Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Holy crap! Wow that chapter finally answered a lot of questions. Now what did sharing the blood and venom of the kill do to bind them together? And if Marcus really loves her why would he decieve her?
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review - really appreciate it.
The venom, shared kill thing will be revealed in two chapters time and Marcus really isn't decieving her per se. He just letting her work through her emotions and sort things out for herself. He doesn't want to pressure her lest that scare her away. He really his looking out for her and trying to help her at the same time.
thanks again.
bubbalicious_91 xo
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
AWESOME CHAPTER.. EDWARD GOT WHAT HE DESERVED. I ALWAYS THOUGHT HE GOT AWAY WITH EVERYTHING SO EASILY. AT LEAST HIS FAMILY IS MAD TO.. I CANT WAit TO SEE HOW THIS WEB PLAYS OUT.. THAT SUCKS YOU WONT UPDATE FOR A FEW WEEKS.. BUT ILL BE WAITING
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
WELL EDWARD GOT A WELL DESERVED ASS KICKING - SO MARCUS REALLY LOVES HER AS SO DOES DEMTRI - THIS SHOULD BE INTERESTING!
INCREDIBLE CHAPTER - CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!
TAMMY
Author's Response: Thanks Tammy I'm glad you liked it. Lol this chapter has only been up for a few hours and i've already almost 300 people read it and have had 12 reviews on it lol - kind of a low number of reviews compared to the number of people that read it but what cha gonna do about it? lol
just finishing up the last couple of paragraphs on the next chapter and then going to be sending it off to PTB before working on the one-shot i mentioned in the chapter notes and on the thread.
Thanks for the review
bubbalicious_91
P.S. I hope your up for another action packed drama fest in the next chapter. ;)
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Well all I can say is about time someone beat the heck out of Edward. And I am glad that Edward gets to see that he might have to fight to get Bella to love him again if she will ever. And that he is not the only person that will fight for her love. So can't wait for more. And I love the teaser.
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
O boy. What a mighty web we weave.
Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
aww man now i have to wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!! ;)
i really luv your story!!!
Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Cool chapter... I'm curious about Marcus and Bella though....
Please update again soon =D.
Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Great chapter...I'm kinda speechless and don't know what else to say.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
I beg of you, please grace us again with another EPOV chapter. This was the best of all by far. Just amazing.
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
wow, Emmett should have at least tore out his tongue for saying he didn't love Bella!! Good chapter, have a safe move!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Wow, great update!! It's weird picturing Bella with Marcus though, I only have the image of the actor who played Marcus in my head especially since he is a lot older. But excited to see where this is going, yay updates!
Author's Response: Lol thanks for the review. I just had this same conversation with someone who reviewed on ffnet. I don't like the image of Marcus in the movie as he is so old and a lot different to the Marcus I pictured reading the books. My Marcus kind of looks like a cross between Henry Cavill (From the TV show Tudors) and Viggo Mortensen (Aragon from the Lord of the Rings) My Marcus is more Henry Cavill than Viggo but yeah that's just my image.
thanks again.
bubbalicious_91 xo
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
great chapter! this is my favorite chapter so far!! i cant wait to see how everyone reacts to what jasper just said!! im so excited for the next chapter! update soon please!
Reviewer: citcat277 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Love it love it love it update soon please
Reviewer: aepayne2009 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
plz add more chapters! plz
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
cool chapter! keep it up!
Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Aww cant't wait for the next chapter, I love the preview!
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Ohhh!!! Well, that was a lovely and surprising chapter! I may just have to read it again! I love the Demetri/Bella scene. I am not a fan of love triangles at all, but come on I mean Bella is awesome... And Edward is just dumb for not jumping all over that to begin with! I would be all over Demetri, over Felix anyway.
I love love love the Esme, interaction! It was perfect, and so how Esme would have reacted!
The Victoria bit worked, it was a good opportunity to take and show off Bella's talents.
Always a pleasure, thanks for updating!
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Very intense chapter - looking forward to more.
Reviewer: DeltaFC101 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
I really like it. Please write more.
Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
1 word awesome!!!!
plz update soon :)
Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
I am so totally interested to see what happens next...great writing!!
Reviewer: lovergirl19 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
PLEASE hurry up and update! I am dying to find out what happens next...I'm actually upset that I didn't find such a great story when it was already finished so I wouldn't have so many questions unanswered!
What did Esme ay to Edward?
What is Bella's additional gift(s)?
How does Marcus really feel about her?
What is the meaning of a shared feeding? Are they now mates?
What's the status of Bella's relationship to the Cullens and everyone else?
Why was everyone so upset?
etc.....etc....etc... lol
I am so glad I found a story where Bella isn't being all mopey and instantly forgiving everyone...it's healthy to be angry and do something about and powerful Bella is awesome!
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Edward's gonna get it
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Sooo, what on earth is going on in Edward's head? Will he fight for her or give up? What did Isabella go and do by sharing the meal with Marcus? Intrigue! Fun story (I like the dose of angst going on here, and love the fact that Bella's even more powerful than the old geezers of the Volturi!), keep up the good work!
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