Can't wait to see what trouble Bella and Rose get themselves into.

Very nicely written.

naughty rosalie ;) great story

Ok! I love your Marcus! This really is one of the best stories I have read! Such a new story line!

I really am enjoying your story.  I would hate to see Bella end up with marcus....even if your version is hot. :)

GIVE US MORE!!! THIS IS GREAT!!! but please have her ultimately choose to help Edward and his family!!

Wow this was a good POV. And I am keeping my fingers crossed that this may be a turning point for Bella. Maybe with this she knows she can be free if she would just side with the Cullens and find a way to leave. Can't wait for more.

None of these guys are even showing that they are sorry....that's what I don't get...they expect Bella to just leap into their arms and forgive which is what she has always done but they are doing nothing to make ammends.

They are behaving as though the reason that they have connected competely with Bella is due to her own resistance but yet in still their hesistant actions and attitudes (mirrioring the past) is what is causing this. Rose seems the most aware of this fact. I am enjoying throughly the long uphill battle that they face. Bella is worth it and they need to both realize and act like it.

On another not...I was totally hoping she would have kicked Tanya's ass instead of just drawing with her so many times lol

 

I just found your story today and spent all day reading what you have so far.  I love it!! I am completely addicted!!! Your Marcus is fantastically gorgeous!!! I'm glad you put up a picture cause I kept imagining that yucky frankenstein looking guy from the movie!! Ewwww!  Also I am finding myself strangely rooting for Marcus... What?!!! He is so good to her and knows how it feels to be without the one you love! And when I saw that picture that really made me root for him!!  Edward and Bella really need to talk!! Edward has alot of groveling and apologising to do!! He needs to explain everything to her!! Of course I am ultimately an Edward fan but you are making it very hard to root for him when he is not fighting very hard for her...Again!!!  Come on and make Edward Man-up!!! How is Bella ever going to hurt Marcus and leave him without a mate again?!!  I'm so confused...hee hee.. Cannot wait for more chapters!   Great story!!!!

Great chapter, but i have a question? Do you speak Italian? i speak italian and if you need help with anything, i will be more than happy to help, but i do love this story

I love this story. let me list a few of what i love about this story:

 

Bella, shows how strong she is and that she does not need Edward to survive. She is willing to kick his butt if he needs to be.

She came to the conclusion that he is not the god she once thought.

She is a powerful woman, that any man would love to have.

She has more options of a mate besides Edward after he left her ass.

It was also good that the brotehrs beat the hell out of him, because of him, she hates them, and they can't help, but to love her.

 

I am all the way Team- Edward, but i just like how you put toget this story, how there are other options inthe vampire world, and she can be happy. She does not have to be hidden behind Edward, she is more powerful than Edward and she will find her happy ending who ever she is with. Although she would be one hell of a ruler.

I'll admit it was a bit confusing at times to read RPOV. I had to go back a few times to recall what was going on. Really looking forward to seeing the "great escape" from BPOV.

great chapter! update soon!!

great chapter but I wanted a more violent fight with Tanya... she needs her ass really handed to her by Bella.

Also, I get hte feeling your leaning towards E/B but I am team Marcus all the way. He really cares for her. Always has. Edward blew his chance.