Don't make us wait!!  Great story

I am totally loving this story.  I am anxious as hell to see how this goes.  I feel a kinship with Bella in the fact that we both fell in love with the fat kid.  We'll call mine "Chubolas".  Hopefully Edward doesn't go the route of Chubolas and slim down for a few years looking hot and now 13 years and two kids later be back to Chubward--yes he blames having kids...I know...WTF? That's my line. Either way, I still love Chubolas and hope to catch a glimpse of Chubward when he slims down and gets hot, with high hopes of him staying Hotward.

Author's Response:

Awww that is so cute!  Give Chubolas a hug for us.  BTW, Chiselward will stay Chiselward once he gets to that point.....

awwww nice first kiss...

Holy mother of bad behviour Edward! You might be hurt but that's still not ok, I'm very very curious to see what Bella will tell us next.

Once again it's so heartbreaking, I can understand why he is so heart, he's so in love with her and then he finds her like that:-(

Author's Response:

Oh you just wait, the heartache only intensifies from here on out.....poor kids......

its a truth we all know. kids are cruel.  This makes me think i could have been a nicer person at school. their acceptance of each other is touching.

don't take this the wrong, but you guys seriously know how to make a girl cry. honestly, this is heartbreaking. you guys are totally awesome. i have a feeling that i'm going to like this story a lot better than 'up to speed'. hope you guys keep up the great work. really. looking forward to future stories written by you.

 

p.s.

this is the longest review i've ever written, so pls. treasure it. look out for my first ever twilight fan fic! it's called 'words of wisdom'. hope you like it. hoping you guys would like to be my co-writers. =D

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twlightrockhard

Author's Response:

We were going for tears, really! We are so glad you are enjoying our lil endeavour, and can't wait to read yours once it is up.  Please message us and remind us once it validates!  As for the co writing......hmmmmmm......sounds interesting.....

wow, that was harsh

Author's Response:

Forgive us?

OMG so they didn't even get together in HS??? OMG  I feel so sad - they didn't get to be each other's firsts.  I can see there's more to the picture already - so what is going on??  Can't wait for her pov!!!

Author's Response:

The whole thing is so SAD!  BPOV is on its way, stay tuned

*Gasp*

 

Nooooooooo!  Come back soon please!

Author's Response:

More on its way....

Wow,  I'm utterly speechless, I read this straight through and I just can't stop the tears, OMG.  It's an amazing story, I feel so bad for both of them.  I'm not going to judge Edward, because I know what he has gone through. And yes, he probably did act too fast but he's so insecure.  I can only imagine what was going through his mind, not to mention Mike's mouth.  Poor Bella, I feel bad for her too.  I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter so that I can see it through Bella's POV.  I want to know what she had to do before the prom.  I must go and thank Jaspersizzy for rec'd this story to me.  Please hurry with the next update.....

Author's Response:

Tell Japsersizzy thank you from us too!  We are so glad you are enjoying the fic and feeling their pain.  It was hard to write, and only gets harder.....BPOV is up next and should be validated soon....

Do you know that I am SERIOUSLY heart broken here? As soon as the blasphemous word left his lips, my heart shattered into a million pieces, scattering to the ground and mixing with Bella's. 

Oh Edward...

He never even gaver her a chance. Not even the benefit of the doubt. His jealousy and fury was so blinding, so consuming that it drowned out all reason. More horrifically, it drowned out his love for his Bella. In one swift breath, he destroyed her, and himself in the process. 

I thank you for having had Alice, Emmett, Jasper, and Rose come to Bella's vehement defense. I imagine that this will further exacerbate Edward's self loathing now. I am fearful of the inevitable heart ache and suffering that is to come. Your prologue all but guaranteed it.

When I say that I am dying to read your next chapter, I say so with a desperate need to cling onto the image of a chubby Edward standing in his piano room, donning a tuxedo t-shirt, holding his heart in the palm of his out-stretched hand towards his loving Bella.

Sigh....

Sigh...

Author's Response:

We are sending Edward over to your house in his tuxedo shirt for comfort.....please be kind.  His heart has been shattered and in turn he has shattered the woman he loves.  Le sigh.....

It broke my heart and sure she broke his heart!  Sure, Edward was harsh but I guess his seeping blood became frozen acid and he had to spill it before he burnt in it. 

 

Author's Response:

This whole chapter broke our heart!  And it only gets worse from here on out.....

P.S. I'm siding with Edward here. I was so mad in Eclipse when Bella kissed Jacob the 2nd time (grrrr.... I shouldn't even have to say the 2nd time let alone Bella and Jacob kiss...) and Edward didn't even get mad. This makes up for it. You can't honestly expect him to be too understanding like he is in the books.

~ B

Author's Response:

If I was Eddie in Eclipse I would have thrown Bells out on her ass for that stunt....lol!  Thanks