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Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
*lol* Smoke'nStrokeward? That's fitting. Consider that's all he's doing, the tease! Bella may be the one baring all and doing strip tease from her apartment, but Edward's the one teasing and stringing her along. And one question kept nagging at me.......... why on earth would Edward have a pair of mini binoculars in his office?! City skyline? Watching people buying hot dogs? *grin*
I like reading EPOV... it provides great insight into what was going on in Edward's head. Please continue soon!
Author's Response: I do think that being on the 12th floor in a glass encased office surrounded by a beautiful skyline and skyscrapers, why not have binocs?
And EPOV is my fave!
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!
SO HOT! SO MUCH SEXUAL TENSION!
i cant wait for more of this!!! please dont leave us waiting for too long???
please??? (i will get on my knees and beg if i must!)
<3's for you!!!
Author's Response: Right on, mission accomplished!
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Well, now I have to know what ruffled Bella's feathers so much...
Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough. ;)
Reviewer: pnayz4life (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
oooo! I can't wait to find out what got Bella's knickers in a twist after the elevator incident. I also couldn't help but laugh when she left Edward hanging like that. It also makes sense from her POV because sometimes, like the case of Edward, men are clueless. hehehe
Keep the maginative juices flowing and update soon!! ^_^
Author's Response: Great review, thank you!
Reviewer: black_rose (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
This chapter was great. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Please update again as soon as possible.
Author's Response: I have a seperate o/s in the queue called Handcuffs and Heartstrings, but I'll get chapter 3 submitted once H&H is validated.
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Hahahaha!! Cocky little SOB! That was so great! I can't wait to read more soon! Such a great read!
Author's Response: They're both a bit cocky from time to time that's what makes them so fun.
Reviewer: GinaJas (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
AAAHHH! Don't leave poor Edward (and ME!!!) hanging???!!! Loved it!
Author's Response: There's more to come, but I'm waiting for a seperate one-shot to be validated first.
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 1-I Get Off
OMFG! I think MY panties just exploded! Holy hell, that was HOTTTT! Um, wow, yeah! Awesome story! On to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Heheheh...thanks much!!!
Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Marry me?
Author's Response: Haha, well that's a first! I have one fan living in mah "hot pocket" with Eddie and one that strips for me, but I acutally have 3 ficwifey's already. I do, however, appreciate the offer. =D
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 1-I Get Off
yes that was fuckhot. lol.
Author's Response: Summed it right up, huh? ;)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Well he is definitely hot but he just needs to go to her that is all she ever wanted.
Author's Response: Yeah, he might grow a bigger pair soon.
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Hot Hot Hot!! Keep it goin' girly!! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!! Whew!!!
Author's Response: Lot's of good stuff is on the horizon. ;)
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
hahaha love the ending. so funny!
cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Heheh, poor Eddie!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
I so love this story
you might write more soon
Author's Response: There is more on the way, thank you!
Reviewer: wingschick (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 1-I Get Off
Oh my, what is going on w/ Bella? If I were her I would do the nightly thing then raise my finger to tell him to wait and then make my way over to the office to surprise the hell out of him.
Author's Response: Haha, I like the way you think.
Reviewer: irishwitch (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
This story is great so far...very hot and good characters. I look forward to where you take this.
S.
Author's Response: Thank you, these kids are a lot of fun.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Well done!
Author's Response: Kewl, thanks!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
wow!!!!!!
Author's Response: Mmmmhmmm
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
WOOT WOOT!!!
Author's Response: Haha, Thanks!!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
I can't get enough! If you had left this a one-shot I would have DIED! But I hope they get together soon - I love the idea of window sex and more!!!
Author's Response: Awww..thank you!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
Ha ha ha, He is Hillarious, I love how you have him written. He needs to man up and talk to her or she needs to get sassy and beckon him over to her place threw the window. I wonder if he would have enough balls to go to her if she did beckon him over.
Author's Response: Hmmm...we shall have to see if Eddie finally grows a pair. lol
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
First, I've got to say that I FUCKING LOVE this story!!!!!!
Love the nickname, too.
Some favorites from this chapter:
"I wanted nothing more at that moment than to unload in her hot box, but I seriously needed to banish that thought from my mind as I was now this woman's boss."
"Oh, fuck me! No, really, FUCK ME!"
"Oh, fuck me, Jesus! And she likes it in the ass too? I think I need to marry this woman! Well, so much for slow and steady."
I hope Edward realizes Bella was jealous and that's why she gave him a show.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, don't let Edward hook up with Tanya again!!!! Please??????? Not even a kiss, Please??? I hate her with a passion, and that would hurt Bella too much.
Author's Response: Yay, that makes me all shades of happy that you love IGO so much!! Thanks for an awesome review.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl
I LOVE EPOV!! Hot...Bella was a little snarked by Tanya....snicker...poor Edward and his raging...uh. hormones....hey ~ any way we could turn the tables a little here? I wonder how long Bella would hold out if Edward put on his own strip and stroke show....
Okay...now I'm just all flustered thinking about that.
Love this story...update SOON!
Author's Response: Trust me the thought has crossed my mind, but unfortunately thats not a good idea when your name is written across the building. But have no fear, there is lots more yum yums to cum. ;)
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1-I Get Off
Fuckhot is the word. *grin* I love it! It's intense, it's provocative, it's sensual... really well written and an even more enjoyable read. Please, more!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the awesome words of encouragement and descriptives!
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1-I Get Off
Nice! You left us on a small cliffhanger with his words there, but thank goodness she knows for sure that it is him watching every night. lol. I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: You can imagine how peeps felt with that cliffie when this was only a one-shot. ;)
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