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Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:04 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

~sniff~ this sucks! the only good thing is that we are almost caught up and we can start getting them back together!

 

Great Chapter

Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:26 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

If we can't be mad at bella in this chapter, can we blame edward for over reacting? Ha.

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:47 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I'm not sure I believe this. Edward may be insecure, but he and Bella have shared too much for this to be a likely response. I know you wanted to create conflict, but this was too forced.

Now, don't get me wrong, I love this story. 

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:23 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Oi.  I've caught up and ended with this!?  Crap!  What a fool to believe the insecurities over his heart.  Why else would he believe she even had time to get involved with anyone but him?  Seriously?  And why blame her?  Why not help her as she breaks before him.  Stoopid boy!

Reviewer: basia (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:20 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Don't make us wait!!  Great story

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:35 AM · On: 1997-First day

Leaving love.  This is cute and entertaining.  I like these kind of storeis.  I'm enjoying this.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Why thank you very much!

Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:58 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I am totally loving this story.  I am anxious as hell to see how this goes.  I feel a kinship with Bella in the fact that we both fell in love with the fat kid.  We'll call mine "Chubolas".  Hopefully Edward doesn't go the route of Chubolas and slim down for a few years looking hot and now 13 years and two kids later be back to Chubward--yes he blames having kids...I know...WTF? That's my line. Either way, I still love Chubolas and hope to catch a glimpse of Chubward when he slims down and gets hot, with high hopes of him staying Hotward.



Author's Response:

Awww that is so cute!  Give Chubolas a hug for us.  BTW, Chiselward will stay Chiselward once he gets to that point.....

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:54 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

awwww no, sh*t sh*t sh*t , he did not just say that?! bloody Jacob...



Author's Response:

He did.....ducks and hides.......do you forgive him?  Will Bella?

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:42 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

awwww nice first kiss...

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:34 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Chubward is sweet, definitely.

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:33 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Holy mother of bad behviour Edward! You might be hurt but that's still not ok, I'm very very curious to see what Bella will tell us next.

Once again it's so heartbreaking, I can understand why he is so heart, he's so in love with her and then he finds her like that:-(



Author's Response:

Oh you just wait, the heartache only intensifies from here on out.....poor kids......

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:24 AM · On: 1997-First day

'Could be convenient in a couple of years.  At least for him.'

 ROTFL ha ha ha you did NOT just write that!



Author's Response:

Well we've all thunk it right?  C'mon, lil pixie Alice and taller than Edward Jasper.......omfg!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:08 AM · On: 1997-New kid

its a truth we all know. kids are cruel.  This makes me think i could have been a nicer person at school. their acceptance of each other is touching.

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Prologue

wow, I am caught up in these characters already!! (squeals like a girl)... recced on HL5 forum, had to see what they were all talking about! Any fic that likes to discuss the sex hair has got my imediate undivided attention, I am se-hair-obsessed (sigh)...

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:35 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

don't take this the wrong, but you guys seriously know how to make a girl cry. honestly, this is heartbreaking. you guys are totally awesome. i have a feeling that i'm going to like this story a lot better than 'up to speed'. hope you guys keep up the great work. really. looking forward to future stories written by you.

 

p.s.

this is the longest review i've ever written, so pls. treasure it. look out for my first ever twilight fan fic! it's called 'words of wisdom'. hope you like it. hoping you guys would like to be my co-writers. =D

~~@~~@~~

twlightrockhard



Author's Response:

We were going for tears, really! We are so glad you are enjoying our lil endeavour, and can't wait to read yours once it is up.  Please message us and remind us once it validates!  As for the co writing......hmmmmmm......sounds interesting.....

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:06 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

I hate you guys!!!!!!!!!!! you guys made me cry, which hasn't happened since i read 'up to speed'. you guys rock!



Author's Response:

Seriously?  Oh wow!  That is high praise indeed.....

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:38 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

wow, that was harsh



Author's Response:

Forgive us?

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:22 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

*GASP...runs to get a box of tissues...silent tears fall*

Ok I know you warned me about tears and the big girl panties but burned thru the few tissues I had in a matter of minutes reading about the prom. This was devastating! No wonder things only went down hill from there. How in the HELL could Edward think that of Bella after everything they have been thru?

 *Silently plots Edward's demise...ok maybe not demise but a serious butt kickin is in order*

I can't even imagine Bella's pain. It is only a wonder that she thinks she is now  his nemesis, a thorn to his heart.

It is with a heavy heart and a bit of trepidation that I await your next update from BPOV. I am now thrawlled with this story and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

We are thrilled to hear you are thrawlled.....BPOV is in queue so ppl don't have to wait for their dose of heartache.  PLease be ready for the next one, it will hurt, it will hurt bad.

We have a supposrt group started on our thread.....come and we will hold you and dry your tears.....

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:40 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

OMG so they didn't even get together in HS??? OMG  I feel so sad - they didn't get to be each other's firsts.  I can see there's more to the picture already - so what is going on??  Can't wait for her pov!!!



Author's Response:

The whole thing is so SAD!  BPOV is on its way, stay tuned

Reviewer: BlueLotusGirl (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:47 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Well, that certainly wasn't Chubward's finest moment. Part of me feels bad for him because I can understand how hurt he was. The other part of me is pissed because he KNOWS her better than that.



Author's Response:

His parents taught him better, and he knows it and will suffer MAJOR guilt over his actions.....he needs a hug....Bella too.

Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:45 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

*Gasp*

 

Nooooooooo!  Come back soon please!



Author's Response:

More on its way....

Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:35 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Oh my Lawd.  That was brutal. *deep breath, wipes tears*  ouch ouch ouch.  I can't wait to see Bella's POV, but man, it hurt just thinking about how she might feel.  Keep up the great work.  :o)



Author's Response:

BPOV is even more heartbreaking than his as she has no anger to temper her reactions and is stunned......gasps and wipes eyes.....please comfort me....

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:02 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Wow,  I'm utterly speechless, I read this straight through and I just can't stop the tears, OMG.  It's an amazing story, I feel so bad for both of them.  I'm not going to judge Edward, because I know what he has gone through. And yes, he probably did act too fast but he's so insecure.  I can only imagine what was going through his mind, not to mention Mike's mouth.  Poor Bella, I feel bad for her too.  I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter so that I can see it through Bella's POV.  I want to know what she had to do before the prom.  I must go and thank Jaspersizzy for rec'd this story to me.  Please hurry with the next update.....



Author's Response:

Tell Japsersizzy thank you from us too!  We are so glad you are enjoying the fic and feeling their pain.  It was hard to write, and only gets harder.....BPOV is up next and should be validated soon....

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:47 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT WAS HE THINKING?!?!?!?!

You know, I'd always liked Jake, until that time when he forcefully kissed Bella and when she hit him and broke her arm while doing it, he laughed, LAUGHED!!! What an asshole. Since then, I hate him (or really, really don't like him, hate is a strong word :P).

Awesome chapter ladies, as usual.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:26 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Do you know that I am SERIOUSLY heart broken here? As soon as the blasphemous word left his lips, my heart shattered into a million pieces, scattering to the ground and mixing with Bella's. 

Oh Edward...

He never even gaver her a chance. Not even the benefit of the doubt. His jealousy and fury was so blinding, so consuming that it drowned out all reason. More horrifically, it drowned out his love for his Bella. In one swift breath, he destroyed her, and himself in the process. 

I thank you for having had Alice, Emmett, Jasper, and Rose come to Bella's vehement defense. I imagine that this will further exacerbate Edward's self loathing now. I am fearful of the inevitable heart ache and suffering that is to come. Your prologue all but guaranteed it.

When I say that I am dying to read your next chapter, I say so with a desperate need to cling onto the image of a chubby Edward standing in his piano room, donning a tuxedo t-shirt, holding his heart in the palm of his out-stretched hand towards his loving Bella.

Sigh....

Sigh...



Author's Response:

We are sending Edward over to your house in his tuxedo shirt for comfort.....please be kind.  His heart has been shattered and in turn he has shattered the woman he loves.  Le sigh.....

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