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Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Stolen Away

Reading this makes my chest ache....so much sadness and feeling completly broken.  I really hope they can make this work...i know we will get a HEA......right???  I can't wait to see how Bella feels.  Oh and BTW you girls are the update queens!!!! Love it!!



Author's Response:

We totes believe in HEA.  It just may take some time to get there....keep reading to see how they do.

Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Stolen Away

Well that was certainly eventful.  Is it wrong to say that I was kinda turned on by Jasper there?  Angry Jasper is always a yummy Jasper.  I think cuz he's always so damn laid back.  I can't wait to see if Bella got a bitch slap too. 



Author's Response:

No, dominating Jasper turns us on too.....lol!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BlueLotusGirl (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Stolen Away

Well, that could have been so much worse. I bet it was for Bella. I'm trying to dig deep for some sympathy for Chubward. Not finding any yet.

Author's Response:

AWWWWWW!  Don't be hating on my boy yet....he will redeem himself I promise.  Watch for BPOV up next.

Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Stolen Away

ugh, i'm salivating for more! great chapter :)



Author's Response:

We'll send you a bib.  LOL!  Next chapter will be up early next week!

Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Stolen Away

jeebus... i love this story. i will say that i wish the chapters we just a bit longer!!! it always feel like just a tease... but i LOVE IT!! keep up the amazing work



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Stolen Away

Yay they are back together again, at least in the same room. Baby steps, I know, but they'll get there, I just know it!



Author's Response:

That they will, it will just take time and patience.

Reviewer: dazzle_me (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Stolen Away

Oh please update soon! I feel bad for Edward, but I think I'm on Bella's side (for now). Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thankyou for reviewing.  We are so glad you are enjoying our tale.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Stolen Away

Your updates are seriously like crack. I just wanted to let ya'll know that.

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Author's Response:

LOL!  We have a support group on the thread, come join us!  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.phpf=44&t=6035&p=687892#p687892 

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Stolen Away

Oh, my heart hurts for him! We all do such stupid things when we are young. 



Author's Response:

That we do.  Now that he is all grown up he is going to have to pick up the pieces.

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Stolen Away

I love penitent Edward.



Author's Response:

We like to see him grovelling!  LOL!  Isn't that a hot picture in your mind?

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Stolen Away

worth the wait...but short!  Eeeks.  More, more, more.  :-) 



Author's Response:

More is coming my lil addict!  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Stolen Away

I'm kinda really pissed at Edward. He really didn't know that he hurt her so bad? Why did he think she ran away from him like that? 



Author's Response:

Edward needed a reality check.  Good thing Jasper was around to give him one.

Reviewer: babynancy (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Stolen Away

love this story so much.i hope bella make it hard on him though and dosent just give it to edward.update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Stolen Away

Although I am glad that Edward is going to deal with his own demons, someone needs to explain (in full detail) the way that Bella has subverted her natural self because of the way he treated her.

Once he figures that out, he's going to go from Doucheward to Emoward.

As long as he figures out it's not about him all the time, he might have a shot with Bella.  Might...



Author's Response:

Oh yes, there will be Emoward and Sweetward and gah!  Just keep reading!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Stolen Away

Erg...Good but frustrating.  I feel so sorry for Edward.  Bella too but mostly Edward.  I guess I have a soft spot for man whores who choose that lifestyle to cope...lol

I want them together already.



Author's Response:

We want them together too!  Just be patient.

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Stolen Away

Wow...it's amazing that she even went there.  But at least he's figuring his shit out!  Way to go, Edward!  And YEAH for a strong Jasper.  Love me some strong Jazz!  Great job, ladies.  Love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  We are so very glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Stolen Away

this way is better  help keep us all out of therapy   mend the tear one stitch at a time



Author's Response:

Slow and steady wins the race.....

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:19 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

one mistake 8 years of both being in pain and empty  time to start healing them both

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Stolen Away

Ahhh but he's not chubward anymore!
She's coming around faster than I'd expected :)

Author's Response:

That is the way it seems, but just wait and see.  It is not going to be that easy for these two.

Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Stolen Away

I love this story!!!  LOVE  IT LOVE IT.   Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Your review made our day1

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Stolen Away

I love this story hard!

I can't wait for Edward to figure out just how much he damaged Bella.  I wonder how he's going to handle it.



Author's Response:

He will find out and he will be Emoward......BPOV up next!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Stolen Away

Hey Tammy

You've done it again sweets, broken that crack in my heart wide open.  He has no idea what he's done to her, has he.  I'm hoping that we are going to have a confrontation between the 2 of them at some stage, I think that would be really healthy for them, especially Bella, to get it all out in the open.

I loved Jasper in this chp, the fact that he really laid it out there for Edward.  Like I said, Edward just doesn't realise how much he hurt her.  I'm also glad that Jasper's made it clear that he needs to change for himself and not just for Bella.

Fantastic work, beautifully written.  Can't wait for the next chptr.

Annette



Author's Response:

Thank you Annette.  Jasper's words were much needed by Edward.  He does need towant it for himself too.  As for the confrontation, there will be a big one, trust me.  It is going to blow your mind!

BPOV is up next and should be posted early next week!

Reviewer: sportress (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Stolen Away

Let the doucheward groveling begin!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ready, set, go!   

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Stolen Away

Aww, how sweet!!!  I love how Jasper pretty much kicked Chubward in the ass to set his shit straight. I also loved the fact that Spinsterella couldn't take her eyes off Chubward.   Looking forward to BPOV, I can't wait.  Loving this story!!! 



Author's Response:

Oh yes, now that they are back together it is high time to amp up the UST.  Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Stolen Away

Ah, I do love a repentant Edward. I'm so glad he understand his problems and hopefully with the help of his family and Bella he'll fully heal. I'm also amazed by how his broken emotions come across. I actually felt that I was feeling the pain with him. Wondeful work, Tammy.

I feel so badly for both of them. Edward's poor, sweet, buried heart and Bella's self-loathing. I can only hope that Edward finally tells Bella that he didn't mean what he said, that it was only the anger talking. I know it won't miraculously heal 8 years of damage instantaneously but it is a start in the right direction. Not only that but hopefully Bella will be at least a little understanding when Edward comes clean about his past. Is it nasty? Yes. Will it hurt? Immensely. Was it something he could control? Not in the mindset he was in, or the amount of pain. We all deal with traumatic events differently. Some go to drugs, some -like Bella- close themselves off, and some -like Edward- act completely out of character and participate in activities they usually wouldn't.

These two just break my heart and I want to be Dr. Sarah and give them both counseling sessions. I think they need it. I love psychology and would give anything to help these two get back on the right track.

Again I'm amazed by the writing. You two are incredible when it comes to provoking a visceral response from your readers. I've gone from laughter and smiles, to heartbreak and tears. It's truly powerful. I love you both, so much and will continue to pimp your work out to everyone who asks me for recs.

Kissy faces for yous, bbs.

Sarah Elizabeth



Author's Response:

Awwww!  I am actually tearing up after reading that!  You truly have been amazingingly supportive to su, even when dealing with your own personal drama.  Thank you so much Sarah.  Just hearing that our writing is affecting you emotionally is amazing to us as we strive so hard to capture the emotions of our characters.

Edward and Bella will have it out, but it will take time.  BPOV will show you just how conflicted she is upon seeing him again and seeing how he has physically changed.  I hope you enjoy it as much as this chapter.

Thank you again for your support for our story.  It's readers like you that make writing this worthwhile.

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