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Reviewer: belward (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Well there's Knight..., blackout, angel,

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Loved all the gifts that Edward sent her. That was really sweet. Him telling tayna that he was engaged was great.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Well,
I am so happy things are getting better for them. I'm actually glad Edward told Tanya he had a fiancee- it is probably the only way she woul back off- he had already tols her he was unavailable..

Name for the cat? Not sure yet

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

That was so heartwarming, thank you.  I might have a tear in my eye.  Let's hope they make a habit of this web cam thing.  Is it September now?  That's when Bella's birthday is, right?  So there won't be a reunion at Thanksgiving, Christmas is a long ways off.  I do hope for a wonderful Christmas and New Year's for them.  I suppose it will give them the time to continue their progress.

For a cat name; I was thinking it should be something French.  Hope in French is Espoir, I don't know if that really sounds like a cat name though.  How about Blankie.  That would be great to torment Edward with.  I bet you guys get a lot of good suggestions for a cat name.  I hope you'll share some of them with us.  I'm curious what other people come up with.

Speaking of blankie... she needs to wait and explain that one in person.  Perferably while alone in a bedroom.  I think that would be the best way to go about that.

Thanks again!  I love this story.

Reviewer: itlnbrt (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Awww... that was so sweet!!!

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Ive missed this story so much ! x x x 

The birthday gifts were fantaastic ,cat names ...hmmmm

When is he going to explain to Charlie ....?

Can't wait for the next chapter 

Welcome back ladies !

:)

Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Good to see an update..

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

How sweet is Edward. Love the phrasing of the chapter end notes lol. A pussy name...Raven or Nightmare (maybe that's not a good one).

Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

That was a GREAT chapter ladies!  I love to see positive progress!  The gifts were such a great idea and so, so sweet!

A name for Bella's kitty kitty...maybe a cutesy French name?  It would suit them...like Marie Antoinette or Josephine or Juliet? 

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

I vote salsa!!

Reviewer: ECis4ME (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

What thoughtful gifts he gave her. Loved them.

I wonder if he'll tell Bella what happened with Tanya? I hope Bella doesn't get upset that he said he was engaged ...

Great chapter, as always!

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

*blinks-

rereads Chapter End Notes.

*blinks*

Soooooo... how long did you giggle when you typed that, Ms. Double Entendre?

Reviewer: frackandbonechick (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

wonderful story so far, can't wait to read more

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

I love the web cam. That was a good idea. Maybe they will do a little sexy on the web.

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

she should name it Blankie :)

Great chapter! I am so glad it was a quick update! I crave it badly! :)

Reviewer: mayghen12 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

loved the update!!!!!  :)

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Edward working so many shifts doing favors for other residents that he is hoping will be repaid at Christmas time. Running into Tanya wasn't cool, but loved his solution.  Finally found a way to have her back off.  Claiming he's engaged.  Of course, a small town the news flies everywhere.  Charlie heard it first then contacted Esme.  Jasper probably heard it at the hospital.  A hospital is like a small town, the staff knows everybodies business and rumors spread instantly.  Edward getting a call from Emmett, Alice, and Esme the following morning.  They all want it to be true.  In a way it is true.  Both have committed to each other.  They only want the other one.  Not interested in looking elsewhere.  So making it committed at hospital will stop a lot of skanks from attempting to get into his bed.  Edward with the help of Esme and Alice sent Bella some wonderful gifts.  I especially loved the antique jewelry box with swans on the top.  Talk about perfect for Bella.  The necklace was beautiful as well.  Sounds like they are both delving into some deep topics with their therapist.  Making some progress, that's great.  Sorry Bella doesn't have any vacation time to return to Forks for Thanksgiving. Edward has plans to spend Christmas with Bella in Florida.

Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

LMAO! The end note made me laugh out loud. Such a cute chapter and I love that Edward got Bella a kitten. :) Random, but I like that Bella went to UF, since I'm a Gator myself. :)

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Lovely!! I hope that E & B get to be together soon!

Kitten: Twilight? Midnight? Little Bit?

Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Silent all these Years

Wow, what a powerful chapter.  I am so glad to see that Bella is now on the road to recovery and that things with Leah are going well.  I think that the hardest part is to admit that you want to change and accept help.  Now that Bella has done that, I think that she is well on her way.

Reviewer: insanemum (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

What should Bella name her pussy! Ladies, please! Seems like "scruffy" got a bit of an airing in that chap - but that's more of a dogs name. How about "Jedda" - that means black in some language (not sure which). Or "Midnight" - because of the time distance that's always between them. Another lovely chappie ladies. Slow and steady wins the race! We need a real engagement (and soon please!).

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Tammy (and Ellie)---Loved the bday gifts!  Every single one was so sweet and heartfelt.  I was hoping when he said 'Sunday at 7pm' that he was going to show up in Florida!  Yup, asking for too much, I know, esp since Edward is trying to be respectful of Bella's needs at this point. 

You ladies are doing a great job of 'fixing' these kids via therapy--it's painful, it's realistic and it's going to take time.  Sigh.  At least it will make the happy/sexy times worth it in the end, right?

And the webcams..yay!  Progress for them!

Great job!

--Melanie

PS Almost forgot to add that I was LOL at Chubward's freudian slip in calling B his fiance!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

LMAO! How I love that Tanya was stunned speechless over the whole fiancee declaration. That will put that skank in her place...dear lord that woman doesn't learn does she...I mean he's T...A...K...E...N! I wonder if Bella will ever hear of his? Hopefully not soon, we wouldn't want her to flip her lid.

Awww Edward is just the sweetest thing. His gifts left warm fuzzies in my lil heart. =) *Happy dance!* I was so thrilled they web chatted. I think thats fuckin AWESOME! Her kitten sounds adorable and if I had to toss out a name i would name her Deanna (Pronounced Dee-anna); Dee for short. Any salsa lovin cat should have a latin name...lol

I loved the chapter! Excellent work my dears!

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

Kitty. Name it kitty. Seems an appropriate name for a pussy...
Loved this chapter. Still so hard that they are apart, but I am so glad he did what he did for her birthday.

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Everything Under the Sun

So what's up with skanky Tanya.  I don't believe that she didn't know Edward was a doctor at the hospital.  What a big mouth she has.  I wonder who told Charlie about the rumored engagement.  I loved Edward's week of gifts.  So sweet.  Ooooh webcams, lots of shenanigans can be had with those.

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