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Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:59 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Lol, wow guys. Just, wow!

First it starts off all light and fluffy, then you build up the anticipation about Edward finally confessing his feelings to Bella. Then, hang on to your hats, that idiocity happened and Edward's inner monster is let out.


He even called her a whore in proper etiquette without actually calling her a whore. Smooth.

Fantastic job, Tammy!

I can't wait to hear Bella's side of what happened.

Stupid Jacob Fucking Black. *Grunt*

Author's Response:

I like building it up only to drop it at your feet.  It creates an illusion of false hope and security and then I SMASH your!

Thank you so much.  I am so glad you enjoyed it.  Ellie is up next and it is a doozy  *nods head and pops two Xanax, swallowing them down with a swig of Vodka before passing bottle to guy in red fluffy hat shuffling cards*

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:49 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

perfect hs angst   remember it wiell

Author's Response:

Shudders and curls into fetal too......

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:36 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I'm hoping this is just Jake trying to take advantage of Bella & Edward misunderstanding the whole thing! 

Author's Response:

Yup, pretty close.....

Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:28 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Longer chapters, please!!!!  Poor Edward, poor Bella!

Author's Response:

Longer chapters or faster updates?   We keep 'em short but bring you more.....

Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:13 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I just want to cry. I think I might still. Poor baby chubward. Poor, poor chubward. He went through all that and then basically called her a whore. That must of hurt Bella very bad and I can't wait to hear her side of the story. 

I want to rip laurens fake ass nails out and gouge Jessica's eyes out with them. Then I want to stick a disco stick up Mike's ass.

Jacob Black will suffer a slow painful death by having his nuts ripped off and then huung by a tree. These people are rediculous. Picking on Chubward.

Well, I can't be too mad at you ladies. I know they had to have something bad happen to them for them to get back to the point in the begining. But I am telling you now. They had better be making up because if I had to go through Chubwards and Protectella's pain then I better see some good sexin' with Hotward and Bella. All I'm saying.

I know ya'll got those chapters sitting pretty on your computers waiting to be let loose. Ellie I have already warned you that I would come and take it so update soon or no amount of PMJ will save you. *glares*

OK, now that I am done with my rant, it was a great chapter. The emotion was awesome (even though I didn't like it) and your heart just rips for the poor guy. I think you ladies are doing great and this is quickly becoming one of my favorite E/B ships. That is saying alot form a Jasper's Darlin'. Keep up the good work ladies. 


Author's Response:

I was laughing so hard by the time I finished reading this!  Disco stick......bahahahahaha!

We do have chappies sitting pretty on our computers and just to appease you, and so you won't chase us with the disco stick from Mike's ass, we have the next one in queue already.

You rock!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:45 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Too stunned at Edward's stupidity to leave the winning review.  His insecurity is so great, he cannot see what's clearly before him.  Too late, he wakes up out of his haze, only to find he's ruined his friendship and dashed his chances with Bella.  Ugh.  Sometimes boys are so stupid.  Even Edward.

I can't believe Emmett's not going to give Edward a sound thrashing.  But I bet that Edward will chastise and punish himself far beyond whatever anyone could do to him physically. 

Really eager to hear Bella's POV to see what happened with Jacob Black (ASS!!!)...

Author's Response:

LOL!  I think we left many in shock with this one.....

The next chapter is already in queue so you won't be left waiting for too long...

Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:38 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Ouch!! Over react much Dickward?? Way to not even wait for an explanation. Right now I'm not very happy with Chubward. Bring on Bellas point of view. And why would you ask us not to get mad at Bella?  Looks like she's not the one at fault here.

Author's Response:

No Edward was the one who said the "W" word.  He is the one that fucked it up.....but Bella does bad things too.  Just wait and see.

Reviewer: bresmommy92402 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:25 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Your story's wonderful! Each chapter gets better and better. I'm drawn in from the first word and find myself disappointed when each chapter ends. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!  We appreciate your kind words!

Reviewer: tuff-duck (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Prologue

nawwww!!!! update soon!!! gah. i hate jacob. i love taylor lautner. but i hate jacob. hmph.

Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:15 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Ok I am trying not to condemn Bella like you asked...and I'm hoping things were twisted in Edward's point of view, seeing as how he was so upset, because the way he described it, she was not struggling at all, and if someone was forcing themselves on me, I'd think that I'd be struggling hardcore. *taking deep breath* I'm trusting you girls, but right now, I am team Chubward!!

Author's Response:

Take a valium before reading next chapter....just a warning.....

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:08 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Aww man, why wouldn't he listen? I shouldn't have read this early in the morning. Now I need a breakfast food that requires syrup and sausage to make me feel better lol. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Sausage to go with Edward being a Twatwaffle as one reader coined him?

Reviewer: mahonm2 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:54 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Wow, Edward turned so harsh towards Bella too quickly. He should have at least listened to Bella for one moment and he would have realized she was telling the truth. He has been through alot and felt like he lost his one constant in his life, so I understand him lashing out. But having said that, he lashed out at the wrong person and what a horrible thing to say to someone you love. This just shows how much growing up he needs to do. I can't wait to see BPOV and the fallout from this. I want to see how he fell into becoming a manwhore and what Bella did when she moved away from him. I feel so bad that his harsh words are going to drive her away.

You girls are doing a great job. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

He feels totally betrayed by Bella, who was the last constant in his life.  Yes he overreacted, but he is not thinking clearly.  He will be sorry.

Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:22 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

OK, so I am not original but I do love this story. I kinda cant wait for Dr Edward to bring us back to the present from chapter 1...

Author's Response:

Dr. Edward Chiselpants...yummmmmm!  He is coming soon.

Reviewer: jujub2702 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:14 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

not gonna be an original review but I just loved this chapter hope to have another one soon 

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to drop us a line.  The next chapter is awaiting validation!

Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I don't care how you write Bellas POV - as far as I'm concerned it's all her fault.  (I can't believe that I hate a fictional character so much!!  (Think it might have more to do with that moody cow Kristen Stewart!!)).   Anyway Mike and Jessica saw what was happenning in the hallway plus they had time to tell Chubward - so there was plenty of time for Bella to push Jacob off if it was unwanted - a swift knee in the goolies would have done it if she wasn't strong enough to push him (although she was a ble to do it without a problem after she'd seen that Chubard had spotted them).  Plus (and I'm not an expert on the Prom as we don't have it in the UK).  But who on earth arranges to meet their date there?  She should have gone to the Cullen house first or let Chubb pick her up.  I don't care what fabulous surprise she had for him.  Sorry I'm feeling a bit grumpy but I'm into week 3 of the flu and I just want Chubward to come tuck me in ;-).  so I suppose this is the catalyst that made Chubb run off to college.....?

Author's Response:

Awwww!  Don't be hating on Protectivella!  She has her reasons for being late........just trust in us when we say that they both make big mistakes......BOTH of them.....

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:59 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Edward  and his douche reaction will he ever learn

Author's Response:

He will earn...eventually.......

Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:55 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture


You girls are killing me with these tiny chapters. I know it means quicker updates but i just want to be able to keep on reading more and more and more and more. Im interested to see this chapter from Bella's pov but i have to say that i said it was going to be something to do with Jacob that drove them apart. Its just the way it should be. I was glad you included some Cullen temper in there. I never see Edward as a "take it calmly" kind of guy especially when it comes to Bella. The fire you put behind his tyrade just helped to show how much he cares for her. Reading her pov is going to be even more heart breaking tho because there will be no anger, just the pain of having the person you love think your a whore and leave you bleeding on the floor at your prom.

Author's Response:

NAH....had to show a temper, he is only human.  He has put up silently with a lot of BS in his life, but when push comes to shove, he can blow up like the rest of us.

Poor Bella is up may need a hug after reading.

Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:20 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Ouch. That was really harsh.

Please update soon. I know that it would hurt knowing how this is going to happen from Bella's POV, but I have to know what happens next.

Great story :)

Author's Response:

Harsh it was, but it had to be for our story to move forward.  BPOV is heartbreakingly good.....

Reviewer: Dominatall (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:13 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I went back and reread chapter 1 after reading this. I understand it better now,

God I hate that Jacob Black! (although Taylor makes it hard to)

I 'm really loving this story....if theres more than 1 update in my mail box, I alway read this 1 first!!!! :)

Author's Response:

Keep your eyes open as the next update will be in any minute!

Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:10 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Poor Edward! I detest Jacob, mike, Lauren, and Jessica--maybe you could do an outtake where Edward goes all Carrie on them. That would definitely lift my spirits after that heartbreak! :)

Author's Response:

Emmett could lock them all in the gym and dance outside the doors while Edward laughs maniacally and dumps wolf shit all over!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:09 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I can't wait for the next chapter. In general I like this story. A lot actually. But such a typical prom drama? C'mon, ladies, you can do better than that. I somehow believe BPOV has some surprises in store, right?

Anyway, please update soon!

Author's Response:

Oh, it gets better....and worse if you catch my drift.  These two manage to hurt each other in ways you won't even believe before this story is done.

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:08 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

So, why would we hate Bella?  It seems like Edward was the douche in that picture?  I know he was acting out on his feelings but he was rather harsh there.  Ah to hear her side of the story!  Great job with our little Chubward's story.  Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Yes, Edward is a douche.  We were so suprosed at the amount of strong feeling brought out in ppl by this chapter.  We can only hope that the next one does the same.....

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

OMG...poor Edward....Bella's always kissin' that damn dog!  Jeez!!  Can't wait to hear how he "forced" her to do that...hmmmmmm.  But, alas, you said not to be mad at Bella yet....we'll see.  Of course, I'd rather be mad at her than Edward but still....can't wait for an update, gotta know the other side!

Author's Response:

Grrrr...Jacob Black and his damn dogbreath!  How dare he thwart our dear Chubbyward's grand gesture?

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:04 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Well Tammy, that's not what I was expecting although I should have known that Jacob would be tangled up in it somehow.  I'm not hating on Bella, in fact I'm hating on my beautiful Chubward more.  I know that he was in shock after what he saw and that his poor heart was breaking but he was pretty quick to believe that Bella could do that to him.  Yes he's earned the Douchenozzle title. 

Aaggghhh!!  I can't believe I'm defending Bella and turning on my Edward - what have you done to me????


Author's Response:

AWWWW!  I made you turn on lil Eddie?

I warned you that he was a douchenozzle, but no, you and amorebella88 still had to have your way with him.....repeatedly.

Maybe you can convert him?  Thats what it was about, wasn't it?  Rehabilitating him.....keep trying Annette!  Keep trying.....

Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:23 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

Awww, that was so sad.  Poor Edward, I can't even begin to imagine that kind of loss at that age. 

I am really enjoying this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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