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Reviewer: emt_lvr (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:47 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Hysterically laughing on the floor with that last bit about girl/guy friendship!!
Author's Response: Bella's definitely a feisty one!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:40 AM · On: 1997-New kid
"So long ago, I don't remember when
That's when they say I lost my only friend"
One Headlight - The Wallflowers
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I love that group! We know that Edward is a wallflower but is Bella to or rather would she like to be? She seemed none to impressed with Mike's offer to hang with him.
So what piece of the puzzle did we get with this chapter? We know that mom and dad want Edward to hang with his popular cousins, Emmett and Alice Cullen.
Emmett dates Rosalie with pretty blue eyes and great tits. He's good looking. Rosalie is tolerant of Edward because he is part of Emmett's family.
Alice is best friends with Bella. And she played dress up Ken with Edward. In the makeover process she purchased an acne product.
Bella lives with her dad in Forks. She spent the summer in Florida with her mom. Mom wants her to live there. She rescues Edward from Mike the first day of school. She is upset with her class schedule. We have to wait for an update to find out why.
Edward is smitten with Bella. He is having trouble controlling The Big Little Guy.
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I am liking this Edward faults and all. It would appear that he has found a friend in Bella and with that confidence. Let's just hope when he becomes the swan that he remembers those that were there for him.
Sandra
Author's Response: This is an amazing perceptive review. You're picking out exactly the pieces of the puzzle you need to! And Tammy's choice of song is so appropos (she does it again in a later chapter!).
Edward is a misfit new kid rescued by the semi-popular feisty girl, with back-up from his popular cousins. Bella lives with her dad full time, with only visitation with mum in the summers. Edward and Bella both are drawn to each other, although to what extent neither we, nor they, know.
But you will...
I'm so glad you're enjoying our story so far. We're so smitten by these characters that we couldn't help but writing them, despite the heavy schedules of NLT and RM!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: missyb617 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:35 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Love it! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: We're so glad you're enjoying it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: izzyemme (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:30 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Ohmygod I love this!!! Ohhh- I cannot wait to see their falling-out and reconnection. I'm sure you guys have something fantastic planned out! Hope updates will be coming frequently! But, you know, no pressure.....
Author's Response: LOL! We plan to update once a week from this point on! We already have the first 9 chapters written and you'll get to see it all, both beautiful and painful!
So glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:08 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Yeah...two of my favorite authors teaming up...what could be better! One note...please don't leave us hanging on the other two stories!
So far this is cute! I am looking forward to watching hte journey unfold!
Author's Response: ::: hugs you ::: We're both honoured to be among your faves!
Don't worry about that! I have another 10 chapters pre-written on NLT and I know Tammy's working hard on RM! In fact, I submitted NLT on Monday, just waiting for validation!
We just fell in love with this story as well and had to get it out!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:19 AM · On: 1997-New kid
I like it so far...seems like it'll be a really great story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for giving our story a try!
We appreciate your review!
Reviewer: landslide (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:45 AM · On: 1997-New kid
I'm hooked, please keep it coming!
Author's Response: :::: happy dance ::: We'll have more out next week!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:39 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Great chapter...I'm liking this so far. Can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: We're so glad you're enjoying it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:37 AM · On: 1997-New kid
I love how this story is staring out. I can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next update will be in one week from now!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:13 AM · On: 1997-New kid
This story is awesome...I cant wait to read more....I hope you update at least once a weeek if not twice
Author's Response: Thank you, we will be updating at least once per week for you!
Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:13 AM · On: 1997-New kid
That was a great chapter. Didn't really like the too fat guy used to protray Edward in the banner. Unrealistic. Fine to be a chubby younger Edward but that was alittle to much. But, hey, can envision it differently. Still looking forward to this story.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the story! Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: aeb12484 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:00 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Ahh, I super love it! It's no surprise you got a good reception, this story is great so far. Looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
Author's Response: =) aw shucks you are too kind! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:45 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Poor Edward....I was ready to punch Mike in the face...lol! But I loved how you introduced Bella to him...that was great! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much....our Bella is something else!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Prologue
Oooh, ladies....off to such a good start...I'm sooo curious to see just what went down with them all those ago....
Loooving it so far!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, and you'll definitely find out. As well as why it affected them as deeply as it did.
Thanks so much for coming to try our new fic!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:14 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Oh gosh that was so sweet! It pains me to think at some point he turns on her! Can't wait for more ... :)
Author's Response: You will need kleenex....lots of it.....I mean this is Ellie and I we are talking about....lol! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: kelliethehottie (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:44 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Great start to the story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much for your review, we are glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:32 AM · On: 1997-New kid
I like the style of this fic. Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming next week.
Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 01:50 AM · On: 1997-New kid
AWW they are so cute together.
i liked that Bella stuck up for Edward with Mike, she so bad ass lol.
Author's Response: Our Bella is a little more confident than canon Bella, but we like her that way. Glad you approve!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 01:33 AM · On: 1997-New kid
God, high school kids can be so cruel!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Bella's attitude- she doesn't seem to be any shrinking violet here. I'm so glad she stuck up for Edward....
Author's Response: Bella is *definitely* not a shrinking violet. It's quite a role reversal in this story, at least at first.
We're so glad you came and gave our story a try!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Prologue
"I was Dr. Edward Cullen, resident womanizer of Forks." Hmmmm.....After growing up the chubby misfit.....I guess he feels like he has something to prove. I hope he is able to stop chasing other women, and be with Bella...
Author's Response: Oh, he has a lot of reasons for turning out the way he does, but there's one thing he wants more than proving everyone else was wrong...
Hmmm... I wonder.....
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:00 AM · On: 1997-New kid
so this is how they started! i can't imagine fatward.. haha.. but even then, i'm sure he must have been adorable =) would you guys dwell long on the past? or is it fast-forwarded to future with just flashbacks of the past?
Author's Response: The first 10 chapters are set in the past. Then we will hit the point of the prologue and go further. We felt it was important for you to get a congrous picture of why what happened affected them as deeply as it did, and to do that, it's important to get a good feel for what they went through in high school. Trust me, though, we will make it worth it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:22 PM · On: 1997-New kid
I never did like Mike, even less now! Love going back in time to get to know what started it all, really good story, like the way its heading!
Author's Response: Mike's a big bully! He doesn't get any better in this story!
Thanks so much for giving our little venture a try!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Prologue
Nice start! Edward fat......hard to believe, anxious to see were this story is going!
Author's Response: LOL! It is hard to picture, but hang in there! You'll fall in love with him in a whole different way!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:54 PM · On: 1997-New kid
I LOVE it! I of course am a huge fan of both NLT and Rescue Me, so it comes as no surprise that you both are doing a bang up job on this story! I am super nervous to see what happens after the prologue, but I loved this flash back. I also love that Bella and Edward have that unexplained pull towards each other, even when he isn't this super, beautiful man! I love your Bella, so sweet and yet so fistey! Mike is a douche...of course and the girls with him can just drop dead as far as I am concerned! ;) I can't wait for BPOV next chapter because it should be interesting to see what happened with moving to Florida or staying in Forks!
I am a bit sad to know that there is going to be a big blow up between Edward and Bella, because they seem so effortless right now! :) Holding my breath! :)
-Kari
Author's Response: Hey, Kari!
Thanks so much for giving this story a chance!
The whole beginning of this story will be "flashbacks". The first 10 chapters are mostly set in the past as we want to show you why what happened at the end of this time would affect them as profoundly as it does. We need to show you the how and why before the what happened.
In this version, Charlie has primary custoday and Bella grew up in Forks. She has summer visitations with Renee. More on that later.
Hang in there! We're going to give you lots of good stuff before we drop an anvil on you!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:53 PM · On: 1997-New kid
WOW - I LOVE LOVE LOVE this bella!!!!!! She's spunky, confident, funny, quick witted and seems to like Edward "just the way he is" a la Bridget Jones.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: That is *exactly* what we were going for! She does like him in that Bridget Jones kinda way. There's just something about him that attracts her to him that's so much more important than a little extra weight! But you'll hear more from her soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
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