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Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Prologue

Crap.  I just read like seven chapters or so and didn't even think to stop and review.  So backing up now... 
I usually hate prologues like this, especially short ones.  Damn you for ruining that for me.  I've been hearing about Chubward for a while now, and I haven't had the opportunity to sit down and read till now.  And this short bit just sucked me right in.

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:15 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

*sniff* Oh, *sob* poor *sniff* Bella! *wails*

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:10 AM · On: How to Save a Life

awesome story. i absolutely am hooked.  very different from other storylines. great job

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:05 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Wow - when he realizes all the damage HE caused he's gonna go all emoward huh?

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:03 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Oh Edward, you idiot.

Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:58 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Poor Bella, I guess Edward's cruel words were merely the straw that broke the camel's back. I hope Edward can convince her of his true feeling for her and that Bella can over look his current behavior with woman. Because, you know that will come up eventually, lol. Thanks so much for the update!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:56 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Awww this chapter has definatly made me feel warm fuzzies and I am deliriously happy. Though I may have some heated words with that aunt of thiers...gggrrrrr...

It's great that Edward was there to stitch Bella back up and maybe now he has an inkling of what Bella has been through. He destroyed that girl and I better see him work his ass off to make it right. (ok enough of my rants)

Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:52 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

*sobs*  Poor Edward.  *sniff*

Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:43 AM · On: How to Save a Life

love it!!!!! i hope things can be worked out!!!!he has a lot of groveling to do!!!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:43 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

Holy crap, that was a steamy smoochie!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:29 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Awwwww! Me loves fluff!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:16 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

Oh gosh, poor Bella.  How sweet, that he'd fly across the country for her.

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:56 AM · On: 1997-First day

Okay, now I really want to know what happened in Florida.

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:56 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Great chapter

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:46 AM · On: How to Save a Life

just read this from start to finish again......and its fabulous but i think  i may wait until its doen...the waiting around for updates is really starting to kill me generally!!

how many chapters in total are you thinking?

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:41 AM · On: 1997-New kid

Love!!!!  Oh, this is great.  Mike's an ass, but this is great.

Reviewer: tellingmelies (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:40 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Awww...he fell asleep by her side. I can only imagine her reaction when she wakes up. And his position, he's going to be in some pain...lol

Great chapter, a friend on Twitter told me about it and I had to come check out Chubward

Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:38 AM · On: How to Save a Life

achingly beautiful!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Prologue

Okay, kick ass start, ladies!

Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:18 AM · On: How to Save a Life

What a great chapter! Loved it! Poor Bella, I've got a feeling it's going to get a lot worse before it gets better for these two. Can't wait to read more. This is one of my absolute favorites, amazing job ladies!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:14 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Great chapter! That aunt was such a bitch. I hope she lets him help her. I think this will be good for both of them.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:08 AM · On: How to Save a Life

wow - i would definitely say this is a step forward.  Bella is really hurting and Edward doesn't even know the depth of her pain right now.  The bigger question is - can they move past what happened and realize their feelings for one another in the here and now?  God I hope so...these two need a lil happiness.

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:01 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I really like your story and I love when I see that you have updated.  I can't wait to see the journey that these two take.

Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:57 AM · On: How to Save a Life

I so love the ending. If only they can keep going forward, but I worry that Bella is going to freak out and Edward will panic and then they will be back to square one. Please please let me be wrong, even if its only a little itty bitty baby step forward. Love you girls, can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Lulabella (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:48 AM · On: How to Save a Life

This story is destroying me in the best possible way.

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