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Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Wishing Well

Ellie...puppy pads indeed!  I knew that gift (the webcam) was there for a reason.  I love how brave Bella is, but she's still acting within her character of BtS. I love that she actually dresses for the occasion and does her hair and make up too.

Can't wait for their actual reunion...likely Christmas?

Great job!

--Melanie

Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:00 PM · On: 1997-New kid

I think this is gonna be a great story.  Thank god I am so outta high school  I so get it. Yuck Mikey that cute ugghhh!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Wishing Well

That was...(pacing)...Holy (fans self). Anyone got a bucket of cold water you can throw between my legs??? Like you so aptly said...DAYUM!!!

Wow..anyhow..LOVED the hilarious email explaining the "blankie"! Holy crow would that be embarrassing!!  I actually "awed" over the Thanksgiving feast, complete with cat food. That whole idea was awesome.  SSoooo glad she's getting homesick (jumps up & down). Progress, definite progress in the right direction.

Great chapter!! Linda  xxxooo

Reviewer: jacndaniel (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Wishing Well

is it weird that i thought that was sweet? i felt happy and sad for them at the same time. and again.... LOVED THE SONG! 

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Wishing Well

wow..that was kind of hot. ;)

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Wishing Well

Good chapter, glad to see some real headway.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Wishing Well

I have to say I am impressed with Bella and we all know Edward's ass is happy.

Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Prologue

I found myself here after reading your great short on Smut Mondays today.  Sounds like I will like this so far is piqued my interest.

Reviewer: born2dance94 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 01:05 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

Hahaha! I though Publisher's Clearing house sounded familiar, so I googled it and found out it's based in my town. I pass it all the time but never really gave any thought to it. Funny how it was mentioned...

Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Wishing Well

I think Edward is HOPING to see Bella, but WISHING for a Bella-induced orgasm...in person.  LOL

FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC chapter, ladies!  Forward progress is very satisfying!

Reviewer: marlievic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Wishing Well

Hot dayum! That shit was hot! I'm so proud of our little Bella! Can't wait for Christmas!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Wishing Well

hey awwwwwwwww the ending was sweeeeeet i hope they get each other for christmas

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Wishing Well

Web-cam sexing! I knew it!

Freakin' HOT!

*fans self*

I loved how Bella was still uncertain of herself, but found that note of power enthrilling. Everybody should find that in themselves at some point.

Excellent chapter, ladies! I loved it!

Now I definitely can't wait for Christmas!

Reviewer: treymaine (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Wishing Well

WOW! That was beautiful for both of them.

Reviewer: Delandora (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Wishing Well

Yay...Bella is getting better! Such a good chapter and I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Wishing Well

Edward wants Bella for Christmas.

Bella is making great strides in her therapy.  She's more open in her emails.  Of course, she never wants to talk about that topic again.  Maybe the more intimate they get physically it will be easier for her to talk about it.  Leah told her to set small goals to accomplish towards intimacy with Edward.  Whether it's sharing things together or physically. Bella had a plan and text messaged Edward with date and time for a webcam.  Physically exhausted with running around town for all the Thanksgiving holiday personal stories.  When she got home her door knocked.  It was a waiter with a full course meal with wine.  Edward wanted her to have a Thanksgiving meal.  How absolutely sweet and loving of him.  Bella blew me away with what she wore and taking extra efforts to look dynamite for Edward.  Left Edward speechless for a couple of seconds.  Jaw dropped down.  I was proud of Bella for being dominant with Edward about undressing.  Edward was demanding also.  Webcam sex for both of them.  Bella didn't feel guilty at all.  Progress.  Bella's getting closer.  Wonder if Bella will steal some time to go to Forks for Christmas.  She has been remembering all the Christmas's she had spent with Edward and the family.  She'll have a lot of news to tell Leah she accomplished the one little goal she set for herself.  she just has to continue with those goals and work towards them.

Reviewer: emmw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Wishing Well

Holly sex phone batman !!!!!!!!!! that was hoooooot as for what Edward is going to want this christmas i would go with the song "All i want for christmas is you" lets seal the deal baby.

Reviewer: Iluvedward29 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Wishing Well

i know what he wants... wether he will get it is a different story. I hope Bella sends him a gift and then shows up and surprises him. Reading this chapter made me feel almost like i was intruding in this intimate moment and I don't know why. I have read scenes like this but somehow this seemed really intimate. Anyway please update soon. his is just getting to be too much waiting. Damn the clockblocking!!!!!!

Reviewer: mayghen12 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Wishing Well

loved the update..  :)

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Wishing Well

Well, after reading that, I know what I'd want for Christmas if I were Bella!  LOL

Bella has sure come a long way, I sure hope she continues to progress, Edward too.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Wishing Well

Bella

Reviewer: BellaMarie4 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Wishing Well

OH WOW- THAT WAS HOT!

I hope he gets his Bella for Christmas!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Everything Under the Sun

how about Ebony

Reviewer: Becca08 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Wishing Well

This was such a great chapter. Bella sure has worked through a lot of problems. This was step in right direction I think. The email was priceless explaining out the blankie.. :) Poor Bella I could feel and see her embaressement from having to tell Edward about that incident! Can't wait for Christmas!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Wishing Well

This story always brightens my day when it updates. This was a fun chapter Bella oprns up.....that's all I'm saying. It can be taken in all forms of context. lol

 

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