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Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Ooh please don't let Emmett get hurt. I can't wait to see how Bella & Edward find their way back from this. Please update soon.
Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Harsh Goodbyes
Marcus has been so miserable for so long...he deserves Bella so much more than that sniveling brat Edward does. I wish she'd stay with him, but it seems inevitable for her to get back with Edward. If we beg enough, will you let Marcus keep her? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
Reviewer: Peppz19 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Ah! I hope to read more soon this is.... beautiful.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Wow. This was great. I really feel so invested in these two. I can't wait to read were they go from here!
Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
I WANT MORE!!!!!!
Reviewer: godofchaos (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Prologue
nothing other to say; it's awsome
Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
First review sorry... I was just so enthrawled in your story. I very much enjoy your writing... but I had to stop in order to beg. Please please please don't let Bella forgive Edward, or if she does please don't let her be a weinie and get back with him. You have made Marcus care for her so much I think they could heal eachother. They both deserve some peace and we all know that Edward is a tard and wont change. Even if you decided to put her with Demetri please just not Edward for goodness sake. What he did was worse than infidelity. It was almost abusive! Thats my two cents. I have more but I'll just give you two.
Reviewer: hockeywife87 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
wow...this is a good story! (;
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Intense chapter this was. Poor Emmett, I hope he makes out Alive.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
great chapter! update soon!!!
Reviewer: iconicdoxi (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Yes, Esme. Leave Bella to face things alone and save your own ass. That's what the Cullens do best - abandon people.
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP...THIS IS GETTING GOOD!! AND DON'T LET EMMETT DIE!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Wow, the bond is well and truly broken. It's rather fascinating to think about actually. The ramifications... Marcus is getting on my nerves. He should just leave well enough alone now, he got what he wanted, didn't he? Well, I guess he doesn't realize it yet, but once he does it seems like leaving the Cullen family alon would be the most prudent thing.
Author's Response: Hey thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad to see your still following my stories since I have had a number of people drop it because of my infrequent updating. Anyway enough about that...yes Marcus has been getting on a lot of people nerves (as well as mine) but he has not yet got what he wanted and is blaming the Cullen's, more specifically Edward, for this. Although I cannot tell you exactly what has happened on Bella's side of the story and why Marcus has not gotten what he thought out of Bella's bond breaking it will be in the next chapter that I am currently about two pages into. Hopefully I will have that out sooner rather then later for you.
Thanks again for R&R-ing
Jessica AKA bubbalicious_91
Reviewer: iconicdoxi (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 7: Termination and Realisation
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Escape
Exciting update. Bella deserves whatever happens to her. I don't see why the Volturi would blame the Cullens for what they and Bella did.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 9: Truths - Part 2
Okay, so I'm totally picturing Eric Northman form True Blood as Marcus and it makes the whole situation really enjoyable. I may be able to forget Edward if Eric and Marcus become one in the same. However, I love the Cullens to much to push Edward aside, hope he comes back.
Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Truths
I know this sounds bad, but I'm really hoping there is a Bella/Dem lemon or a Bella/Marcus lemon. Please....
Thanks for much for writing! It's awesome.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: Trouble
Very interesting to see that Kate referred to Bella as Alice's best friend; Alice truly misses her.
Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 2: Strange
Oh, Bella's handing it to Tanya! I'm excited to find out why. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Summons
I loved it! You don't usually see Esme's point of view unless it's an Esme/Carlisle story. This was great to see.
Reviewer: liz (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Broken Again
Update pease!!! I love this story!! dont keep us waiting to long. :D
Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Broken Again
Please don't make us wait that long for an update... This is one of my favorite stories.
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Broken Again
agonizing! update please!
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