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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
that was totally hot! cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was a wonderful chapter and the little scene of Edward helping Jasper move is great. It was perfect to see some lemons between Edward and Bella, and it got a little heated finally. Keep up the Great Work! Nice Job!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
whoa, what happened to going slowly? yikes! presume much, Bella? (but hey, he's a dude, of COURSE he wants sex!) I'm surprised she was ballsy enough to bring it up!
Many moons ago, I lived near an Air Force and an army base in the same town. Let's just say the guys were a LONG way from home, the climate was damned cold, and they were eager for friends. My roommate's friend worked on the base, so she would check out the guys medical records to make sure they were clean before giving us the OK to date them! lol.....so much for privacy, but a girl's gotta protect herself, right??? :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
who are you kidding? reviews are so NOT better than sweaty army edward! :)
Man, she caved in pretty damned fast, didn't she?? but who could resist baldy edward, all manly and smelly and save-the-country?? we women don't stand a chance. :))
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Bella. I've always been afraid to date a fireman - fire is so SCARY!! I don't think I could let him leave the house, knowing he was going to walk into flames on purpose!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Prologue
This is already horrible and sad. :((( sniffle...
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
the are so cute together ! cant wait ot see what happens next
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ugh! So close. I hope their relationship can survive. I'm pretty confident it can, so write soon, so we can figure it all out, lol. Great job!!
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 6
Just found you story and I love it! Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 6
Sweet...sweet story. Edward is so patient and understanding, and Bella seems to appreciate his ability to take it slow, but now...fireworks. Keep up the great writing. We'll all be waiting.
Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
I really like this, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 6
its going to be an intresting night! cant wait to see what happens next with these 2
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
LOL...Love how Bella took the bull by the horns, and shocked Edward like that. Love it! I also love that they are being responsible. Both of them are clearly attracted to each other, so I hope it all works out. Keep writing.
Reviewer: plaidpinkpuppy (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
Proud military wife here. Love a good military story! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 5
i love it you have to update soon
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I just submitted the next chapter for validation this morning! =)
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, that makes sense why she doesn't trust. But sounds like she'll give him at least another chance. Well, she better! Lol!
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
i am loving the idea of bella being graceful at dancing :) great chapter i would love to be pushed against a bar by edward *sigh*
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Prologue
Great start to this fic. I can't wait to see where you take this story. It is sad that they had to say goodbye and I do hope he comes home.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 2
Awww he likes her. I was surprised when he was waiting for her. I was excited when she went to dinner with him. but when she found out that he was in the army and bolted I was as shocked as Edward. I can't wait to find out why she doesn't like army men unless she had a family member or past boyfriend that maybe died and she doesn't want to get involved again. Anyway I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yeah, that was a nasty shock for our Edward. Don't worry, all will be revealed in time. =)
Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you're liking it! =)
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Another wonderful chapter. Edward really likes her and it is clear that she likes him. Very well written. I can't wait to find out why she is prejudice towards soldiers. great work hun.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Prologue
Great start to this fic. I can't wait to see where you take this story. It is sad that they had to say goodbye and I do hope he comes home.
Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Prologue
oooooooh this is going to be so good. I'm loving this. Soliderward
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Prologue
Oohh.....been there, done that...on both sides! (Ive both deployed and had my husband deploy while I stayed home. Both have heartache.)
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yeah, it pretty much sucks from all sides for different reasons.
Thanks for reading & reviewing! Hopefully the first chapter will be up soon. =)
Reviewer: MeanEliza (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Prologue
Whew, wow. I like this idea a lot. I can't wait to see what you do with it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it so far!
Stay tuned! ;)
Reviewer: DanySpike (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Prologue
More! More! More!!!
Greeting, Pange! I love Army Edward!
Author's Response: Hi Dany! =)
More is coming as quickly as I can get it up (that's what she said! lol). Stay tuned!
And yeah, I have a soft spot for Armyward too! =)
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