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Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:54 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

heartbreaking. This is going to be a rough ride, I think...



Author's Response:

That it is... that it is...

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:47 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Christmas deaths are the very worst thing possible.  I know from experience.  Your chapter really did break my heart because you wrote it so well that I could feel what Edward was feeling.



Author's Response:

We are truly sorry you've gone through anything like this.  I have as well.  It's ... traumatizing.

Thank you so much for still reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighterx33 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:34 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

okay so you are amazing and this story is amazingand you just filled my computer with tearss beacause of this chapter. soo update soon soo i can know whats going on with chubward and bella!

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much!  We really appreciate it!

More soon!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: babynancy (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:33 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

wow i have fully cryed that was so sad update soon



Author's Response:

We will, we promise!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mamajo76 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:31 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

so what does that mean what he is saying in french?

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:28 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Wow that was an emotional chapter. Makes me almost worry about what caused them to separate later in the story. Will we be catching up on all of these years before we get back to present day or will you go back and forth? Great story, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

We're going in chronological order, but we're almost to the "what happened".  Actually, it starts in the next chapter...

Thank you so much for the read and review!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:27 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

P.S. : If you're going to reward us with chocolate-dipped Cullens, please make sure that Rpatz does something about his body hair. It would be like tar-n-feathering him!!! That boy is HAIRY!! lolol...

Chubward breaks my heart he's so damned cute. He's like a chubby boy Bella - doesn't realize he's cute, and loved, just the way he is. And chubby white boys grow into chubb white men with goatees who are just ADORABLE!! squishy to hug, sweet, and they always smell soooo good. whew! I'm swooning a bit!!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:27 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

P.S. : If you're going to reward us with chocolate-dipped Cullens, please make sure that Rpatz does something about his body hair. It would be like tar-n-feathering him!!! That boy is HAIRY!! lolol...

Chubward breaks my heart he's so damned cute. He's like a chubby boy Bella - doesn't realize he's cute, and loved, just the way he is. And chubby white boys grow into chubb white men with goatees who are just ADORABLE!! squishy to hug, sweet, and they always smell soooo good. whew! I'm swooning a bit!!



Author's Response:

ROFLMAO!  The tar and feathering is TOO much!

Chubward is so darling.  He's adorable and he is loved by more than just Bella even though he is not physically perfect.  LOL!  Well, this chubby boy is going to grow into Chiselward, aka Doucheward....

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing....

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:26 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

 “Edward?” I whispered, feeling my own tears burning my cheeks.  “Edward, Mon Coeur, please?”  His eyes fluttered open, and it was like every horror in the world played in slow motion behind them.  “Mon Coeur entire,” he whispered,"   This is just beautiful...

My heart hurts for poor Edward. I am so happy he has Bella, his sweet, beautiful angel to be there for him....

With all their history together, I find myself being even sadder knowing that something tears them apart in the future...and that  sweet Edward becomes a Man Ho.........



Author's Response:

She's the only one who can get through to him.  Her heart.  His entire heart.

They go through so much together.  How do they get from here to there?

Alas, you're about to find out.

We thank you so much for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:23 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!  This chapter was HORRIBLE!! I didn't see it coming....poor Chubward!! sniffle sniffle...just terrible. Thank god he has Bella to help him make it thru. HOW could they get from this to that first, dreadful prologue?? HOW??

Oh, misery and despair. :(((((( 

People are dropping like flies in all the fanfics I'm reading! I've got 2 dead Carlisles and dying parents and even a dead BELLA!  and a dead Edward too! weep and wail, that's all I do....

I'm going to focus on the last chapter. THeir campfire, smores-flavored kiss was MAGIC!!!  I wish one of them would just slam lips on the other...gah...love is hard, no matter what your age!

Thank you for the updates, even if they make me cry. :)



Author's Response:

Aw!  We hated hurting our darling Chubward!  It was horrifying, but necessary to the story.  I know right?  What can take them from here to there?

Well, these are the only deaths in this story, so that much you can take as relief!

I wish I said we would take you to better times in the next chapter, but alas, no.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:23 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

how sad, **sniff** But I love your story, this was really emotional. please update soon



Author's Response:

It is a tough tough chapter.

We're so glad you're reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: mahonm2 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:18 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Wow, they shared something so horrific together and got through it together. I can't wait to see what happens to make this go downhill. It seems like a fairytale friendship that would outlast everything. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Alas, you're about to find out the first part of the story of their separation....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: loreleikate (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:18 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

How could we not fall in love with Chubby Edward?  Especially in your very talented hands? 

This chapter broke my heart and made me love E/B even more than I already did.  Nice job - even with all the trauma it caused.  :)



Author's Response:

Chubward is so darling.  We want to cuddle him all the time.  These two kids are so in love but just don't know what name to put on it...

Thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:15 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

My heart is breaking right about now, that was so sad.  That is a very tough blow for anyone, around Christmas no less so I'm sure this will have alot to do with what seperates them.  Love this story so much!



Author's Response:

Actually, this has nothing to do with it, fondly enough.  Both of them suffered greatly with this, but it's not what tears them apart.

Thank you so much for reading our story and reviewing.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:13 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

I absolutely love this story!!! this chapter had me just bawling for Edward and Bella...the love she has for him is so beautiful.  This chapter just broke my heart.



Author's Response:

We're so glad you love this story.  We're obsessed with it.  Really.  We love both of these kids...

Thank you so much for your support!

Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:57 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Wow, that really sucks.  I feel so bad for Edward.  Now I'm really incredibly curious as to what the hell happened between the two of them for them to grow so damn far apart like in the prologue.  I can't wait until I receive the next update. 



Author's Response:

Well, you'll hear part of the story in the next chapter.  Hard to believe anything can damage their relationship....

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Tweemad (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:55 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Cubbyward is adorable!



Author's Response:

He's so sweet.  Poor wee guy!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:52 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

I am crying while reading this and just want you to know that I don't cry often... This is breaking my heart, but I love this story.



Author's Response:

Aw!  I'm so sorry that we made you cry.  Poor little guy. 

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Prologue

Edward, what have you done???



Author's Response:

It's so sad... and it's coming soon.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: RingTheBella (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Prologue

eight years since they have seen each other, or eight years since they first met?



Author's Response:

Eight years since they have seen each other.....

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:37 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

Wow!!! I just finished all of whats written of rescue me and started this super little story and read all the way through. I can't get enough. I love Chubward!!! High fives go out to you two for writing about someone who isn't physically perfect. Course I do know how the story end up Edward physique wise and I'm looking forward to that too. But for now I'm lovin Chubward with a chubward. Nice intro into the campfire kiss.

Oh just an aside.. I don't speak a lick of French. I know you translated one of the phrases in your authors notes but there were some others I'm still mystified about. Translations please if you're going to continue in the language of love. I can say for certain that the last little bit of the story was Oh La la.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much!  Chubward is so darling, isn't he?  We want to cuddle him all the time.  We wanted to separate Edward's perfection from his looks.  To show that he was just as perfect, if not more, when he was young and physically a little less than "the man".

We are SO sorry.  Normally we add in French 101 at the beginning when we're using the language.  Please feel free to PM or post a review/question if we forget and we will translate.  From here on in, we'll be sure to translate in the beginning or end notes of each chapter.

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:32 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

Loved the kiss!  Everyone has it figured out!  Everyone but B/E.  Great story!  Love watching these characters grow, keep up the great writing!



Author's Response:

It's glaringly obvious to everyone but them!  And even though it was a dare, that was the sweetest kiss ever!  Tammy did a great job!

Thanks so much for reading our story and for reviewing!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:36 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

So i come back from a week in the hospital to this and am overjoyed!

 

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

*hugs you*

Hope you are feeling better.

We are so glald you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Prologue

oh crap - now my mind is all over the place - augh



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, we just tossed it out to let you stew on it a bit!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:17 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

Love the story!!  Just started reading today and got caught up.  Can't wait for more!!! 



Author's Response:

We are so glad!  Chubward is so darling!

Thank you so much for giving our story a try and for reviewing!

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