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Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:05 PM · On: 1997-First day

Gotta love only have that much energy. Loved Bella's POV of meeting Edward and her interaction with Charlie.

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:54 AM · On: 1997-New kid

I don't usually review after every chapter (I know....bad, bad, bad,) but this is just too good.  The two of you are doing a great job with this story!

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Prologue

Ok, this never happens this quickly, but my eyes are already brimming with tears.  I'm hooked and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:11 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

So I just discovered this story...

and will be frantically favoriting it as soon as I am done with this review.


The story is extremely well written and I felt like I WAS the character. Amazing.

I am hurt and angry FOR Bella. I can't believe Edward would let his anger get the best of him in that way. Stupid Stupid Stupid! I know he's a hormonal teenager but GEEZE! Bella is his best friend. HIS BEST FRIEND. The one who held him up when his parents died. The one he rescued when Renee neglected her. His other half. I'm devastated for her.


Author's Response:

Well hello there!  So glad you are with us.

We are so glad to see the story affecting you so strongly.  This means we have done our jobs right.  Update is in queue...hope you like it.

Reviewer: mustaintiffany (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 10:27 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

sigh.  so hard to hear.  but, necessary to move the story along, i am sure of that.  good job girls.  keep it comin!

Author's Response:

Awwww....Thanks Tiff!

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:48 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

whoa this is all great- a little overblown but them teenagers are like that!!

this plot twist is a real version of why bella behaves badly, as well as edward. (if it had been me i would have got emmett to kidnap jake and drag him to edward for the truth to be told, and then edward could have come and grovelled- a lot- for a longggggggg time!!)

but then we'd have no story!!

keeep it coming!!

Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying the fic.  Watch for another update soon.

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:31 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Flippin' heck! That was really painful! Poor Bella, my heart broke for her. Wonder if Edward was at graduation too? How he had coped with the last week as well. I just hope Billy gave Jacob a good talking to.

Author's Response:

You'll see the fallout in the next two chapters......keep your eyes open for our update!

Reviewer: eternalprincess (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:29 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

That is just so sad...I can't wait for your next chapter! Update soon please!! This is an amazing story and I'm really looking forward to reading more of it!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Lesmere09 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:09 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

damn Edward was cold . i died a little too after that . 

Author's Response:

So did wanna join our support group?  We have t-shirts....tuxedo t-shirts

Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:21 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Wow...ouch....again.  Just wow.  Sorry that I don't have anything inciteful or critical to add, but dude, my poor f'in heart!  Argh!!!!  Great job on BPOV and while I do love me some deep and woeful angst, know that I desperately await your next update.  :o1

Author's Response:

It is coming...the update is in queue.  EPOV is up next and is painful in it's own way......

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:04 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

OMG *Silent tears fall and shoulders shake with a shudder* It just seemed so much worse from Bella's POV. Every word was devastating and hurt. It is no wonder that she ran to hide from her pain. Dear Lord that was a tough chapter.


I just don't know what to think right now...ponders this awhile.

Author's Response:

We don't know about you, but we are washing Ben and Jerry's down with copious amounts of vodka and playing strip poker with Captain Morgan.  Come join us on the thread for support.....

Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 03:25 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

*hold tight*

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, poor Bella *sob sob* This fic is not going to get any happier any time soon is it? I still cant believe Edward was such a jerk and didnt listen to her, but now she is being the stupid one by running away. Its just lucky that i love the angst so much :)

Oh and btw, Goodbye to you is one of my fave songs. Excellent choice. It had me crying before i even started reading the chapter. Perfect fit for this circumstance.

Keep up the good work you amazing ladies

Author's Response:

The next chapter is titled "Bed of Roses"    Get ready for more angst and for whoreward.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:50 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

It was sad. Why didn't she try to kick him in the junk?

Author's Response:

She didn't even think of it through her panic.  Sad.....he deserved a junk punch......

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:36 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Loved this chapter. I love how they have the silent convo.'s with each other. you guys are doing an amazing job. Keep it up.



Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:15 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Holy cow, that was painful.  I want to kick Edward in his fat ass right now!  (Even though I am pretty sure it is a hot fat ass!)  Thank you so much for updating so quickly, I am so into this story, and had surgery last week, so you would believe my excitement when I see an update...any update!  LOL!  Keep em coming. 

Will the next chapter be back in the present????

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  The next chapter brings us full circle and leads up to the prologue.

Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:43 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Aw. This is so much sadder than Edward's version. Are we going to get to see in between now and the first chapter where they reunite? 

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Yes, the next few chapters lead us to the prologue....hope you enjoy them.

Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:43 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Aw. This is so much sadder than Edward's version. Are we going to get to see in between now and the first chapter where they reunite? 

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:39 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Oh man, that was so VERY HARSH on Edward's part.  How could he overreact that badly?  You did a great job with Bella's POV.  You could really feel her devastation and pain.  Major Ouch!!!  I can see why she ran away, but I can't believe with all those people believing her, that they couldn't convince Edward to go after her.  Can't wait to find out what happens!  Thanks for sharing!!!  Great job.

Author's Response:

The mysteries of how and why are revealed next chapter.

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:30 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You


Author's Response:

sniffles, we know.....please pass the kleenex and give us a hug.....

Reviewer: lola_pop (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:17 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Incredible!  It hurts the heart.  Can't wait to see where this is going!  Kudos.


Author's Response:

Thank you!  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: lbterral (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:03 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Oh My!!!!!  That was beyond sad!!!!!  Great writing guys :)  Can't wait for the next chappie!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.......we are loving writing this fic so much.......

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:59 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

o god this one hits home. really explains how it went misunderstood for so long.

Author's Response:

It makes your chest ache, doesn't it.  Poor Bella.....Poor Doucheward.....

Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:55 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Now I really really really want to know what happens next. What makes Bella come back? And how are they going to face each other after who knows how many years?

Please update soon. I love this story so much.

Author's Response:

The next chapter brings us back to EPOV but in 2009.  All will be explained....

Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:46 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

*sniffs* that was so hard to read, i had to stop every ten seconds to wipe my eyes. Beautiful writing and fast update!!! Poor bella, i want to punch stupid jacob.... Grrrrr -ty

Author's Response:

Poor Jacob...always the!  So glad youliked the chapter!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:45 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Oh my tender heart, how you break with no reprieve. 

I foolishly thought my heart couldn't break anymore than it did with Edward's pov of this most disastrous moment. How wrong I was. So very, very wrong.

Edward's words were even more cruel, more piercing, and more destructive from Bella's pov. How could he abandon her so? And I say abandon because in one swift move, he tore his very self from Bella's love, leaving her all alone, sobbing on a gymnasium floors, torn to shreds as the entire Senior class looked on. 

She was on her knees. Her knees. 

And all he could do was crumble her spirit with one blasphemous word, whore.

After all they were, after all they knew to be for one another, he never even hesitated. WHORE. How could he have it even in him to utter such a thing to her, his Bella? 

But...he was so heart broken. So humiliated. So abandoned, himself, for the girl he knew to be his forever had just dissolved into his greatest betrayal. It only took one moment for his world to end, drowning his very heart in a sorrow he could never survive.

I can see it now. Edward, unable to face Esme and Carlisle back at home, staggers to his rented hotel suite. Alone. So alone. He comes across a note on his bed, his and Bella's bed. "Roof". What he finds there will only seal the crest into which his heart will forever lie, for now his Bella is his greatest longer his.

The Edward who loved Bella, was best friends with Bella, and lived for Bella, died in that hallway on prom night, not very far from where he abandoned her, on her knees, begging for his understanding, his benefit of the doubt.

He will be forced to live with that memory, that regret. For there he lost his very self, fuming in a black tuxedo, bathed in Armani cologne.

No reprieve. 



Author's Response:

Okay you win the sneak peek after that fuckawesome review!

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