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Reviewer: tink07 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Wow, this is amazing, please more, dont hold out on us!!
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Wow, what a chapter! Very well written, very insightful. And the teaser! Oh my goodness, how exciting that chapter's looking!
I hope you have an easy time with your move, and I look forward to more of this wonderful story!
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Very good chapter - good to have some things explained. Can't wait for next chapter. Hope your move goes well.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
love it
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
I loved this chapter. Your writing just keeps getting better. I love what was revealed about Bella's position in the Volturi. Marcus wants Bella as a mate, this could be very interesting. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
I like this story!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
GREAT, GREAT, AND GREAT AGAIN. CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IF HE KISSES HER.
Reviewer: tarin22 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
i like, as usual. this is my favorite ongoing story, and i definitely can't wait til the next post!
Take care, happy holidays, thanks for writing.
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
lovin it
Reviewer: Queen_apples (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
omg I'm wondering if Bella is going to be with Marcus or Edward
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee write more!:) it's realy good... i think bella should b with markus
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
How on earth will such a f-ed up Bella ever be fixable? Awesome EPOV, btw.
Reviewer: mlover25 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Ok you have to come back soon! Cant wait to see what Bella does.
Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
OH wow things are just getting started I cant wait to see what's next
Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
This has been a great story from the start and just keeps getting better. I love the person Bella will become because of her personal strengths and weaknesses. Her connections to the Volturi have me rooting for them to have one of their own become her new love and mate but it tears me to have Edward left out in the cold. Really well done. Eagerly awaiting the one-shot you will post as well as the upcoming chapters.
Reviewer: rungrady23 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
OMG I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I WANT BELLA AND EDWARD AND NO ONE ELES!!!!
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
I love that you let the boys take their turns on Edward. I know if Alice had gotten to him she would have just ripped his head off and that is just more problems lol
I like hearing jaspers insight to how others feel for Bella. I wasnt sure how Marcus had felt for her but I wonder if she doesnt reciprocate if that will cause a lot of problems within the Volturi. I suspect Aro will atleast try to protect her. I do want to know more about exactly what sharing blood/venom means. You've only touched upon it a bit and all I've gotten it that its a bigger thing than Bella suspects it to be.
Good luck moving!!
Reviewer: DesiCullen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
'Ruller of the world...' Dun dun dun.
I can't for more, really awesome story. I think this is the first story I've read that's had me so conflicted. I mean sure I like the idea of Bella and Edward living all happy ever after and all that shit but I'm also secretly chanting for Marcus and a little for Demetri in the back of my head. This story completely gave a new light to Marcus and I love it.
Great story. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: skiwithme (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
I'm lovin' the story! Can't wait for new chapters.
Reviewer: nolie02 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
great story!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
OOOOOOOOOH shit! That is a killer teaser!! I want more!!
Good luck with the move, I hope it goes well and that you can update again soon.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Well it's good that Edward understands just how close he is to losing Bella. And I'm glad that the truth is out there for the rest of the family, I'm sure some things make more sense now. I'm glad that Aro just feels fatherly affection for Bella, and I'm glad to get my suspicions confirmed with Marcus. Honestly it kind of seems like he'd be a better choice for Bella right now. He knows what it's like to lose a mate and I'm sure he would never, ever take Bella for granted and would cherish her every minute. He's never lied to her or hurt her, or done anything but have her best interests at heart. Edward, not so much. I rather like Marcus, I have to admit.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Saar (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
wow i love this serie
its amazing. good job
Reviewer: Livie (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Wow, now we're getting to the good stuff! The idea of Marcus and Bella is just creepy to me, all I can picture is the Marcus in the movie New Moon and it totally freaks me out!! LOL! Looking forward to the next installment!
Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
Bravo!
Hope your move goes smoothly...and your back here soon enough!
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