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Reviewer: BlueLotusGirl (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:40 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Poor, poor Bella. That was just awful. I hardly know what to say...

Author's Response:

We have nothing either.....sorry...pass the vodka please.....

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:39 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Wow.  I'm kind of surprised Bella just walked away like that.  I understand she is hurt by what Edward said but jeez.  A little dramatic.  She's better than me b/c once I had a chance to think about it I would have had to go back and kick Edwards ass and Jacobs.  You are doing a great job girls.  I love where this story is going.  Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Yes her anger didn't kick in, only her self loathing.  She has issues already over her mother's seemingly disregard for her while she was growing up, and this only strengthens that belief that she isn't worth it.

Reviewer: KatAg (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

so sad. ..

Author's Response:

:(  it is.....

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Well  I do understand but I think she could have at least told him how hurt she was.

Oh well I guess time will help. Edward was a dimwit and should known Bella would never hurt him. So now they both have to suffer.

Update soon.


Author's Response:

Yes they both will suffer and this incident will shape both of them.......

Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

boohoo boohoo - hurry with the next update puuullleeezzz

Author's Response:

It is on its way!

Reviewer: twilove (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:34 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

*sob* *sob*. Okay now get these kids back together!

Author's Response:

It will take some time but that is where we would like to head with them.....

Reviewer: Robkat Ellie (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:32 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Damn these tears!

Chubward's so pig-headed!!!!!!!!! They were so close to being a true heart's breaking for them!

But I know this is E&B we're talking about, here, and despite the heartfail, I trust that all will be well eventually... (I hope? Yes?) 

Thank you for such a wonderful story!And keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Yes they were darn close and then he had to fuck it up with his stupid temper.  Damn you Chubward......

Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:31 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Awww Bellaaa.  I hope to see Alice and Emmett's wrath through Edward's point of view next.  How many of Bella's missed calls and texts were from Edward?  At least one, I hope.  Poor Charlie.

Author's Response:

All of the calls and text were from him.  He is trying to apologize.

Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:31 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Oh man, we need a girls' night out after that one. Bella needs more than just a 3,000 mile plane ride to get over this night. And poor Edward! He must feel horrible and now she's just gone.

*group hug*



Author's Response:

I agree, with vodka and ice cream.  Call us and we'll set it up.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:30 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Poor Bella! What a lousy night, to find out under rotten circumstances that Edward felt the same!

Author's Response:

How more heartbreaking can you get?  I agree, what a shitty night for our poor girl.

Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Prologue

Yes I want more!  On to chapter 2.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:25 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Hey OMG BELLA POOR POOR BELLA shes moving away =[ it was really well written- so dramatic =]

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  We are glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:24 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

GAH!! I'm srsly crying! WTH? Ugh. This was just sad. So very sad.

My heart breaks for the both of them.

I cannot wait to see what happens next. In fact, I will be on pins and needles waiting... :-)

Thanks SO very much for updating.



Author's Response:

You aer so welcome!  We are glad you are enjoying the fic!  Keep reading.

Reviewer: bookluver (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:23 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You


i cannot tell you how much I like this story. It is the perfect blend of angst and good writing. I look forward to it and chack constantly to see if it has been updated. Please write and update soon. I want to get to the scene when they are reunited.

Author's Response:

Gah!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:23 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Talk about dramatics!!  Poor Edward and Bella!  Edward jumped to conclusions, heartbroken and Bella decided to flee the town, heartbroken.  Apparently talking things out were not an option for our two friends.  :-(  Can't wait to see what happens next...holy cow!

Author's Response:

They both need a lesson in communication!   Let's talk some sense into them, shall we.....

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:22 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

So sad. Can you say overreaction???? Both of them. Wow. That's beyond sad that lives could change like that so drastically over something that could have been dealt with in an apology and conversation. Wow.

Author's Response:

Yes. We can say it....and did....

Things have a way of getting blown even bigger when not dealt with properly.  There is a lesson to be learned here.

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:21 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Sad, yes. I'm a little pissed at her running though. I hate it when they run, it's so stupid.Gah, so all of this, all the hurt and crap comes from a massive misunderstanding?

Snap. Oh, snap. That sucks. At least they should be able to get through it, I mean, yeah they did horrible to each other, but we learn, we grow, right? Right?

I need to be held. Can you send some version of Edward my way. I need consoling.

And a knife to taint shank Jacob Black with. Yeah, that'll help.

Sarah Elizabeth

Author's Response:

Gah!  Yes it does.  Those stupid kids need to learn how to talk it out.  Their actions from this incident shape their lives in ways you would never think possible.

Thanks Sarah for being there for us and holding our hand through the tears....

Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:20 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

I wanted to cry for Edward, now I want to cry for Bella. So sad :( but its always a misunderstanding between these two.

Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:20 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Fan-Fucking-tastic. As Always

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:20 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

excellent chapter

Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:19 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Ok, I don't want to remove Bella's fingernails with rusted pliers anymore....but I am still Team Edward...she didn't struggle hard enough...she could have screamed, thrashed, not just "pushed on his shoulder and try to step on his foot" - she should have done more..did she deserve to be told that she was a whore and deserved it? No...but I am saying this as I sit in Edward's corner, massaging his shoulders and shooting Bella intimidating stares.

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:15 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You


Reviewer: shannigal911 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:14 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

that wa a great chapter. please update soon

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:13 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Oh. My. God.


I totally know that feeling. That feeling of just dying inside. Of needing to get away and never look back.

Fan-fucking-tastic job. Really.

I can't wait to see what else happens!

And an update so soon! You must really love us! That or really want us to suffer hard-core.

Reviewer: tampagirl81 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:09 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

That was so sad! Poor Chubward and Bella!

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