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Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2012 11:34 AM · On: Angel
How grateful Carlisle was and would always be, to Elizabeth Masen's love for Edward, no matter the cost for her own life! Elizabeth had so wanted a happy life for her son ---growing up, falling in love, marrying and having a family! Maybe in heaven, Elizabeth begged God to send Bella to Edward and the Cullens, almost a 100 years later?!
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Angel
i like it. it is a good interpretation of what happened and i believe it to be very accurate to what imforation is given.
dreamer. <#
Reviewer: Yvi-sama (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Angel
I liked it. the only thing that appears a little odd is, that Carlisle takes her to the morgue while she is still faintly alive.
Reviewer: Yvi-sama (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Angel
I liked it. the only thing that appears a little odd is, that Carlisle takes her to the morgue while she is still faintly alive.
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Angel
I would of thought that Carlisle would of treated Elizabeth/Edward before, and he had been thinking of changing someone for a long time beforehand.
I like how you mentioned the green eyes!
Also, how you stuck with that he made several bite marks to micmic the marks Carlisle had.
Reviewer: SapphireEyes (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Angel
Really lovely. You did a good job bringing Carlisle's conflict to life.
Reviewer: kibby (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 11:24 PM · On: Angel
Marauder, this is wonderful and intriguing idea for a series. Carlisle is such a great character that we rarely get to see inside of and you have captured him so well. You've also set up his conflict for later as he doubts his decision about changing Edward. I look forward to reading all in your series. Thanks! xoxokibby
Reviewer: MissMason0001 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Angel
I think you really captured Carlisle's character in your writing. Great job, and I definitely want to read more of your work in the future!
Author's Response: I'm glad you approve of Carlisle's characterization! And don't worry, there's more to come :)
Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Angel
Woah. This was a really good one shot. And I read a lot of one shots. I love one shots. :D
Author's Response: Wow a compliment from a one-shot expert! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: MissJedi (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 09:14 PM · On: Angel
This was different than what I had imagined it to be like, but that is to expected when reading someone elses work. I do like this, but I kind of want more of it...
Author's Response: There is a companion story in queue right now :) I wonder, what is it that you expected? I'm only curious to see if your hesitation to like this story stems from a characterization/plot error of mine.
Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 07:32 PM · On: Angel
Carlisle is always awesome and I love reading about him and I love how you showed his caring side!
Author's Response: Carlisle is indeed awesome. I'm glad you liked this characterization of him :) Thank you so much!
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 07:09 PM · On: Angel
Terrific! I love Carlisle stories and you've certainly done him justice! I loved your line: "I would be lying if I say my knees still do not shake at the effort of controlling myself". It shows that Carlisle is still fighting against his instincts, something you don't see very often and thus don't appreciate it him. As I said, very very well written! Are you planning on continuing? I hope so!
Author's Response: First, thank you for your review and your compliments! I do intend on continuing several Carlisle-featured stories. I am preparing to write a one-shot (sometimes two) for every vampire in the Cullen family. I hope you'll enjoy those as well! Thank you again!
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 10:56 AM · On: Angel
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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