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Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:29 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Oh the heartbreak. You captured it well. Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

A very difficult time for our kids...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:25 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

sad sad sad chapter! I loved it tho

 

Great Chapter!!!



Author's Response:

It is such a tough one...  Poor Chubward.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:19 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Wow, losing both parents just before Christmas! Poor Edward



Author's Response:

We've been cuddling him as much as possible, poor wee boy.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:15 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

There would be nothing better than to be curled up wtih any of the Cullens nekky on a rainy day but hey whatever it takes to feed your ego hehe!!!

Wow they're sooo entrenched in one another you're freaking me out with the epic fail coming.  Patron's chilled and waiting to help me through it altho I'm considering calling in some xanax for myself LOL



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're right!  Although we are snuggling Chubward instead....

They are really so in love, they just don't know what to call it.

The fail begins next chapter....

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nseller (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:11 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

You made me cry. That was so heartbreaking, yet beautiful. I know there will be more tears in my future with this fic because I can't even imagine what could break up a friendship this strong. It must be a doozy.



Author's Response:

Aw, we're so sorry we made you cry!  Poor wee Chubward.  We just want to cuddle him.

Alas, more tears to come.  But hang in there.  We have a plan. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:09 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Whoa!  What a wonderful Christmas present!  Both parents were killed instantly.  Edward only wants Bella.  She wants to be with him.  What is going to happen when she has to go home without him?  Will he feel abandoned?  Will this start the beginning of the end?  Bella is torn up by both the depth of Edward's grief and pain and the death of pseudo parents for her.  Bella's heart hurts with all of Edward's pains and sorrows.  Broke my heart too.  Such wonderful parents, you know I loved Ted's fatherly educational talks, from last chapter.  Now his sense of humor and easy going manner is gone.  How much sadder are we going?  He won't take his pain, anger, grief out on Bella will he?  Waiting for the following chapters.  Will have tissues next to me this time?



Author's Response:

Poor Chubward.... so much to lose.  So much for Bella too.

This event, other than having a profound effect on both of them, does not have anything to do with their undoing.  They collapse *despite* this, not because of it.  But it's sad all the same.

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:07 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

:( That was so sad. great chapter.



Author's Response:

Poor Chubward needs a hug...

Thank so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:04 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Oh, that is just so so sad.  Poor Edward.  My heart is aching for him here.  But great job with the chapter.  I don't see how these two could go their seperate ways but you definitely are putting together a great story!  Thanks for sharing it.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Poor Edward indeed.  The little guy needs all the snuggles he can get.  How do they get there from here?

We're about to find out...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:03 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Heart wrenching but absolutely beautiful - Loving this story, even the parts that make me sniffle like a blubbering fool :)

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!

We truly appreciate you reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:01 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Totally didn't see that one coming.  Now I am even more curious to find out what came between Bella and Edward.  i am also very interested to see how Edward gets through this.  Thanks for the heads for the box of Kleenex, I definitely needed them!



Author's Response:

Indeed.  How did they get from here to there?

Keep the kleenex handy...

Thank so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:55 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Oh Mrs Potato.  I'm running out of hearts - they keep getting broken.  Poor, poor Edward.  That was very beautifully written.  I'm having trouble trying to see what is going to cause them to split apart. 

Are we going to be seeing any of this from EPOV?

I've been sick all week so I'm expecting my nekky Cullens to make me feel better in lots of different ways.

Annette



Author's Response:

Our poor sweet Chubward.  How do they get from here to there?

Alas, no.  We're only going to show certain scenes from both side... like the next one.

*hugs* We hope you feel better soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:54 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

heartbreaking. This is going to be a rough ride, I think...



Author's Response:

That it is... that it is...

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:47 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Christmas deaths are the very worst thing possible.  I know from experience.  Your chapter really did break my heart because you wrote it so well that I could feel what Edward was feeling.



Author's Response:

We are truly sorry you've gone through anything like this.  I have as well.  It's ... traumatizing.

Thank you so much for still reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighterx33 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:34 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

okay so you are amazing and this story is amazingand you just filled my computer with tearss beacause of this chapter. soo update soon soo i can know whats going on with chubward and bella!

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much!  We really appreciate it!

More soon!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: babynancy (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:33 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

wow i have fully cryed that was so sad update soon



Author's Response:

We will, we promise!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mamajo76 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:31 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

so what does that mean what he is saying in french?

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:28 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Wow that was an emotional chapter. Makes me almost worry about what caused them to separate later in the story. Will we be catching up on all of these years before we get back to present day or will you go back and forth? Great story, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

We're going in chronological order, but we're almost to the "what happened".  Actually, it starts in the next chapter...

Thank you so much for the read and review!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:27 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

P.S. : If you're going to reward us with chocolate-dipped Cullens, please make sure that Rpatz does something about his body hair. It would be like tar-n-feathering him!!! That boy is HAIRY!! lolol...

Chubward breaks my heart he's so damned cute. He's like a chubby boy Bella - doesn't realize he's cute, and loved, just the way he is. And chubby white boys grow into chubb white men with goatees who are just ADORABLE!! squishy to hug, sweet, and they always smell soooo good. whew! I'm swooning a bit!!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:27 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

P.S. : If you're going to reward us with chocolate-dipped Cullens, please make sure that Rpatz does something about his body hair. It would be like tar-n-feathering him!!! That boy is HAIRY!! lolol...

Chubward breaks my heart he's so damned cute. He's like a chubby boy Bella - doesn't realize he's cute, and loved, just the way he is. And chubby white boys grow into chubb white men with goatees who are just ADORABLE!! squishy to hug, sweet, and they always smell soooo good. whew! I'm swooning a bit!!



Author's Response:

ROFLMAO!  The tar and feathering is TOO much!

Chubward is so darling.  He's adorable and he is loved by more than just Bella even though he is not physically perfect.  LOL!  Well, this chubby boy is going to grow into Chiselward, aka Doucheward....

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing....

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:26 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

 “Edward?” I whispered, feeling my own tears burning my cheeks.  “Edward, Mon Coeur, please?”  His eyes fluttered open, and it was like every horror in the world played in slow motion behind them.  “Mon Coeur entire,” he whispered,"   This is just beautiful...

My heart hurts for poor Edward. I am so happy he has Bella, his sweet, beautiful angel to be there for him....

With all their history together, I find myself being even sadder knowing that something tears them apart in the future...and that  sweet Edward becomes a Man Ho.........



Author's Response:

She's the only one who can get through to him.  Her heart.  His entire heart.

They go through so much together.  How do they get from here to there?

Alas, you're about to find out.

We thank you so much for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:23 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!  This chapter was HORRIBLE!! I didn't see it coming....poor Chubward!! sniffle sniffle...just terrible. Thank god he has Bella to help him make it thru. HOW could they get from this to that first, dreadful prologue?? HOW??

Oh, misery and despair. :(((((( 

People are dropping like flies in all the fanfics I'm reading! I've got 2 dead Carlisles and dying parents and even a dead BELLA!  and a dead Edward too! weep and wail, that's all I do....

I'm going to focus on the last chapter. THeir campfire, smores-flavored kiss was MAGIC!!!  I wish one of them would just slam lips on the other...gah...love is hard, no matter what your age!

Thank you for the updates, even if they make me cry. :)



Author's Response:

Aw!  We hated hurting our darling Chubward!  It was horrifying, but necessary to the story.  I know right?  What can take them from here to there?

Well, these are the only deaths in this story, so that much you can take as relief!

I wish I said we would take you to better times in the next chapter, but alas, no.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:23 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

how sad, **sniff** But I love your story, this was really emotional. please update soon



Author's Response:

It is a tough tough chapter.

We're so glad you're reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: mahonm2 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:18 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

Wow, they shared something so horrific together and got through it together. I can't wait to see what happens to make this go downhill. It seems like a fairytale friendship that would outlast everything. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Alas, you're about to find out the first part of the story of their separation....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: loreleikate (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:18 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

How could we not fall in love with Chubby Edward?  Especially in your very talented hands? 

This chapter broke my heart and made me love E/B even more than I already did.  Nice job - even with all the trauma it caused.  :)



Author's Response:

Chubward is so darling.  We want to cuddle him all the time.  These two kids are so in love but just don't know what name to put on it...

Thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:15 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

My heart is breaking right about now, that was so sad.  That is a very tough blow for anyone, around Christmas no less so I'm sure this will have alot to do with what seperates them.  Love this story so much!



Author's Response:

Actually, this has nothing to do with it, fondly enough.  Both of them suffered greatly with this, but it's not what tears them apart.

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