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Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:22 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
I don't think anything could be better than chocolate dipped nekky Cullens, but here's a review anyway.
I thought this story was cute from the beginning, but I'm really getting into it now. Edward is so sweet you just want to.....lick him? Hmmm...... And Bella is a great character. The kiss was awesome.
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, nothing really is better than the choccy Cullen... well, almost nothing *wink*
Chubward is so dear. You just want to cuddle him! And that kiss, even on a dare, was the sweetest thing!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:36 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Awwwwwwwwwwwww! Their first kiss! Damn me and my curiosity ´cause I totally want to know what happens so that they can´t even look at each other. :)
Author's Response: Even on a dare, isn't that the sweetest kiss? It's going to make... what happens... so much harder, though.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Prologue
I'm so excited honestly and I'm wondering if their falling out will be caused by something typical - like miscommunication or will it be Edward's pushing her away because he's doing what's best for her etc. It seems pretty obvious that they were young and loved one another completely and I can't wait to read all about it!
Author's Response: Their falling out is high level angst alert. Get your kleenex and vodka ready.
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Prologue
Does your husband have a brother? (bats eyelashes) I can read French unfortunately that's all is left of my ridiculous education so no speaking and even listening is difficult because of the speed. This means more French speaking Edward to come tho right? hehe!!!
Author's Response: LOL! No he has two sisters. But I am sure there are a few cousins! Yes there will be more french speaking Edward AND Bella coming!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Prologue
Squee!!! How have I not seen this story before!!!!! I saw you tweeting with everwondering about Chubward and I was like .. Chubward???? I gotta have Chubward!!!
Anyway great premise I can't wait to keep reading!!!! And thanks for your review too bb --
I'm off to bed now but expect review spam from me tomorrow. Thanks for writing! xo
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am so enjoying your story, I jumped over to FF to read ahead and was swearing at my screen on your last chappie. I have to go back and leave a review, I was just too mad at your doucheward to do so at the time...lol!
So glad you are enjoying our lil tale, Ellie and I have been having a great time writing it.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:09 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance
OHHHH...I wished Bella would have asked him to go! He is to good to be true! They are so insinc with each other, love it!
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:48 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Emmett is so funny!! “Because you left your balls in her purse, Cullen.” LMAO!
The kiss was very sweet. I just adore this Edward AND Bella.
Author's Response: Emmett so rocks our boat, although not as much as Chubward. So glad you are enjoying our lil tale!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:22 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
OMG!!!..they kissed and it was priceless. So yeah they are both totally screwed*giggles*..Thanks, I love it all!!!..can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Gah! thank you so much for the review....marshmallows for the campfire, $2......tent from newton's outfitters, $40.....kissing you best friend playing truth or dare.....priceless.....
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:18 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance
*le sigh*..Reading this makes me all sorts of happy. It just so sweet and totally incredible. I do admit I'm kind of a little scared because I know their friendship ends for some reason. Thanks, I love it all.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:13 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Omg...poor Bella. I can't begin to imagine how she felt here. I was scared for her just by reading it. I am so greatful to Edward for being such an incredible friend to her when she needed him most. Thanks, I love it. Oh and chubbyward with out a shirt is just beautiful. I love his shyness and his innocense.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:08 PM · On: 1997-First day
Love!..love plenty of love. Thanks for giving us Bella's Pov. It was very important for this firts meeting. Thanks, I love it!
Author's Response: No problem, so glad you are enjoying our tale.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:01 PM · On: 1997-New kid
Aww..Edward is too cute, I love him already. I'm so happy that Bella helped him out with Mike. It sucks to be in that kind of situation, but Bella handled it very well. I just know she will be a very good friend to Edward.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Prologue
This made me sad. I can't wait to find out why they fell apart. Thanks, I love it and its only the prologue!!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I hope you enjoy it as much as we have enjoyed writing it!
Reviewer: vampfan29 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:52 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
OMG...I am so loving this. Edward is just the cutest thing....or Chubward is. This is a really sweet story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We are so in love with him too, and Bella is a doll! Just you wait til the next chappie!
Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:05 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Awhhhh! This is just too sweet! We are counting this as their first kiss right? Can't wait to find out if Bella may be feeling something more than friendship for her best bud. It surely seem she does. Very sweet chapter. I loved it.
Author's Response: Yes, their first kiss! As for Bella's feelings, you'll just have to wait for Ellie's wonderful literary stylings next chapter.....
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:37 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Alice had talked to Jasper or Edward's face is revealing his inner emotions. I enjoyed the Emmett dare with makeup. Could just picture made me laugh. Jasper and the bra was cute, little pixie's on his larger frame, and Edward kissing Bella was wonderful. Since they are both dreaming of each other. Response should have given them both the idea the other has stronger feelings than just best friends. Edward's dad cracked me up with his father talk. Sounds like this weekend camping trip is pretty fun.
Author's Response: Alice is perceptive, and she knows Edward well! The dares were fun, and actual taken from real life experience.....try it your next game, especially the makeup...lol!
As for Ted, we like his style! And we love your review....thanks!
Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:37 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
I knew I would hate myself for even starting this! Now I have to go through the torturous waiting period for updates! UGH!!!! It's bad enough I have to suffer waiting for "Not Like This" updates but now I have added yet another unfinished story to my ever increasing list! *sigh* = ) Love ya more than chocolate covered Edward! Ok, maybe not quite that much but close!
Author's Response: Awwww! Stay with us, we love you too! Ellie's awesomeness is up next so stay tuned!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:11 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Ah Truth or Dare. I wonder how many teenage relationships would never have come to be without it. Haha. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Yes....the much loved truth or dare....what rite of passage would be complet without it? Thank you so much for reading and indulging us with your review!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:02 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance
I think she was jealous. Edward is so super sweet. It's nice to see him a bit insecure! Most fics paint him as this terrible arrogant SOB, well at least in the beginning. Thanks for writing something very unique.
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:52 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
I like this Edward... it makes me wonder what went so very wrong... Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:18 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
this is now one of my favs...I can not wait for updates!! great job ladies!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much. We seriously appreciate your awesomeness! Stay tuned for more....
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:00 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
"She was breathing heavy, her cheeks were stained red, and her hair was mussed, but as she smiled at me, I knew in that moment that she was, and would always be, the most beautiful thing in my life." Yess!!!!!!
"I wanted Bella Swan to be more than just my friend...I had crossed the line.....I was so totally screwed." I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: I had so much fun with those lines......fluff is mah favorite, and Ellie eggs me on, squealing and ahhhing at each ooze of sweetness! Wait until you read her chapter up next, it is amazing!
Reviewer: bookluver (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Prologue
love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:15 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
I love Cubward! Can I take him home with my??
and as always AWESOME chapter
Author's Response: Oh boy.....you may have to get in line or fight of few of the ladies on the forum for that privilege......come round and check out the fun!
Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Prologue
WTF??????? That was waaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy to short!
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Author's Response: Please forgive us, there is more coming!
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