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Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:00 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Aww! Truth or Dare is always good for getting these things out in the open. Great line: she was, and would always be, the most beautiful thing in my life.
Author's Response: Hehehehe...truth or dare has resulted in more relartionships than I can possibly count! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Gemsxx (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:20 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
awwwww soooooooooooooooo fricking gooooodddddd i love chubward and bella and i love the synergie between the group love it hard.
Hugs Gemsxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! we are having so much fun writing this, and the response has been so humbling! Keep reading!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:40 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Awww poor chubward!!! his become a man and doesn't know what to do with himself!
LOL as a person who has in fact swam while camping in the mountains of Washington the Water is freezing! like lips turn bule in 3 mintues freezing 9 times out of 10 it's Glacier water so that would have taking care of Edward's problem in like a nano second LOL
okay so I know that this is probley a 'use your imaganation' moment but could you give me an idea as to where they are camping? I'm sure thiss going to be atime where it says in the chapter and I missed it somewhere
this is an awesome chapter you guys keep em' coming!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Jacqui, you are hilariou, and so totally right. The water would be darn cold and shrinkage was a must for poor Chubward. I mean Chubbyward can run all willy nilly with a chubby!
I didn't mention location in the chapter, leaving it up to everyone's imagination, but if I were to say what I envisioned Cottonwood Campground. The online pics are amazing and it looks like a great place to go.
Ellie is up next so get ready for awesomeness!
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:30 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
This was funny, and cute and a little sad for poor Edward who is always second guessing himself because of the chub. Is Bella dreaming about Edward too? He is always going to be tentative and shy because his self confidence is so shot because of the weight....she should know that she has to give him a pretty clear signal that she's interested...all in due time I'm sure. Enjoyed the chapter...thanks.
Author's Response: Poor shy lil Chubbyward! He does need a confidence boost. As for Bella dreaming of him, look back to the last chapter...hint hint!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:23 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
A review couldn't be better than a chocalate dipped Cullen...No way, no how! But I'll leave one anyway. Can't wait for more. This is a lovely story and I am glad I'm on board. I'm a reader of Not Like This so I naturally came on over and am glad that I did. Thanks for sharing. You are doing a fabulous job!
Author's Response: Chocolate dipped Cullen....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! Sorry lost my train of thought for a moment.....
Thank you so much for your review! You rock hard *snickers and hides face* you made me say rock hard!
Chocloate dipped Cullens for you...rock hard....um yeah!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:19 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
I love it! Chubward is so sweet.
Author's Response: We are so in love with him too....he is a doll!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:19 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Awww poor chubward!!! his become a man and doesn't know what to do with himself!
LOL as a person who has in fact swam while camping in the mountains of Washington the Water is freezing! like lips turn bule in 3 mintues freezing 9 times out of 10 it's Glacier water so that would have taking care of Edward's problem in like a nano second LOL
okay so I know that this is probley a 'use your imaganation' moment but could you give me an idea as to where they are camping? I'm sure thiss going to be atime where it says in the chapter and I missed it somewhere
this is an awesome chapter you guys keep em' coming!!!!!
Author's Response: times two from our number one fan
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:05 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance
Oh yes, Chubward is so sweet. I would have loved him too in High School. You're doing a lovely job with this. I dread where it's going since I know something goes wrong but I will be patient to see what happens. Thanks for sharing your talents!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:37 PM · On: 1997-First day
Oh, I'm liking these two so much already! Can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks for sharing your story. I like how you both write the POVs. You can tell there's a difference in tone and style. So far, it's very good!
Author's Response: Thank you! We are having a blast writing this!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:18 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Nuh uh. Nothing's better than chocolate dipped, caramel drizzled, garnished with whipped cream nekky Cullens--but your story's still pretty awesome .
Author's Response: We can name something......chocolate dipped, caramel drizzled, garnished with whipped cream nekky Cullens...in your bed!
Thank you so much for your review, stay tuned for Ellie up next!
Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:10 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
aww this story is so sweet!!! Very different from other stories I've read...really enjoying it! Do you have an updating schedule? I'm looking forward to their relationship developing. As I spent most of HS in love with my best friend, I am totally relating to this story. :)
Author's Response: We will be updating once a week, usually Mondays, although if response is huge we will consider dropping a bit early. We are so glad you are enjoying it! we are having a great time working together on this project!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:10 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Hey ooooooooooooooooh lol the ending was sweet =] how old are the guys ing the story? if you have time to tell me =]
Author's Response: They are 16 in the last chapter, and were 14 when they met! Thank you so much for taking the time to review for us! We appreciate it!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:03 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
I love the story, really, though I'm not exactly comfortable with the idea of Chubward. C'mon, ladies, make him start working out and lose some weight soon! LOL
Author's Response: You have to fall in love with Chubbyward first before you can have Chiselward, but trust us he will get there. thank you so much for stopping in to leave a review. It is greatly appreciated!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Prologue
OOOhhhhh, this looks good. I can't imagine a chubby Edward, but I'm willing to try! Can't wait to sink myself into this one! Thanks!
Author's Response: It os hard to get your head around Chubby Edward, but we love him that way. He makes you want to wrapp your arms around him and comfort him!
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:27 AM · On: 1997-First day
:) I'm looking forward to watching their friendship develop.
Author's Response: Thank you...it is fun to write .....
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:18 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
ahhh their first kiss! How sweet!
Author's Response: As far as first kisses go, it was pretty darn good we think! Lady Tater is up next with more of this fun whirlwind.....stay with us!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:05 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance
Ahh Bella doesn't look good in green!!! hehe
Yah know even when Edward becomes hot he still sports chubbies - so he'll always be chubward ! Oh my inner 12 yo is giggling!!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:49 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
I love this imperfect appearance Edward with a beautiful soul! Oh and Renee - seriously OMG!!! Doesn't a child have some say in visitation post age 13 - in California they do!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:44 AM · On: 1997-New kid
They're really cute.
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:38 AM · On: 1997-First day
oh drunken Renee - hmm curious as to all that went down in Florida now!
Author's Response: Florida is a nightmare for poor Bella...she needs Edward.....
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Prologue
I like it so far!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:19 AM · On: 1997-New kid
roflmao - strong Bella and weak Edward! I adore the humor!!!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Prologue
can't wait to read all of what happened!!! Edward speaking in any foreign language is hot - but French - omg my toes curl!!!!
Author's Response: Le Francais est le langue d'amour! Ellie and I both love and are fluent in French and think it adds some fun to the story! My husband is French and he says you rock with the french comment!
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:45 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
i love this so far, can't wait for the rest,
Author's Response: Gah! Thank you so much for the encouragement! There is a lot more coming up, so stay tuned!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:26 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Edward is soooo crazy adorable! I mean seriously cute as can be! I loved reading his POV...that kiss! WOW!
LOVED it ladies! :)
Author's Response: Well thanx, doll! We are so glad it came off as both sweet and hot. Wonder what Bella is thinking now?
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