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Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:11 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Its official Chubward broke my heart. Why Chubward! Why?..So I guess now Bella is leaving. I would have left too. I bet Edward will be sad, but as much as I hate to admit it. He sort of deserved it. It is impossible for Bella to forgive him after what he said to her. Chubward broke Bella...poor Bella. Thanks, I love it all!



Author's Response:

Chubward is soooooo sorry for hurting you, and Bella.  Please forgive him, he will grovel for your love...

Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:10 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Hold me too!  OK, ok, ok, I prefer the quick updates more than I prefer the longer chapters.  I'm sold.  Poor Bella, chubward is an ass!  I still love him in some ways, but not right now. 

"I love you Binky, but I don't have to like you" - How to Loos A Guy In 10 Days



Author's Response:

Chubward is an ass, and it only gets worse.  I am glad you concede on the shorter chapters/quicker updates....cuz the next one is in queue!  I also used your quote......too funny and entirely appropriate.....

Reviewer: ginbelle (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:02 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

OMG

im almost crying..

poor bella...i hate to say it but i want to slap edward too!!

im shoked...pease! continue it as soon as you can!!

super history!!



Author's Response:

Dontcha kida wish you were Rosalie in that last chapter, just to have the satisfaction?  Edward has a lot of making up to do....

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:32 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

what the hell ....i need more please, god that hurt alot. lol. how oftne will you update?

love itl.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  We usually update once a week, sometimes sooner if response is truly tremendous.....

Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:13 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Ugh Bella is to dramatic she could at least said goodbye to everyone but chubward in person. I loved this chap cant wait to u repost hopefully soon



Author's Response:

All Bella was thinking was that she had to get the hell outta Forks.  She figured if she spoke to anyone they would have talked her into staying or speaking with Edward which was too painful to even consider.

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:12 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

damn that shit is sad!!! but you guys rock i love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, we love the angst!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 06:21 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

oh god i love this bella and edward, they are so sweet.

Reviewer: mamajo76 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 03:44 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Holy Crow! I hate cliffies! I really can feel Bellas' pain! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

We know....we are evil!  The next chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 03:40 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

This story was mentioned in the HL5 thread as being a good one to read.  I'm so glad to have read it; this is a fantastic story.

I can't believe that Edward called Bella a whore - his friend - after so many years!!  I can't believe he was so crue,l and that he could be so insecure in himself to lash out that way.  I can totally understand Bella's humiliation.  To think a certain way about a person that you thought you knew so well after so many years and then to have all your perceptions revealed to you as a bunch of lies has got to hurt bad.



Author's Response:

We were mentioned on the HL5 thread....COOL!

So glad you are liking the story, yes Edward has a lot to answer for, and he will answer for it.  Bella, poor poor Bella.....will she ever find peace?

Reviewer: thegranddaughter (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:57 PM · On: 1997-First day

Loving the story so far, but Napoleon Dynamite only came out in 2004. Isn't this chapter supposed to be 1997?

Reviewer: camianbu_88 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:20 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

goooood this is sooo sad!!, i really want to hate Edward, but i can't, it was his temper, and booooy does he have a temper!!. I have faith is you guys that this story will get his happy ending please!!



Author's Response:

Yes he has a temper to match his fiery hair.  He has also suppressed his temper for so long that any blow ups he has are way outta proportion.

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:17 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

WOW....Bella's POV is even more heartbreaking than Edward's and I didn't think it could be any worse!! I absolutely LOVE this story. Can't wait for another update!!



Author's Response:

We warned you all......it only gets worse......keep your kleenex and punching bag handy...

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:44 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

ARGH!!!! I know it has to be done for the story to evolve, but it's still devestating!

Reviewer: Ceceilia (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:24 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

How did I miss this update?  Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I love this story sooo much.  I feel bad for both Edward and Bella; they are so young and so vunerable.  I hate that a misunderstanding has seperated them for eight years.   I feel like you have written a nine chapter prologue and now we are getting down to the real action.  I can't wait!



Author's Response:

The next chapter brings us back to 2009 and what happened to the characters in the last eight years.  We hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:14 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

You continue to amaze me...all I can say is WOW!!! Another heartbreaking chapter.



Author's Response:

It was sad.....sniffle....

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:43 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

argh!! your chapters are too short!!



Author's Response:

We keep em short, but we also keep em coming.....

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:05 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

Another great chapter!!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:03 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Yup, crying again.  You make me feel menstral, damn it!



Author's Response:

We have rocky road ice cream and lots of spoons......come join us on the thread.....

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:47 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

wow okay this was brave.  So edward broke bella's heart by not believing in her!

 

He has his POV and she has hers!  So i'm betting this takes us to the present....how sad for our couple!



Author's Response:

Yup....the next chapter brings us to Edward 2009 and what happened to him over the last eight years.....it ain't pretty.....

Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:37 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

I finally broke down and read this story.  I was trying to wait til there was more but couldn't hold out any longer.  And of course I just loved it.  You both are two of my favorite authers and I can't wait to see whats next for them.  I love the friendship and felt so bad for them both when it ended.  Can't wait to see how Bella's changed due to everything. 



Author's Response:

We are your favorites......squee....happy dance......

Sorry about that....so glad you are enjoying the story, keep watching as we update regularly.

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:17 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

The tears are back, although I don't think they've ever really left.  The two of you have done a fantastic job putting so much emotion into this story.

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:05 AM · On: 1997-First day

Gotta love Alice...to only have that much energy. Loved Bella's POV of meeting Edward and her interaction with Charlie.

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 06:54 AM · On: 1997-New kid

I don't usually review after every chapter (I know....bad, bad, bad,) but this is just too good.  The two of you are doing a great job with this story!

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Prologue

Ok, this never happens this quickly, but my eyes are already brimming with tears.  I'm hooked and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 06:11 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

So I just discovered this story...

and will be frantically favoriting it as soon as I am done with this review.

INCREDIBLE!

The story is extremely well written and I felt like I WAS the character. Amazing.

I am hurt and angry FOR Bella. I can't believe Edward would let his anger get the best of him in that way. Stupid Stupid Stupid! I know he's a hormonal teenager but GEEZE! Bella is his best friend. HIS BEST FRIEND. The one who held him up when his parents died. The one he rescued when Renee neglected her. His other half. I'm devastated for her.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

Well hello there!  So glad you are with us.

We are so glad to see the story affecting you so strongly.  This means we have done our jobs right.  Update is in queue...hope you like it.

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