon...
thanks!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
This is a pretty darn good little tale! Love that Marcus changed Bella and brought him out of his stupor. I'm hoping Marcus is like the Dad figure and not the lover figure. Marcus was pretty cool in the movie. Great writing!
Joanie
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
I do believe Bella is now among the undead! So who changed her? The Volturi? Interesting!!
*hugs*
Joanie
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Interesting update. But I am so tired of Edward being treated badly for making an error, and for being blamed for his mistakes and for what happened to Bella. Bella made her own choices just like he did and they were both wrong.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Great update. Poor Edward. I can only imagine the trauma he has been forced to endure by listening to everybody else's thoughts. Their family has been torn apart. I know Bella is jaded, but she IS smart. And she is still in love with Edward. How can she not be affected by him. She is so ambivilent. How can she not pay attention to what Esme is yelling at him? I don't understand how she isn't hanging on every word. And if she did put herself into a trance and not listen, she is a vampire, so wouldn't she be able to remember every word? She needs to simply talk to them. She doesn't want the drama but yet she is dragging it on. How can she even thikn about mating with somebody else when she is still in love with Edward. He is right there. How can she not even attempt to pursue a reconciliation?
As you can see, I feel very invested in this story. I LOVE it. I am eager to read more!!!!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
This is very interesting. :) Great writing.
Joanie
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
go esme... that lil prick should get way more.. good chapter
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
aswome story beautifully written!!!
wtm
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
I can't wait to see what else power Bella has. And it is about time they make Edward uphold to his mistakes he made. As much as I love Edward and I understand why he thought he had to do it he was wrong. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: amo (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
oooooh snap! edwards gunna get it great chapter
Reviewer: tarin22 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
this is such a great story! thanks for writing!
Reviewer: candys_dreams (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
ooo Intriguing, Again well written and a pleasure to read, Its good to see how Esme would have felt about them leaving :)
Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
oh How I love this story cant wait for your next update
Reviewer: candys_dreams (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Prologue
Ohh this chapter is such a tease lol, very well written and leaves you yearning for more.
can not wait to read the next chapter :)
Reviewer: serenity87 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Awesome story! =) I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Loved it and can't wait for more. Hope everyone airs out their feelings and that in the end there will be redemption (love that word) for our beloved characters. I would say for Edward, but he doesn't seem to be the only one in need of it in one manner or another.
Reviewer: Vanity Fair (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Love it! Update soon!
Reviewer: shefelldown (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
really enjoying the story. you're taking a different angle on post new moon bella than i've ever seen, very imaginative. you're actually making me like the volturi!
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
lovin this, and by the way, love the fact that it was Bela who killed Victoria you barely ever get that but for me i feel that it's the way it should be if Bella were to be changed after Edward leaves. LOVIN IT
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
WOW! What a well-written chapter, that leaves a cliff-hanger, but also explained quite a few things. This is a great story, very exciting and quite different,.. I'm a big fan.
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