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Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:20 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Wow, typical Edward. If he would have just shut the eff for a few minutes and listened to what Bella was trying to say then the last eight years of misery would have been a moot point. However, I think Bella should have let him pick her up, but until I know exactly why she didn't I'll hold off on any smart ass comments.
Author's Response: Yeah....Edward jumped the gun. He was an ass....he was heartbroken though. BPOV is up next and is only worse.....sniffles.....
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:14 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I am so excited this updated. I am at work which is total fail and I needed a distraction. Needless to say I probably won't do much more work b/c now I need to go and read the forum posts. Of course Jacob had soemthing to do with the blow up. How did I not see that coming? I can't wait for Bella's pov now. One question has been answered but now I have so many more. Awesome post!
Author's Response: I cruised the forums at work too....with my boss....LOL! She was laughing at me.
More is coming your way......sobs...it is bad.....really bad.....
Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:10 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I may hate the song but I think it works for what Edward wanted to say. But if I was there I would have pulled a Rosalie a slapped him - Or maybe even punched him - for calling Bella a whore. I mean come on Edward it's Bella. BELLA. You know her and she would never do that to you you dumby.
Great chapter girls. Can't wait for Bella's POV!!
Author's Response: Edward facepalms and shakes head "itold you they would hate me!"
Tammy and Ellie coo and hold out their arms "Come here and let us comfort you."
Edward walks up only to get bitchslapped. "Now man up and go apologize."
Edward tucks tail between legs and slinks to the next chapter......
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:09 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I so thought I was going to hate him, but I can't. Was he right in what he said? No, but he was a 18 year old guy who just had his heart broken in front of the entire school. I don't think that she wanted to kiss to that fucker, but to him it looked like she did. It didn't help matters that she came late for reasons unknow. For all Edward knew she was with jacob fuckface the entire time. I think if roles had been reversed she would have done pretty much the same thing and their friends still would have been on her side.
Author's Response: Poor Eddie. He was heartbroken....now he is just broken after so many readers beat him up over this.....
Can you comfort him? He needs some love....
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
OH NOEZ!!!! Damn that Jacob Black! I know Bella loves Edward too and she would never have willingly kissed Jacob! What a jerk! I got teary eyed when Edward sorta-kinda called her a whore! So sad..... :-( Oh Chubward!!!
THanks SO much for updating. I cannot wait to read this from BPOV!
Great chapter...I cried...but it was still GOOD...LOL
xo
Mel
Author's Response: Oh Chubward....how could you say that to Bella? How could you think she didn't care?
BPOV is up next, please be warned that it is not pretty and you may need professional help once you have finished reading it. I was curled in a fetal position in the corner.....
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:59 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Lol, wow guys. Just, wow!
First it starts off all light and fluffy, then you build up the anticipation about Edward finally confessing his feelings to Bella. Then, hang on to your hats, that idiocity happened and Edward's inner monster is let out.
Wow.
He even called her a whore in proper etiquette without actually calling her a whore. Smooth.
Fantastic job, Tammy!
I can't wait to hear Bella's side of what happened.
Stupid Jacob Fucking Black. *Grunt*
Author's Response: I like building it up only to drop it at your feet. It creates an illusion of false hope and security and then I SMASH your dreams.....lol!
Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Ellie is up next and it is a doozy *nods head and pops two Xanax, swallowing them down with a swig of Vodka before passing bottle to guy in red fluffy hat shuffling cards*
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:49 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
perfect hs angst remember it wiell
Author's Response: Shudders and curls into fetal position....me too......
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:36 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I'm hoping this is just Jake trying to take advantage of Bella & Edward misunderstanding the whole thing!
Author's Response: Yup, pretty close.....
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:28 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Longer chapters, please!!!! Poor Edward, poor Bella!
Author's Response: Longer chapters or faster updates? We keep 'em short but bring you more.....
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:13 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I just want to cry. I think I might still. Poor baby chubward. Poor, poor chubward. He went through all that and then basically called her a whore. That must of hurt Bella very bad and I can't wait to hear her side of the story.
I want to rip laurens fake ass nails out and gouge Jessica's eyes out with them. Then I want to stick a disco stick up Mike's ass.
Jacob Black will suffer a slow painful death by having his nuts ripped off and then huung by a tree. These people are rediculous. Picking on Chubward.
Well, I can't be too mad at you ladies. I know they had to have something bad happen to them for them to get back to the point in the begining. But I am telling you now. They had better be making up because if I had to go through Chubwards and Protectella's pain then I better see some good sexin' with Hotward and Bella. All I'm saying.
I know ya'll got those chapters sitting pretty on your computers waiting to be let loose. Ellie I have already warned you that I would come and take it so update soon or no amount of PMJ will save you. *glares*
OK, now that I am done with my rant, it was a great chapter. The emotion was awesome (even though I didn't like it) and your heart just rips for the poor guy. I think you ladies are doing great and this is quickly becoming one of my favorite E/B ships. That is saying alot form a Jasper's Darlin'. Keep up the good work ladies.
Izzy
Author's Response: I was laughing so hard by the time I finished reading this! Disco stick......bahahahahaha!
We do have chappies sitting pretty on our computers and just to appease you, and so you won't chase us with the disco stick from Mike's ass, we have the next one in queue already.
You rock!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:45 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Too stunned at Edward's stupidity to leave the winning review. His insecurity is so great, he cannot see what's clearly before him. Too late, he wakes up out of his haze, only to find he's ruined his friendship and dashed his chances with Bella. Ugh. Sometimes boys are so stupid. Even Edward.
I can't believe Emmett's not going to give Edward a sound thrashing. But I bet that Edward will chastise and punish himself far beyond whatever anyone could do to him physically.
Really eager to hear Bella's POV to see what happened with Jacob Black (ASS!!!)...
Author's Response: LOL! I think we left many in shock with this one.....
The next chapter is already in queue so you won't be left waiting for too long...
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:38 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Ouch!! Over react much Dickward?? Way to not even wait for an explanation. Right now I'm not very happy with Chubward. Bring on Bellas point of view. And why would you ask us not to get mad at Bella? Looks like she's not the one at fault here.
Author's Response: No Edward was the one who said the "W" word. He is the one that fucked it up.....but Bella does bad things too. Just wait and see.
Reviewer: bresmommy92402 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:25 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Your story's wonderful! Each chapter gets better and better. I'm drawn in from the first word and find myself disappointed when each chapter ends. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! We appreciate your kind words!
Reviewer: tuff-duck (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Prologue
nawwww!!!! update soon!!! gah. i hate jacob. i love taylor lautner. but i hate jacob. hmph.
Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:15 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Ok I am trying not to condemn Bella like you asked...and I'm hoping things were twisted in Edward's point of view, seeing as how he was so upset, because the way he described it, she was not struggling at all, and if someone was forcing themselves on me, I'd think that I'd be struggling hardcore. *taking deep breath* I'm trusting you girls, but right now, I am team Chubward!!
Author's Response: Take a valium before reading next chapter....just a warning.....
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:08 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Aww man, why wouldn't he listen? I shouldn't have read this early in the morning. Now I need a breakfast food that requires syrup and sausage to make me feel better lol. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Sausage to go with Edward being a Twatwaffle as one reader coined him?
Reviewer: mahonm2 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:54 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Wow, Edward turned so harsh towards Bella too quickly. He should have at least listened to Bella for one moment and he would have realized she was telling the truth. He has been through alot and felt like he lost his one constant in his life, so I understand him lashing out. But having said that, he lashed out at the wrong person and what a horrible thing to say to someone you love. This just shows how much growing up he needs to do. I can't wait to see BPOV and the fallout from this. I want to see how he fell into becoming a manwhore and what Bella did when she moved away from him. I feel so bad that his harsh words are going to drive her away.
You girls are doing a great job. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: He feels totally betrayed by Bella, who was the last constant in his life. Yes he overreacted, but he is not thinking clearly. He will be sorry.
Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:22 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
OK, so I am not original but I do love this story. I kinda cant wait for Dr Edward to bring us back to the present from chapter 1...
Author's Response: Dr. Edward Chiselpants...yummmmmm! He is coming soon.
Reviewer: jujub2702 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:14 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
not gonna be an original review but I just loved this chapter hope to have another one soon
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to drop us a line. The next chapter is awaiting validation!
Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I don't care how you write Bellas POV - as far as I'm concerned it's all her fault. (I can't believe that I hate a fictional character so much!! (Think it might have more to do with that moody cow Kristen Stewart!!)). Anyway Mike and Jessica saw what was happenning in the hallway plus they had time to tell Chubward - so there was plenty of time for Bella to push Jacob off if it was unwanted - a swift knee in the goolies would have done it if she wasn't strong enough to push him (although she was a ble to do it without a problem after she'd seen that Chubard had spotted them). Plus (and I'm not an expert on the Prom as we don't have it in the UK). But who on earth arranges to meet their date there? She should have gone to the Cullen house first or let Chubb pick her up. I don't care what fabulous surprise she had for him. Sorry I'm feeling a bit grumpy but I'm into week 3 of the flu and I just want Chubward to come tuck me in ;-). so I suppose this is the catalyst that made Chubb run off to college.....?
Author's Response: Awwww! Don't be hating on Protectivella! She has her reasons for being late........just trust in us when we say that they both make big mistakes......BOTH of them.....
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:59 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Edward and his douche reaction will he ever learn
Author's Response: He will earn...eventually.......
Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:55 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
GAH SO SHORT!!!!!
You girls are killing me with these tiny chapters. I know it means quicker updates but i just want to be able to keep on reading more and more and more and more. Im interested to see this chapter from Bella's pov but i have to say that i said it was going to be something to do with Jacob that drove them apart. Its just the way it should be. I was glad you included some Cullen temper in there. I never see Edward as a "take it calmly" kind of guy especially when it comes to Bella. The fire you put behind his tyrade just helped to show how much he cares for her. Reading her pov is going to be even more heart breaking tho because there will be no anger, just the pain of having the person you love think your a whore and leave you bleeding on the floor at your prom.
Author's Response: NAH....had to show a temper, he is only human. He has put up silently with a lot of BS in his life, but when push comes to shove, he can blow up like the rest of us.
Poor Bella is up next.....you may need a hug after reading.
Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:20 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Ouch. That was really harsh.
Please update soon. I know that it would hurt knowing how this is going to happen from Bella's POV, but I have to know what happens next.
Great story :)
Author's Response: Harsh it was, but it had to be for our story to move forward. BPOV is heartbreakingly good.....
Reviewer: Dominatall (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:13 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I went back and reread chapter 1 after reading this. I understand it better now,
God I hate that Jacob Black! (although Taylor makes it hard to)
I 'm really loving this story....if theres more than 1 update in my mail box, I alway read this 1 first!!!! :)
Author's Response: Keep your eyes open as the next update will be in any minute!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:10 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Poor Edward! I detest Jacob, mike, Lauren, and Jessica--maybe you could do an outtake where Edward goes all Carrie on them. That would definitely lift my spirits after that heartbreak! :)
Author's Response: Emmett could lock them all in the gym and dance outside the doors while Edward laughs maniacally and dumps wolf shit all over them.....lol!
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