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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:49 AM · On: 1997-First day
Oh Ok So Renee is a drunk, but something else traumatic happened in Florida to bella. Ooh it sounds very ominous and good.
Can't wait to find out.
LMAO @ Alice and the Tall drink of Texas Punch!!
Lemme guess...hmmmm....would that be one Mr Whitlock? hahaha
She met her future husband at 14! Loves it!
LOL @ Charlie not wanting Alice to dent his car!
Who knew Charlie would talk so freely with his 14 yr old about boys?
He seems cool.
Connection made between B&E! Woot Woot! hahaha
Author's Response: We are so sorry we got behind on reviews!
Renee definitely has problems but there is more to it than that. You'll get more as we go.
Alice does indeed meet her future Mr. her freshman year. She just knows it. And Charlie is such a great dad. He's doing his best.
Yup. Connection between Edward and Bella, even if they don't know it yet.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:34 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Awwwwwww A chubbyWard!
Leave it to Alice to wanna give poor Edward a make-over,
even at 14 the girl is a spitfire.
Wow bella came to E's rescue! YAY!
That is the cutest thing ever.
Ok so far it's looking like Renee is a totes bitch,
cause B seems to be embarassed by something.
And sweet ChubbyWard wants to help her and be friends :D
I'm off to read more :D
Great stuff ladies :D
Author's Response: We love that you think sweet Chubbyward is so cute and Bella is so stinking nice! Thank you so much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:33 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww their friendship is beggining... so cute!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:07 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
This story is my new crack--it's fabulous! :)
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:41 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
I was very excited that this updated...I love it so much! :)
Edward...I love how protective he is of Bella and how is there for her NO matter what...aww!
Charlie...broke my heart when he said Bella wanted Edward not him. :(
Renee...hmmm....not sure on her yet...lol!
Another great one ladies! :)
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:14 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
So sooooooo good! Like hot chocolate mousse with vanilla ice cream.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:04 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
amazing......i love it. Cant wait for more
Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:22 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Wow. Just WOW. I love the story, and now I'm really intrigued to know what's going to happen next.
Update soon, please. :D
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:19 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Hey cool chap =] poor bella i am glad edward went to her =]
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Prologue
Oh Man!
I got fricking tingles!
Sadness and anxiousness at both of their povs.
I'm almost a bit scared to read more.
But Ima Do iT! lol
Author's Response: We are so sorry we got behind on reviews!
We are so glad you're giving us a chance and reviewing!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:26 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
That was beyond sweet and brought tears to my eyes. The lengths that Edward would go to for Bella seem endless. I want to be angry with Charlie but can't seem to find it in my heart to do so. Like Edward said Bella never talked about it, so how was anyone supposed to know. The cuddling in bed was so cute. Love seeing their relationship grow and strengthen. Can't wait to see what you ladies have in store. Great job.
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:10 AM · On: 1997-First day
I loved Bella's take on things and can't wait for you to delve into what went down w/ Renee. Charlie is so sweet and funny. Loved how Bella was looking beyond Edward's exterior and seeing him. Jasper's description and Alice's reaction to him was nicely done. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Prologue
Oh Man!
I got fricking tingles!
Sadness and anxiousness at both of their povs.
I'm almost a bit scared to read more.
But Ima Do iT! lol
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:50 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Aw, he's perfection personified. How freaking sweet is he? Like, seriously.
::sniffle::
Yall, are going to kill me. Something completely horrific has to happen to break them apart and make Edward all manho. ::whimpers::
Can one of you hold me when we get to those chapters? Please? I don't think I can take it alone.
It was sweet, and sad. You just feel for both of them. Edward and his hidden affection, Bella and her traumatized past. ::sigh:: So sad.
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:25 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
This chapter was GREAT! Srsly, I was so excited to see you guys updated today. :-)
Edward was SO sweet to Bella. I love him for that. Poor, Bella though. Sounds like she's had to deal with alot.
Thank you SO much for the update. I REALLY like this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
xo
Mel
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:05 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
AWHHHHH!!! That is so cute! Not the whole almost rape deal, but the fact that Edward is her knight in shining armor. So sweet!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:05 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
I LOVE IT! Each chapter that is unvealed is better and better! You two are doing such a great job! Hell even I could fall in love with this chunky, sweet Edward! And Renee....well hope she follows thru but I see her causing much more trouble!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:56 PM · On: 1997-First day
Love the different take on Rene, it really opens up a door for so many new possibilities.
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:37 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Love the chapter. Not loving Renee too much right now though. Can't Wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work.
xoxo
Amber
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:27 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
oh my... poor bella. she had to deal with it all on her own and never told anyone how bad was it. good thing she had edward then already to comfort her..
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Prologue
Sounds interesting!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:24 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
of course he goes to save her!
love to see how their friendship developed. I'm a little afraid to finally read what broke them apart--it must have been really bad....
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:17 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Another glorious chapter. I loved just how emotional and intense it was. Edward's reaction to Bella's desperate cry for help was moving and inspiring. It also filled me with hope for the direction in which this story is heading.
I especially found Charlie's plea to Edward heart breaking and devastating. That was a beautifully written scene and I applaud you for it.
This has, in such a short time, come to be a strong favorite of mine. I've already come to need it, and DEAR SWEET BABY JESUS, it's ONLY Chapter 4!!!!
BRAVO!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:02 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
That was a great chapter. it's unfortunate that kids have to be put in these positions by their parents. But in this case Bella was lucky to have edward to help her. i can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:54 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
so he's 15, in love with his best friend, and already fighting always at the ready eddie
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