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Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:07 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh Mrs Potato how do you do it every time, break my heart into tiny pieces?
B & E both need to get some help from professionals. They have both damaged each other so badly. I'm annoyed at Renee that she didn't make Bella go and get some help to sort things out.
So what happens next? I'm not sure. Lots of tears and I hope some yelling and screaming and eventually some shmexing (please).
You know I love you both extra hard.
Annette
Author's Response: You are so right, my lovely girl from down under. They both need to be sorted.
Renee did make Bella go to counseling, but, for whatever reason, it didn't help enough. I think only facing her fears and pain will break through.
We love you too!
Ellie:)
Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:47 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I can't wait for the next chapter. Wow... Edward's words really cut her deep and broke her confidence in herself. She believes that she or anything she does is worth nothing, and she hasn't allowed anyone to get close enough to her. And Edward became the whore. His feelings of self-loathing are only going to get worse when he realizes what he has done to her, but at the same time, can he be completely to blame? I don't know... people say shitty things to each other all the time, but not everyone chooses to fold in and give up on life. To a certain extent, what Bella made of his words and then her life after the dance was her choice. They are both so broken. I can't wait for the next chapter ... did I say that already?
I'm Team Edward, of course, but I can't help but wonder about Jacob. Is he still in La Push? Will her meeting up with the Cullens again also lead to her running into Jacob again? What repercussions did he have to face? Does Charlie know what he did? Will he be apologetic and changed as well? Does he have a family and finally learned how to treat a lady? Or is he the same presumptuous asshole that he was in that hallway? What Jacob did to Bella was definitely a traumatic experience for her that could have become a lot worse if Emmett hadn't come to her rescue, but his actions kind of faded into the background once Edward had his say. Of course, Edward's words would cut her more than Jacob's force, and somehow managed to victimize her even more, but has she ever dealt with being sexually and physically assaulted? It seems like Bella has a lot to heal from at the hands of Jacob and Edward.
Author's Response: Great questions about Jake. That was traumatic. YES, Charlie knew and he took it up immediately with Billy. As of right now, he doesn't show back up, but we're just starting out on the fic, so who knows about the future. Where Bella is now is not merely a result of the one incident. That was just the catalyst...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:46 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Wow. Bella really is broken. Damn that Edward! I always look forward to updates on this! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: She definitely is and although Edward was the catalyst, he's not purely at fault...
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:42 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I love the Duran Duran song-
Author's Response: *bumps fists*
It fit perfectly....
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:35 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Me please... And soon. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:33 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Poor B Swan
Author's Response: She is definitely broken.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:31 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
i like it, i really do.
but enough with f-ing cliffies!!!???!!!
so many authors think they are a good idea, and certainly once in a while, i would agree. (rant over)
i think your whole premise intriguing and the back story certainly interesting but i am surely not the only reader who wants some actual action to occur, after 11 chapters!!!!
Author's Response: None of them are purposely cliffies. Unfortunately, chapters have to end somewhere....
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:30 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses
Great chapter
Author's Response: He certainly went on his own downward spiral...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: HisAtLast223 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:29 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
i love the story so far...so bella had been a virgin her entire life and edward is the whore now? wow thats crazy!
Author's Response: Yup. That's about right....
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:29 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
oh, poor Bella! my heart breaks for her, and how his cruel words have just kept haunting and hurting her over a long, lonely 8 years - ungh, her low self esteem is so tragic, It seems like she actually believes what he said about her that she did 'ask for it', that she is a 'whore' - its just so sad... I'd like to hear what she's writing about?
Author's Response: There is more to her downfall than just Edward's words. But they were the catalyst.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:25 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Love. lol.
Author's Response: We love you too!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:20 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Wow... Bella doesn't mess around.Great chapter
Author's Response: She snapped. Flat snapped.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:18 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Come on come on come on - I need interaction!
Author's Response: Hang in there!
It's coming!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Prologue
Great chapter
Author's Response: We're glad you're enjoying it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:13 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
This is painful to read-it hurts. :-( Glad to see we will be moving forward soon...now time for the reunion..... can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: The reunion is up! Well, part 1...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:06 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Bella's chapter was so sad. I can't wait to see what goes down in Forks and to see a bit of Jasper, Rose, and Emmett!
Author's Response: The first part of the reunion is up:)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:06 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
You write a deliciously angsty fic ladies. You broke me reading her brokenness. I an astounded at her lack of self esteem. How could she believe him? Wow. Just wow. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: She's definitely completely broken.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:04 PM · On: 2000-Christmas
Oh my, so sad... Great chapter.
Author's Response: It's an ouchy one.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:02 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh so sad...that's actually what I pictured must have happened to Bella. Could his words have been more cruel? I could see why she wouldn't respond to his letters etc, but I wonder that she didn't think that they could contain an apology? Or maybe apologies just don't matter anymore? I could also see that because Edward was her whole world, the words coming from him would really haunt her--because he knew her best and he was calling her that. But, I also want her to be more pissed because she knows (or she should) that she isn't a whore and that she didn't deserve that! (as no one does!)
Okay, Edward REALLY has a lot of making up to do!
God I love this story!
--Melanie
Author's Response: Sweet, you are the first person in a review (not that all the rest didn't rock out, because they did) that got it right. Apologies didn't matter anymore. She's not angry. She's not upset with Edward. She had a lot of other traumas in her life and Edward was the One.True.Thing. The one thing that made them bearable. But when he said that, it sort of shattered that Edward-shell she'd protected herself with. And then all the trauma came rushing back.
Thanks so much for reading my mind!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:01 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I do, I do, I want to see what happens next!!! :D
Author's Response: It's up!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:57 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Great job! Poor Bella, Edward left her so broken. Can't wait to see how things turn out for them.
Puffy heart ya!
Amber
Author's Response: *hugs and sloppy kisses*
Thank you so much for everything you do!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:55 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Poor Bella! Not much of a life, but she needs to deal w/ this situation.
ps, hope you both haven't forgotten about Rescue Me & Not Like This; I'm enjoying all 3 stories!
Author's Response: That she does. That she does.
Not Like This is up and the next chap is in the queue...
(It's Ellie, BTW *waves hi*)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:54 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
What an insensitive brat Alice is.
And Edward. What a pig.
Author's Response: Maybe. But I think she is more someone who wants too help but hasn't figured out the right way to do it.
As for Edward, *sigh*. So much to fix...
Reviewer: babynancy (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:52 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
please please please dont make me waite to long i need to know what happens
Author's Response: It's already up:)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:50 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Great chapter.
Author's Response: We're glad you liked it!
Thanks for reviewing!
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