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Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:26 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

This is just the cutest story EVER!!!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:53 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

I love how even though Edward isn't in the best of shape, he is still Edward. I'm glad Bella sees past that. And I loved the end when she finds he didn't go to the dance. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:39 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awwwwwwww!Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:24 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awww... oh that's just so sweet! Can I keep him? A pet I can keep in my pocket and stroke *cough* at every opportunity. Total stress reliever. ;D

Excellent update, I can't wait to see what else happened. :)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:24 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Chubward is breaking my heart!! (I love that you call him that too, btw!)  He is so gdamned SWEET!!!  He makes my teeth ache like Skittles do. 8)

But this is also breaking my heart a little. How could they go from THIS, to what hot mess is in the Prologue?? How could he say those things to Bella? How could they be apart for so long? How could nice Chubward become Dickward and Slutward??? HOW??  And I bet when he's hot he never, EVER dates a chubby girl! Probably only supermodels.

Sigh. It will be very hard to read of his transformation into dickery.

Thank you for the update. :))  They make me squeeeeeeeeeee!!

Reviewer: YuriSeth (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:30 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

I love this story ! keep it up!

Reviewer: lovnsomecullen (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:23 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awww!  So cute!  I love Edward even if he is chubby!

Reviewer: nseller (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:10 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

I think it just might break my heart when these two have their 'falling out'.

Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:01 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Aww, Edward is so sweet! Methinks Bella was jealous! Haha! Great chapter once again! Thanks for the update.

:-)

xo

Mel

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:34 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awe, this story is so damn cute!  How Bella can resist Edward (and who says she can?) is beyond me.

Completely loving this amazing and touching story.  Ready for more!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:13 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awwww, that was so sweet of him. It's really going to suck to hate him later. Poor Bella was jealous and didn't even know it. Good chapter!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:10 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

i love the term chubward!! haha.. it's so cute and adorable..and he is even more adorable with what he did for bella here. that was really sweet of him. so bella is now starting to develop feelings for chubward.. she got jealous when kate asked right? so how will things turn out? hmmm...can't wait for the next update! =)

Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:24 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

awww, how could I resist my own little Chubward, lol. This is such a lovely little story and I can't wait to see where it goes. Great writing girls!

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:22 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awesome!!!!!!!

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:21 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

awwwwww....i love this story and cant wait for more.

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:12 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Hey Mrs Potato

That was very sweet.  Methinks I see the green-eyed monster rearing its head (and I don't mean Edward either).  Please don't call him Chubward, I know he is, but it makes me feel all icky.

Apologies to Tammy for calling her a potato - there's only one and that's you Ellie.

Thanks for updating so quickly.

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 04:05 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

You gals are the bestest!!!  You can just capture the emotions so well and make my heart squeeze just the right way.

I'm going to head over to the forum and say hello.

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:54 PM · On: 1997-First day

Okay, I think you know by now my utter hatred for Bella - basically because she gets to have Edward and I don't.  But I like your Bella.  She's a nice kid.

I would like both Em & Edward nekky for me - please send via overnight courier.  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:40 PM · On: 1997-New kid

First of all Mrs Potato, I have to apologies.  For some reason I had not put this story on my favourites so didn't know you'd been updating.  My bad - now please spank me as I deserve.

Second, how can you do this to my poor Edward!!!  He should be taken away from you in the custody hearing I'm scheduling because you can't look after him properly LOL!!!  Send him to me, we Aussies know how to treat him.

Off to read the next chapter.  I love catching up.



Author's Response:

Hey this is Venomousgal....aka Tammy.  I'll have you know that I work as Family Law Assistant.  You will never win custody of my Eddie....never! 

I may be bribed, however, to share his kisses for your mad reviews.  Toodles

Much love,

Tam and Ellie

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:53 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

Im so glad I finally managed to get to read this, it's amazing! You two girls rock so much (but we all already knew that), I'm in love with the writing, chubby Edward and this story. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Prologue

I finally got around to read this, and I'm loving every sentence so far, it's like poetry



Author's Response:

We are so sorry we got behind on reviews!

Wow, thank you for the amazing compliment!  We are so grateful you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:49 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

Really great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:39 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

That was a really good chapter. I love how he decided he was going to get her, so sweet :)

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:20 PM · On: 1997-First day

Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

We are so sorry we got behind on reviews!

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying!

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:50 PM · On: 1997-New kid

Great chapte. I love awkward edward lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.....we love him too!

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