Very good! it was an amazing story.. I so wished you would have continued it or written more to show her continued adjustment to being a vampire or until their marriage but i will take what i can get ! :)

That was a great read! Thanks so much. I think you should contact the Early Turnings series creator and suggest your story for the archives! Great job.

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Author's Response:

Ooh thank you so much! I'm so glad people like it, because I feel like it's one of the best things I've written so far,  which in itself makes me even more nervous about it :D

I don't think I've seen that series yet -- I'll have to find it :D Regardless, i'm not very good with the whole "hey, look at me!" thing.

I'm glad Edward has found forgiveness for Jasper. I'm glad he's found peace within himself, too.

Bella may be a newborn, and she may have mood swings, but she's still tenacious when she wants to be! 'Make what official?'

Edward has a tiger by the tail. He'd better hold on tight!

She's awake! Wonderful!

And yes, Edward has done some growing up.

Uh oh! Looks like Sam is back, and may have brought reinforcements.

Doubts and fears: Edward is plagued by them. He's in his own personal hell right now. It was sweet when he was inspecting her. He's a little like a new father with his first precious baby.

Esme and Carlisle are great actors. They're right, though. Charlie has no legal right to make Bella come home.

I sympathize with all of them right now, but the practical side of me says that this is what Bella wanted, even if it wasn't the way she wanted it. Holding a grudge isn't attractive. I know that the incident is still 'fresh', but I want Edward to eventually let go of his anger. I want him to eventually be thrilled that Bella is his forever. I fear that if he keeps being angry about it after the change is complete, that he'll make Bella feel unwanted.

What an awesome story!!!!! I absolutly loved it! Keep up the great work!

So good.  Yum!