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Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:37 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh god. Poor Bella! Edward's words spoken so hastily without thought destroyed her! No one should ever be told that they deserve something like that no matter what. No woman deserves anything of the sort. I understand he didn't rape her but still he forced her to do something she didn't want to do. I can't wait to see how it all plays out from here and good luck with the contest. I will definately be voting for you guys!
Author's Response: Bella is absolutely broken, as is Edward, really. They just went in opposite directions with their pain.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:36 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Wow you were right...poor Bella has been living shattered all these years. She never moved on and can't say that I blame her...her heart was left a long time ago. She has just been surviving but not living...I do hope this wedding is a beginning for her because her life is just sad. I can't wait for the reunion...
Author's Response: Reunion part 1 is up!
Thank you so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:32 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I just found this story today and couldn't stop reading to review every chapter...which I should have. I love it so far, and I among all the other reviewers, I'm sure, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: We're so very glad you gave it a try! Thanks *so* much for reviewing!
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:10 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Well, Miss Bella needs some therapy too. Maybe I was too upset with her running away to realize that Jacob the Douchenozzle could have pushed her further. He very well could have raped her if they hadn't been broken up.
So now she has this traumatic moment tied into Edwrd's hateful words, and she's all wrapped up in them. She doesn't see that Edward was just speaking out of hurt and she's convinced herself that she's worthless.
I officially feel terrible for Bella and apologize for not being fully on her side before. I'm still a little upset with her for running but she'll make it up to me, I'm sure.
LIfe isn't easy, that's for damn sure. I think I may need a bowl of popcorn for the next few updates. I think it's about to get really interesting when it comes to BtS...
Sarah Elizabeth
Author's Response: Poor Bella is incredibly broken and for more reasons that just the prom. That was just the catalyst. An alcoholic mother with child molester friends, what happened with Jacob, her falling out with Edward. She was a ticking time bomb and Edward just lit the wick.
Thank you so much for all of your support, bb!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:01 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh Bella, how I mourn your spirit and loss of self esteem.
Sigh....oh Bella.
All it took was one word from your Love to render you hopeless and hollow, weakened by a blow that forced you to your knees in a horrified shock.
Whore.
Such was your loss of self worth and pride, you sheltered and shied yourself away from the world for the agonizing span of 8 years.
Fate has played a number on you, playing you and Edward with ironic glee. Through the course of those 8 years, Edward was a whore. And you....anything but.
Hmmm...quick question: does this mean you are still a virgin? Interesting.
Now hear me out, Darlin': it's time to slide up those big girl panties I know you have somewhere stashed away in the back of your underwear drawer. Turn and face your destiny, for he is waiting for you with equal dread and excitement.
Close your eyes, take a deep breath, let your life unfold.
Live it well.
He is waiting. Godspeed.
Author's Response: Again, your eloquent review blows us away. So lovely.
Yes, our poor broken Bella is still a virgin. I wonder what our dear Edward will think of that...
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:33 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Wow...this is excellent! nice job! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Next chapter is up!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:31 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Going to vote after this review, great chapter as always! Bella is so withdrawn and broken with little or no self confidence, can she even try again with Edward if he would want or if she would want. I see alot of angst coming up in the future! She is really going to need Alice now more than ever. Hopefully Edward will realize how broken she is, I hope this is a happily ever after! Please, please update soon! (And how is my other Edward ~Not like This~I am missing him can't wait for an update their too, hopefully its ok to ask in this review?) ~Melissa
Author's Response: It's fine to ask! It's up now! I submit pretty quickly, but the validation queues sometimes get backed up...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:22 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I want to see what happens next and soon...Pretty please???
Author's Response: It's up!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:01 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
so wrong, lol! i need more!!!!! cliffies suck!
Author's Response: Alas, chapters have to end somewhere!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Deex (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:43 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
That was an awesome chapter. i can't wait for the next.....
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:32 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Great chapter. I hope we're getting Edward's perspective of that time period next.
Author's Response: Actually, what Edward did during those 8 years was in the prior chapter. But he will slowly learn about her in the future.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:28 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
You had me at Duran Duran :)
Great chapter. Really sad how she dressed so people wouldn't think she was "asking for it"
Author's Response: LOL! I *love* Duran Duran and I *love* that song. It just fit so perfectly here.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:25 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Love this story. I hope these two can get it together. I think it deserves the Barry White Song My First, My Last My Everything?
Author's Response: Great song!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:22 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
*Sniff*
shes so broken :( Its horrible to imagine Bella feeling that way and going through life feeling like she has to hide herself. It must have killed Alice to see her friend become that person from the vibrant, bubbly girl she was in high school. It makes me wanna cry to think of her being that way. Feeling that way about herself. I'm guessing more tourcher and angst await, but i do so love when i get a gut reaction to a fic. Keep up the excellent work.
Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:22 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
*Sniff*
shes so broken :( Its horrible to imagine Bella feeling that way and going through life feeling like she has to hide herself. It must have killed Alice to see her friend become that person from the vibrant, bubbly girl she was in high school. It makes me wanna cry to think of her being that way. Feeling that way about herself. I'm guessing more tourcher and angst await, but i do so love when i get a gut reaction to a fic. Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response: We are so glad you're enjoying, even if it is angsty!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:12 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
me, mE, ME! I want to see what comes next. Bring it ladies, bring it on! So exciting. I love this story. Bella's POV was well written, and oddly enough, in one chapter...not even rushed. It flowed so nicely.
Bella...go to Forks and bring on the pain! Although, in her poor state of mind, I don't think she knows how to bring any pain, except for the self inflicted type. Poor thing, he broke her. I have faith, she'll pull through!
xoxo,
Urs
Author's Response: The next chapter is up!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:09 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
love it!
Author's Response: We are so glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:07 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
What happens? What happens? What happens?
Author's Response: Next chapter is up!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:04 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I do, I do! I love your story but I am ready to get this party started! :)
Author's Response: Reunion part 1 is up!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:03 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Holy crap I love this story. So good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words and review!
Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:00 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Poor Bella. You have conveyed that she completed imploded after the prom, and never recovered. Her breakdown is very canon; this is perhaps how Bella's life would have turned out if she had never gone to Volterra to get Edward back. Your Bella gave her heart, and when he stepped on it, there was no fixing that heartache. This was a sad chapter to read.
Author's Response: It's such a tough chapter and Bella really did completely unravel.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:50 PM · On: 2000-Christmas
"You are my son" made me cry... wonderful chapter... really touching
Author's Response: Thanks. This was a really tough chapter. We appreciate the review!
Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:21 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I am really enjoying this story. I love angst, lol. Looking forward to the fireworks when they meet up again.
Author's Response: Well, then you have come to the right girls! We do angst.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilove (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:15 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Poor Bella, Edward's words are still haunting her. He is the one being a whore now and she can't even go on a date. That sucks. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: They are both hot messes right now.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:10 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Dun Dun DUNNN! back to forks for you! Mwhahaha LOL
I'm thinking it's going to bad amd good at the sametime because ever though she is still so hurt she loves him so much
Author's Response: *hugs my girl*
Thank you so much for all of the support!
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