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Reviewer: Corby3 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:37 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

OMG


this fic is amazing


he turned into what she accused her of being


lol


keep it up


update soon 



Author's Response:

Ironic isn't it?  Poor kids.....

Reviewer: lovnsomecullen (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:35 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

Great chapter!  Can't wait for the update!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ash0507 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:35 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

I hate what he turned into but I can kinda....um almost see how he did. He is a man after all and their not as smart as us women! Im glad to see that hes ready to change and just in time!



Author's Response:

Tee hee....not as smart.......lol!  I like it!  Yes his timing is wonderful isn't it?

Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:31 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

very cool chapter - i cannot wait to see what happens when they see each other again.  i reread the prologue and it left me salivating for more!  good work :)



Author's Response:

Why thank you dearest!  It is just starting to heat up, isn't it?

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:29 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

Nice to see that Edward is ready to get his act together.  Wondering what Bella has been doing all this time.  Does she still think about Edward?  Has she moved on and found someone else?  How is Edward going to make this right?...



Author's Response:

Aww the suspense is gonna kill us......Edward has come a long way is Bella going to be ready for him?

Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:26 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

sniff....well, you may not be responsible for damages to possessions...but how about damaged state of minds?  or chewed off fingernails?  or..or...boxes of Kleenex wasted?? sniff.

Wow....just wow. That was a powerful chapter. Again. That's like 3 really angsty chaps in a row.  I may need Prozac soon.  I have to temper my squee of delight at finding a new chapter in my inbox with the knowledge that I'm probably going to be wretchedly depressed upon finishing said chapter.

I don't want to hate Edward....but him taking the journey from lovely Chubward to sex crazed Assward is quite horrid.  I'm glad he saw first hand at the hotel exactly what it was he gave up.  I don't think he deserves misery by any means...but talk about living your life with a million regrets. It was very touching that Bella still sent him cards every year on the anniversary of his parents death.  sigh.

I know we are a longggggg way from the light at this point...and I'm sure Bella's pov next chapter will not be pretty due to her feeling worthless after Edward's harsh words but I'm sucking it up...taking a deep breath....and anxious for more.  What can I say...I am glutton for punishment! 

sniff.   :o)



Author's Response:

Wow!  We are so glad you are liking this so much.  You have conveyed Edward exactly....a man living with a million regrets......and a lot of pain.  Now Bella.....she has her own cross to bear.....up next.

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:25 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

love it....damn this chapter went way too fast....need more more more.....please



Author's Response:

More is coming, maybe Ellie could be convinced to drop it early......dunno.....

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:23 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

we are finally in the present! (right?) Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes we are in the present....finally!  these two will be meeting up again soon.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:22 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

I can't believe he fucked lauren! Thank God he wrapped it up! I'm not very happy with Bella at this point because Edward has tried for years to speak with her and beg for her forgiveness. That was pretty bitchey on her part to send the letters back. I know she was hurt but she could've at least read them. At least she sent him something for when his parents died.



Author's Response:

She has her reasons......but we do see more of Edward's side here.  BPOV is up next and will explain her reasoning in sending the letters back.

Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:20 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

Oh my gosh, this was so sad - so tragic! When he went to the hotel?? And saw all she did and realized what she had hoped for?? One horrible mistake ... and she was gone from his life.

I feel bad for him and yet I hate what he became. I am glad it sounds like he turned things around before she got back (or at least had started to). I can't wait to hear what she's been up to all these years. 

Wonderful (if heart-wrenching) update - and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

He hates what he has become as well, and nobody can hate him mor ethan he hates himself for his mistakes.  Let's hope that Bella has the ability to forgive him after all these years.  Their reunion is coming up.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:16 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

"She had planned all this for me.  And I had shattered her."...OK, the hotel room with the nightgown and rose petals, candles... I am EVEN MORE heartbroken than before


"Bella would not, could not even speak of me without breaking down"...So sad


“Good thing, Eddie, because you have exactly two months to get your shit together with Jasper’s help.”...I HOPE this includes his stopping being a ManHo! 


PLEASE POST EARLY :)



Author's Response:

Yes that is exactly what it means....he wants to get his shit together and be what she needs him to be, a better man......

Reviewer: mamajo76 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:14 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

I cant wait 4 the reunion..i know its not gonna b an easy one, but none the less i will b waiting! love ya!

Author's Response:

We have BPOV up next, and then the reunion.......gasp!  It is going to be good.....and stressful!

Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:14 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

I hope he can get it together before she gets there. I bet Alice makes sure that they have to dance together. I can't believe he turned into a slut though.

Author's Response:

Well he needed to fill the void in his life and so he turned to self destructive behaviour that wouldn't allow him to become emotionaly vested in anyone again.  No emotional ties means you cannot get left.......like his parents did.....like Bella did.  Sad but true.

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:12 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

...sigh...



Author's Response:

Sorry.....we know.....

Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:08 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

I feel for Edward.  He has had it rough, first with his parents and then losing Bella.  And skanks like Lauren aren't giving him the comfort he craves.  Maybe he is getting back on track?  And how long is Bella in town for?



Author's Response:

Bella's stay will be outlined in the next chapter....lol!  Yes Edward became a manwhore as sexual satisfaction filled the void....

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:04 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

He certainly is persistent! I like that he gets what a monster he was to her. I am eager to see what these eight years have been like for her.

Author's Response:

Yes, he gets it now......BPOV is up next and you will see how the last eight years shaped her....

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:34 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

That was gut-wrenching! But it rang true. Eighteen-year-olds can be such idiots. And you wrote them so that they were so completely dependent upon each other that the betrayal would be devastating. Anxious for an update!

Author's Response:

The update is coming!  Please stay with us and thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: HisAtLast223 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:03 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

wow am def cryin now



Author's Response:

Well get comfortable with that......

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:07 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Oh that so didn't go well! I can only assume Edward is seriously kicking himself in the ass right about now, and frankly I can see why, but I can see Edward's POV, he was wrong and needed to talk to Bella, and I'm sure he tried, but Bella just couldn't handle it and did the one of two natural reactions, she took the "flight" reaction and left town instead of the "fight" reaction, to fight for their relationship. I imagine the next few years is going to be hell for both of them. Great story!



Author's Response:

You nailed it on the head!  She ran istead confronting him.  Now they both have to live with the consequences of their actions....so sad.

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:55 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

WOW! I have to admit that I was a bit shocked by the whole Jacob revelation. I'd like to think that Edward wouldn't overreact and would think more that Jacob was forcing himself on Bella, however, after Mike and the gang's taunting I can see why Edward was so quick to jump to conclusions. I only hope they can fix this somehow before they go off on their separate ways. Great chapter!

Reviewer: BellaAnne (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:54 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

wow.... that one was painful... Poor Bella, poor Edward. He is stupid for letting his insecurities get the better of him. But it happens... How sad... :0(. I'm Lovin the story though. I can't stop reading.. lol



Author's Response:

We are so gld you like it!  We are also glad that you see both sides of the story....that is important.

Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 10:38 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Y'all have done a damn good job on this story. Please for give me for not reading this days ago. I kept seeing updates and thought I don't want to read about a fat Edward and a hot Bella maybe being bitchy towards him or something. Well wasn't I dead wrond. Chubward was loving and protective. Bella was a wonderful friend who fell for the person on the inside and over looked the outward issues. That's real and meanful true love. She loved him for him.

 

BUT...then came Jacob. The creator of all that is unholy and ruined a love that was so pure. Bella was truly torn down with that one word...."whore". Edward ripped out her soul and heart just like that.

 

I can't wait to see what comes next in their college years being so far apart.Well it seemed to propel Edward to achieve major success. While Bella was still in this downward spiral of self pity.Update again ASAP. :)

 

~Shani



Author's Response:

Shani!  Love your review and so glad you took a chance on us.  There is so much to say about this fic and lots more to come.  Stay tuned.

 

Reviewer: heartdiana (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:48 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

I love this story and just cried through this chapter. I don't know whether to punch you or plead for another chapter. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Hides and peaks head out......No violence....please....an update is on the way....

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:16 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

well I am hoping that they both still feel the same way and they tell each other again real soon



Author's Response:

It make take longer than you think....

Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 10:19 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

I just found your story :)

And I loved it. From all their precious moments to the crumbling angsty demise. **sigh**

I can totally understand Bella's need to run away. I think if that happened to me, I would go far far away too. And since there's Renee in the picture and Florida couldn't be farther away from Washington, I think, independantly of everything that happened with her in the past, it's certainly a welcomed location ;)

Oh! I wanted to slap him myself... he lost it. completely!! I bet it's one of those moments you regret forever. I'm really looking forward to his POV after the debacle. That week where Bella closed herself up. When he finds out she left. Masochisticly enough I want him to suffer, just as he made Bella suffer.

Why did he became such a man wh0re?? I think losing Bella made a number on him, yet he totally deserved it. Wonder what the others thought of all this, as well. I don't think he'll be forgiven fast, not at all.

Can't wait for next chapter!!! :D

Thanx for the story :D



Author's Response:

He will suffer....the next chapter will show the aftermath for him and how he beacme the womanizer he is today....

Stay tuned....

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