Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
This Chapter was awesome I really enjoyed it... Can't wait for the next chapter =D.
Reviewer: 123xoxo3211 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
your story is really good and i can't wait for the next chapter. x
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Omg imsoooo happ you posd agaoin try to do t sooner I hate to have to reread the las 3 ch to remember!!!! LOVE THE STORY THOUGH TOTAL ORIGINAL!!!
Reviewer: caerulia (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
I really love your characterization of Carlile...keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
yeah am glad your back but. . . why is bella acting like Edward is dead when he is not. Isn t he still her mate how is that going to work
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
That was a big step forward I think! Much still needs to be said though. Thank you for updating! I really enjoyed the visit to the basement and seeing Didyme's portraits and dress :) Thanks
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
What a wonderful chapter. I loved Bella's interaction with Marcus, they are sweet together. I'm very interested to watch their relationhip grow and maybe become intimate. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.
Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
cool plot. does this end up as e/b though? I keep thinking about how old marcus is and the thought of him and bella are grossing me out! LOL
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Hmmm. Is that what Carlise is really up to? Interesting.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
marcus and bella are so lovley together!
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Wow, this was worth the wait--but in between I was pleased to read Through Their Eyes a week or so ago, I positively reviewed that tidbit. I"m still Team Edward all the way and hoping things will swing in that direction, but you know best how you want this story to resolve itself and I"m resigned to Bella being with Marcus, though I will cry!
Reviewer: KayCullen 2009 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
i luv it i luv it its excellents cany wait til th next chapter its gona b so funny wae th trainin hope bella enihalates tanya an a rely lik bella wae marcus but r u keepin it tha wae its so torn lol
plz plz update soon
=)
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Nice chapter!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Hmmm....
I can't tell if Bella really wants to sever her connection to the Cullens or not...
I also can't tell if Marcus really loves Bella or is he just settling?
Reviewer: novelidea (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
I think Bella is already bonded to Edward. They better be!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
LOVE THE CHAPTER - HATE JANE ALSO
I WANTED THEM TO KISS - I WANT THEM TOGEATHER - I AM TEAM EDWARD - HE HAD HIS CHANCE AND BLEW IT
I WANT BELLA TO HAPPY WITH MARCUS AND MASTER TO JANE!!!!!!!!!
I ALSO WANT BELLA AND MARCUS TO HAVE SOME STEAMY HOT FUN!!!
TAMMY
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
This is so interesting and well written! I love Bella like this and it such a great alternative for her. *hehe*
Joanie
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Lovely lovely update, I'm enjoying it a lot actually. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
That dress is awesome!! But not no where as good as this chapter! The M/B action here had me smiling and swooning. I wish someone who say the things he said to Bella to me! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Very well done. I knew it! I knew that sharing a meal was something more serious than Bella thought it was. And I noticed that Marcus didn't say anything to bella when she assumed that her bonds changing with Carlisle was in a negative direction. Does that mean that those bonds are strengthening?
Can't wait for more.... I'm excited to get Edwards POV.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
I enjoyed reading the interaction between Marcus and Bella. So much so that I almost hope she winds up with him.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
Didyme must have been one hell of a woman to still have the loyalty of so many years after her death. It was wonderful to read about Marcus's backstory. I can't help but wonder though just what kind of bond Marcus sees between Bella and Edward. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: twishiz182 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
the story is good, but whats going on? is this a story for Bella and Marcus or will Bella fall back in love with Edward?
Reviewer: Queen_apples (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings
luved it alot. i will keep my fingers crossed that bella and marcus endup 2 gether.
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