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Reviewer: bryane (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:43 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Umm.. WOW! Love Love!!
Poor Bella... and damn Aunt Betsy.
I can't wait for the morning after, or Bella's POV

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:36 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Can I just...print this story out and read it religiously?

Because I'm HOPELESSLY in love with it.

Seriously.

It's kind of ridiculous.

Because I LOVED this chapter. It was fantastic.

Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:35 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Those last two lines in French?? *sigh* Oh girls, we are taking steps in the right direction...slow and steady...beautifully done as always!

PS - Aunt Betsy needs to get laid, and fast.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:34 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Poor broken Bella

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:33 AM · On: How to Save a Life

**thank you**

Reviewer: hotmom08 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:26 AM · On: How to Save a Life

fantastic!! i loved it! every bit of it!! please hurry with the next chapter!

Reviewer: cassieleexo (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:23 AM · On: How to Save a Life

love love love the chapter! :) im totally inlove with this story, i can't wait for more. :)

xo
Cassie

Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:20 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I knew staying at Alice's house was going to be too much for Bella.  I can only imagine how she must have felt hearing those words come out of that crusty old hags mouth...I guess her mom didn't teach her that if she didn't have something nice to say, then don't say anything at all.

I am glad that Edward knew where to find her...I am very worried about her state of mind right now.  With his description of her, it almost sounded like she had taken something...and at the hospital, when he spoke with Alice, did she look guilty because she knew Bella was on medication or because Bella didn't fall....hummmmm.

I hope that Alice and the rest will stop trying to push Bella right now and see that she is much more fragile than they realize.  I am very surprised that with Alice knowing so much more about Bella and her state of mind in regards to Edward that she would even think it was a good idea to push Bella to interact with Edward before she is ready to.  Only thing I can think of is that maybe Alice didn't know just how bad it has really been for her.

I'm so undecided with where I think Bella should stay right now, she definately will not be able to handle Alice's house...but I'm not sure she needs to stay with Edward...could be a good thing, but then again it could be a very bad thing. 

My heart really is breaking right now for Bella, she is in, and has been in for sometime now, a really bad place mentally.  She has gone from exile to "swimming with the sharks"....results....emotional overload....she and Alice both had to realize that this would not go well for her.  I could not have handled it either...she needs to talk with someone....get it all out...everything...if she doesn't start dealing with atleast some of the emotional crap right now, she is going to have a breakdown.  Not the best time to do that. 

Great chapter...looking forward to seeing what Bella does when she wakes up....in Edwards house.  

Reviewer: arduriel (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:20 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I actually squeed. Out Loud.

Love you guys =)

Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:11 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I really like getting a dose of Dr. Hotty in the morning....makes the day so much better.  Poor Bella, it seems that nothing is going to work out for her.  I hope that her fate starts to turn soon, it is so sad.  Great story and keeps getting better.

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:10 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Awww, sweet.=)

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:59 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I get so excited when I see your story is updated. Its one of my favorites and this chapter was AWESOME. Way to move the plot forward. I like where its going.

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:54 AM · On: How to Save a Life

So sweet. So perfect. Aunt Betsy must get a foot up her ass or something--maybe some bad shrimp at the reception?

Reviewer: ecsc (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:54 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Well at least that will give Edward encouragement even if consciously Bella will resist.   Great chapter.

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:34 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I'm developing such a crush on Chubward these days, out of all the wonderful fictional Edwards out there I think I wished he was real the most.

 

I love the chapter song, it's one of my all time faves, good choice.

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:21 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I wonder how Edward is going to react when he finds out the full extent of how his harsh words have affected her for all these years.  But yes--I very much enjoyed getting to see the ice around Edward's heart melt in Bella's presence.  And I'm looking forward to seeing just how he plans to get his Bella back. 

Reviewer: handiangel (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:14 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Love it. Edward was so sweet... I wonder what her reaction will be in the morning...?

 

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:08 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Oh, these lovely, lovely children. I wish I had chubward all to myself to speak sweet french things to me.....amazing chapter. She needs him so badly.

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:02 AM · On: How to Save a Life

damn...I just love this story...great chapter...cant wait for more

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:58 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Good chapter...glad to see they are making progress.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:54 AM · On: How to Save a Life

please dont take long i am so excited that you have movedthis along  its really beautiful

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:40 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Awww I was wondering how you were going to get Bella to Edward's b/c I knew she'd end up there I just didn't know how.  That was perfect.  A little insight for Edward into how screwed up Bella really is.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Stolen Away

forgot to mention your music selections were perfect its so nice to have some that has the music in sink with the  writting   and actually find bands that i know         i have to note also that the words pride will tear you apart no truer words ever uttered

Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:16 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I can't remember if I have reviewed for you yet, but wanted to say that the story is really sweet.  I thought E's reaction at prom was a little over the top, but it fits well with the story.  It goes to show how much one event can really change your life.  if anyone needs a do-over, it's these two. 

This chapter was very touching.  Achingly beautiful.

:)

Patty

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:13 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I really like this, you have a way of pulling the reader in.  I feel such pain for Bella and Edward is really clueless for not knowing she was so destroyed after what he did.  I can't wait to see how she reacts when she wakes up.  :-)

Great job!

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