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Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:17 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
As always its amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ravendiva (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:07 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Aww poor misguided Edward he's so angry and heartbroken... Young love tends to make you go all wacky. But that's where my sympaathy for Edward ends. Canon Edward is know to act rashly sometime he can be such a ... twatwaffle.
And Bella... that girl needs to grow a pair...sorry this is your story... not mine..
I really am loving your story, so I'm expecting yo to fix this mess..lol
Look forward to reading more!!
Author's Response: Edward can be a twatwaffle, and Bella is his special sauce.....snickers and ducks head.....
Thank you for sticking with us, we WILL work through this....eventually.
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:12 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
::glares at white box::
Jacob-fucking-Black. Ew. OMG, ew. I hate him, with a fiery passion of a million suns. I swear, in ff one of the major ships should be Jacob and Tanya, b/c they so conveniently mess everything up. All the time. They have so much in common, too.
Okay, before I get my BGP's in a bunch, I'll wait for Bella's POV on it all.
I'm sick to my stomach for Chubward, though. Poor thing. I don't think he would have reacted so strongly, though, if Mike and the trollop brigade didn't rub his nose in it. That was just awful, and my heart bleeds for him right now.
Author's Response: I want to cuddle Edward to my breasts and tell him it will be okay, but find myself sobbing into his shirt after Ellie reduces me to a puddle of sniveling snot in her next chapter.....get ready.....sniffles
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
WOW!!!! Is all I can say.
Author's Response: Yup, he screwed that up didn't he?
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:53 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Whoa, a reviewer contest. Creative. That was a heartbreaking chapter. But I guess that Edward not believing Bella seemed strange to me. If they are of the same heart was it just his insecurity that wanted to believe that she didn't want him? Self fulfilling prophesy? Otherwise it wouldn't make sense for him to think so ill of her. I am going with insecurity. But then again he was so strong in his language toward her which doesn't speak of insecurity. I guess I will just have to wait. :) Thanks so much for writing. I continue to be intrigued by the journey these two remain on.
Author's Response: i am so glad you are with us as their journey has just begun. Ellie and I have so much in store for you......keep reading! Thank you again.
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:36 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Ouch. I'm sick for both of them. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Us too....please hold us....and pass the vodka, we need a stiff drink!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Pardon my french, but FUCK ME HARD!!
You are KIDDING ME, Edward! what a DICK! SO much for him liking who he is!! gah!! I cannot believe he said that shit to her - especially after the last year and a half! OH MY GOD!!
bu...bu..bu...I'm stuttering! I'm sputtering! I'm outraged!! I'm horrified!!
And poor yous! you had to type that shit!!
I want to kick him in the nuts, slap him upside the head, AND hug him! damn him and his rabid insecurities!! Good for Rose. I wish Emmett had punched him!
Oh, this is breaking my heart. :(((((( sniffle sniffle....what a MESS. His parents would be SO ashamed of him!!
I'm going back to bed.
Author's Response: This is douchebaggery at it's finest! You are sputtering, outraged, horrified......but we know you secretly love it.....LOL!
Gah, he will be ashamed of himself....trust me....this will scar him....and her.
Get ready for MAJOR angst up next....and then some.
Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:57 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I love this story so much! This chapter gave me chills; the angst was nailed so perfectly! I'm afraid for Bella's POV, but I'm excited that we're finally getting to the prologue. This story is amazing, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Be afraid....be very afraid. It goes from bad, to worse.....
Reviewer: twilove (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:29 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
That was overly dramatic. Loved it.
Author's Response: Well thank you very much :)
Reviewer: Suchablue (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:26 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
So I checked to see if this story was done because I wasn't planning on reading it until it was finished. Well while I was scrolling down to read the authors note for some indication of when it's ending I ended up skimming the chapter. Then I ended up reading. Then I ended up crying. I haven't even read this story and I thought the end of this chapter was completely heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Stay with us...we update regularly....in fact there is another chapter in queue as we speak. Mind you it is more heartfail, but hell, you know it's gonna be worth it....
Thank you so much for the vote of confidence. We are enjoying writing this so much.
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:11 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
uh oh assward, no girl ever 'deserves it.' will we get bella's pov on this since it's an important event?
Author's Response: No, nobody deserves it....EVER. Edward took his asshole pills instead of his cute pills.....please forgive his actions.
Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:51 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Oh God... Ok, I should have known better, but I read this chapter while bored in class on the BlackBerry... yeah, lots of tears welled up and I couldn't even let them out. This was heartbreaking, and I'm super sad that this had to happen, but am also glad that we've gotten to this point so we can see where they are headed. But wtf Bella, not cool reciprocating even a little bit...come on girl use your head! I'm positive that she was taking care of something for Edward, but still she could have created a scene or something! I know this isn't a very original review, but it IS my birthday and I'm kinda having a hard time with the whole being 25 thing (ugh) so, a sneak peek would be a nice pick me up, :) Still loving this story hard!
Author's Response: Okay.....We put the next chapter in queue, but I will try to get you a sneak peek in a PM.....just because it is your birthday and we made you cry....
Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chubbyward is blowing you kisses....
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:28 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
so can't say I was expecting that....I was so hoping our couple would get a kiss at least...but i totally understand why you went this way!
Argh, can't wait til next chapter...don't keep us waiting too long.
Author's Response: But alas.....no kiss.... :(
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:25 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Kleenex anyone? Ya I was teary eyed. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Pass the box this way...and hold me please....Ellie is going to destroy me with her next chapter.....
Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:20 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Wow, typical Edward. If he would have just shut the eff for a few minutes and listened to what Bella was trying to say then the last eight years of misery would have been a moot point. However, I think Bella should have let him pick her up, but until I know exactly why she didn't I'll hold off on any smart ass comments.
Author's Response: Yeah....Edward jumped the gun. He was an ass....he was heartbroken though. BPOV is up next and is only worse.....sniffles.....
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:14 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I am so excited this updated. I am at work which is total fail and I needed a distraction. Needless to say I probably won't do much more work b/c now I need to go and read the forum posts. Of course Jacob had soemthing to do with the blow up. How did I not see that coming? I can't wait for Bella's pov now. One question has been answered but now I have so many more. Awesome post!
Author's Response: I cruised the forums at work too....with my boss....LOL! She was laughing at me.
More is coming your way......sobs...it is bad.....really bad.....
Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:10 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I may hate the song but I think it works for what Edward wanted to say. But if I was there I would have pulled a Rosalie a slapped him - Or maybe even punched him - for calling Bella a whore. I mean come on Edward it's Bella. BELLA. You know her and she would never do that to you you dumby.
Great chapter girls. Can't wait for Bella's POV!!
Author's Response: Edward facepalms and shakes head "itold you they would hate me!"
Tammy and Ellie coo and hold out their arms "Come here and let us comfort you."
Edward walks up only to get bitchslapped. "Now man up and go apologize."
Edward tucks tail between legs and slinks to the next chapter......
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:09 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I so thought I was going to hate him, but I can't. Was he right in what he said? No, but he was a 18 year old guy who just had his heart broken in front of the entire school. I don't think that she wanted to kiss to that fucker, but to him it looked like she did. It didn't help matters that she came late for reasons unknow. For all Edward knew she was with jacob fuckface the entire time. I think if roles had been reversed she would have done pretty much the same thing and their friends still would have been on her side.
Author's Response: Poor Eddie. He was heartbroken....now he is just broken after so many readers beat him up over this.....
Can you comfort him? He needs some love....
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
OH NOEZ!!!! Damn that Jacob Black! I know Bella loves Edward too and she would never have willingly kissed Jacob! What a jerk! I got teary eyed when Edward sorta-kinda called her a whore! So sad..... :-( Oh Chubward!!!
THanks SO much for updating. I cannot wait to read this from BPOV!
Great chapter...I cried...but it was still GOOD...LOL
xo
Mel
Author's Response: Oh Chubward....how could you say that to Bella? How could you think she didn't care?
BPOV is up next, please be warned that it is not pretty and you may need professional help once you have finished reading it. I was curled in a fetal position in the corner.....
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:59 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Lol, wow guys. Just, wow!
First it starts off all light and fluffy, then you build up the anticipation about Edward finally confessing his feelings to Bella. Then, hang on to your hats, that idiocity happened and Edward's inner monster is let out.
Wow.
He even called her a whore in proper etiquette without actually calling her a whore. Smooth.
Fantastic job, Tammy!
I can't wait to hear Bella's side of what happened.
Stupid Jacob Fucking Black. *Grunt*
Author's Response: I like building it up only to drop it at your feet. It creates an illusion of false hope and security and then I SMASH your dreams.....lol!
Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Ellie is up next and it is a doozy *nods head and pops two Xanax, swallowing them down with a swig of Vodka before passing bottle to guy in red fluffy hat shuffling cards*
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:49 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
perfect hs angst remember it wiell
Author's Response: Shudders and curls into fetal position....me too......
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:36 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I'm hoping this is just Jake trying to take advantage of Bella & Edward misunderstanding the whole thing!
Author's Response: Yup, pretty close.....
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:28 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Longer chapters, please!!!! Poor Edward, poor Bella!
Author's Response: Longer chapters or faster updates? We keep 'em short but bring you more.....
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:13 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I just want to cry. I think I might still. Poor baby chubward. Poor, poor chubward. He went through all that and then basically called her a whore. That must of hurt Bella very bad and I can't wait to hear her side of the story.
I want to rip laurens fake ass nails out and gouge Jessica's eyes out with them. Then I want to stick a disco stick up Mike's ass.
Jacob Black will suffer a slow painful death by having his nuts ripped off and then huung by a tree. These people are rediculous. Picking on Chubward.
Well, I can't be too mad at you ladies. I know they had to have something bad happen to them for them to get back to the point in the begining. But I am telling you now. They had better be making up because if I had to go through Chubwards and Protectella's pain then I better see some good sexin' with Hotward and Bella. All I'm saying.
I know ya'll got those chapters sitting pretty on your computers waiting to be let loose. Ellie I have already warned you that I would come and take it so update soon or no amount of PMJ will save you. *glares*
OK, now that I am done with my rant, it was a great chapter. The emotion was awesome (even though I didn't like it) and your heart just rips for the poor guy. I think you ladies are doing great and this is quickly becoming one of my favorite E/B ships. That is saying alot form a Jasper's Darlin'. Keep up the good work ladies.
Izzy
Author's Response: I was laughing so hard by the time I finished reading this! Disco stick......bahahahahaha!
We do have chappies sitting pretty on our computers and just to appease you, and so you won't chase us with the disco stick from Mike's ass, we have the next one in queue already.
You rock!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:45 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Too stunned at Edward's stupidity to leave the winning review. His insecurity is so great, he cannot see what's clearly before him. Too late, he wakes up out of his haze, only to find he's ruined his friendship and dashed his chances with Bella. Ugh. Sometimes boys are so stupid. Even Edward.
I can't believe Emmett's not going to give Edward a sound thrashing. But I bet that Edward will chastise and punish himself far beyond whatever anyone could do to him physically.
Really eager to hear Bella's POV to see what happened with Jacob Black (ASS!!!)...
Author's Response: LOL! I think we left many in shock with this one.....
The next chapter is already in queue so you won't be left waiting for too long...
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