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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:09 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
it was a while between updates so I w as glad to see you back at it you have a beautiful story going here and as we all know there is only one true first love you have done a beautiful job of bringing this to paper who one mistake can set two futures into a tail spin or pain and unhappiness now cant wait to see how your gonna fix this mess i was glad you didnt use high school reunion now lets get our bella and edward fixed
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 03:54 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Edward, are you as gentle as your eyes look? Love that - it speaks volumes.
Really loving this story. ta
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:59 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Oh for the love of all that is Holy!
I just couldn't help but get all teary eyed. It hurt. But it was a good kind of hurt?
Oh, Edward, French and sweet words. I am ded.
Amazing. Absolutely amazing.
Oh, dear. Waaaay to early for my taste. I haven't slept at all either. Jebus, I'm going to be complete fail tom-today.
Sarah Elizabeth
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:57 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Hey Tammy
So he's just getting a little glimpse of how bad things have been for Bella. She's certainly a lot more broken than he ever realised, that's for sure. I can't imagine how much more shocked he's going to be when he gets the full story.
Ooohhh!! It just keeps getting better and better. I'm cracking my whip on you and Ellie. No sleeping, eating or looking after the kids - just writing LOL!!
Love
Annette
Reviewer: bluemaybits (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:36 AM · On: How to Save a Life
What a seriously beautiful chapter!
Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Cry
aww(:
i can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Cry
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It’s sooooo good! Can’t wait for more!
Bella really is a mess—they both are! Hope they get the chance to really talk about it all.
Jenn/T w i m o m m y
(New username is jennspooningrob. Like it?)
Reviewer: IrisDraven (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Cry
I actually found this story thanks to smut monday but I have to say I love the original take you have on these two charcters. Edward and Bella are both so broken but in different ways. It will be intereseting to see how everything plays out for them. Keep up the good work ladies.
Reviewer: LuckyStar113 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Cry
new fan alert.. i am a big fan of chubward!
the mon coeur kills me... sigh. good choice ladies!
i can't wait for these 2 to sort out their issues and get together :)
Reviewer: SoftLine (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Cry
Update ASAP :)
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Cry
I'm so sad to get to this point in the story. I need more. I read your SM outtake and headed straight here to read this. I am loving this so much (even though I've been crying nearly continuously since Edward's parents death), heartache and all.
You ladies are doing a fantastic job. I haven't even been noticing that the writer's styles have changed with the POVs as I've been so engossed. You compliment each other perfectly. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:26 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh my, how the actions of one (that idiot Black) and the words of another (silly, silly Edward) can change lives so dramatically. I must say that I am a little angry at Bella though!
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:43 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Oh, so very sad! Though beautifully written as always.
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:33 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Oh no. I think I like the SM out-take much better. But I know this is a step in the story. I hope they can work it out, although I think there is plenty of angst ahead (as I remember back to Chapter 1).
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:22 PM · On: 2000-Christmas
I write this with tears in my eyes. Your words are so beautiful and convey so much. To lose one parent let alone two and at such a young age is just heartbreaking.
Reviewer: izzyemme (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Cry
Wow. Poor Bella. Is it bad that I want Edward to pay dearly for destroying Bella like that? I do believe in happy endings, though.....
Cannot WAIT for an update!
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:11 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Ah, young love!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Cry
Holy crap on a cracker, how did I not know about this story??? I even have Tammy on author alert but I don't remember getting anything to tell me about this little gem. Saw the smut mondays update and then ran right over here. This story rocks!!!! I can't wait to see how Edward makes amends for what he did. Squeee! This story is so good!
Author's Response: LOL! Well, we're glad you found us! Aw, you saw Chubward become a man in Smut Mondays! We're so proud! Enjoy the story and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Cry
Well I got caught up in reading and didn't leave any reviews for the last few chapters, not because they weren't beautifully written, but because I just couldn't wait to see what happened next.
Now I'm caught up with everyone else and am going to be anxiously awaiting the next part of your wonderful story.
I really hate it when there are misunderstandings in stories, and I always think, well that could be cleared up so easily. But, I see the need for this happening in this story, I just hope and pray that you have a wonderful, passionate and touching reunion in store for them, and us!!! I'm sure you do, no one keeps Edward and Bella apart forever!! Right?
Anyway, the story is really captivating and I'm so glad I found it so that now I can wait on pins and needles to see how it unfolds. Thanks for sharing your gift.
Author's Response: We are both happily ever after girls at heart. So we'll definitely be providing some happy times and lovins, but it'll be a haul to get there!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Cry
wow - just read straight through after your FFFA 'what if' outtake, and i can't believe how i ever missed this story before. beautifully done, excellent pacing, love the once-a-year snippets to bring us up to your prologue, giving us the best moments of their years together. wonderful. looking forwrad to more.
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Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for the kind words and for reviewing! We love these two and we're so glad you're enjoying how we're writing the story!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:34 AM · On: 2000-Christmas
Oh so sad and so very poignant. So glad he had Bella beside him.
Thanks again for the moving chapter.
Author's Response: He never would have made it without her, ,I don't think...
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:22 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
This is just about the sweetest story I have ever read. I didn't think it was possible to make Edward a more loveable character, but you certainly have.
He and Bella together are just so cute together.
Thanks for the wonderful story!
Author's Response: Wow! We so appreciate this! They are so darling, aren't they?
Enjoy!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:45 PM · On: 1997-First day
Love the relationship these two have already, what a great idea for a story!
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: We're so glad you're enjoying our story!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Cry
woooo! i caught up. and stayed up too late catching up lmao (ellie, doesn't this seem familiar....lol at least it was only 13 chapters this time!)
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA! No where near as Herculean as Not Like This! Well done!
Now go read Chubward's Big Day!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Stolen Away
jeez they are dysfunctional lol
Author's Response: They're a hot mess!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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