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Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:43 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Again, wow. That was so well-played. I love that Bella didn't just take it lying down, that Charlie stepped in and talked to Billy, etc. Normally I hate it when Bella runs, but this was so well-executed, like she was standing up and doing things her way that I couldn't help but like it.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:38 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh, now I want to hold poor Bella. God, won't people ever learn that simple words have more destructive power than atom bombs? *sigh*
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:36 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Wow. That was brutal. And poor Edward just standing there while their song played.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:28 AM · On: 2000-Christmas
heartfail :(
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:28 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Ahhh, now we're getting somewhere. And I'm having terrible flashbacks of truth or dare when I was a teenager ;)
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:28 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Guh, I love Dr. Edward!! And him speaking French... dreamy. He really did a number on Bella though if she spiraled into depression. Poor Bella. =0(
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:25 AM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses
I just want to hold Edward and tell him it'll all be okay. That, and smack both of em upside the head for being idiots.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:25 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance
I love this. The genuine friendship, the slow build...wonderful.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:24 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
That was frighteningly realistic without going overboard. Kids stuck in situations with irresponsible and unthinking parents have so much to fear, and yet I'm so glad you didn't take this down a darker path. Just the threat of something terrible happening was enough.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:22 AM · On: 1997-First day
Well, I've obviously read ahead, so I'm not so nervous about this anymore, but the whole mystery about what was so awful about Renee's place? Totally freaked me out. Maybe I've just read too many trauma fics.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:20 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Aw, this made me sad. Kids are just so damned mean, and being gthe new kid when you don't look like a supermodel must suck royally. Enter Bella, though, being all sweet and accepting. Great chapter.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Prologue
Crap. I just read like seven chapters or so and didn't even think to stop and review. So backing up now...
I usually hate prologues like this, especially short ones. Damn you for ruining that for me. I've been hearing about Chubward for a while now, and I haven't had the opportunity to sit down and read till now. And this short bit just sucked me right in.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:15 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
*sniff* Oh, *sob* poor *sniff* Bella! *wails*
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:10 AM · On: How to Save a Life
awesome story. i absolutely am hooked. very different from other storylines. great job
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:05 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Wow - when he realizes all the damage HE caused he's gonna go all emoward huh?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:03 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Oh Edward, you idiot.
Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:58 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Poor Bella, I guess Edward's cruel words were merely the straw that broke the camel's back. I hope Edward can convince her of his true feeling for her and that Bella can over look his current behavior with woman. Because, you know that will come up eventually, lol. Thanks so much for the update!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:56 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Awww this chapter has definatly made me feel warm fuzzies and I am deliriously happy. Though I may have some heated words with that aunt of thiers...gggrrrrr...
It's great that Edward was there to stitch Bella back up and maybe now he has an inkling of what Bella has been through. He destroyed that girl and I better see him work his ass off to make it right. (ok enough of my rants)
Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:52 AM · On: 2000-Christmas
*sobs* Poor Edward. *sniff*
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:43 AM · On: How to Save a Life
love it!!!!! i hope things can be worked out!!!!he has a lot of groveling to do!!!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:43 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Holy crap, that was a steamy smoochie!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:29 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance
Awwwww! Me loves fluff!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:16 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Oh gosh, poor Bella. How sweet, that he'd fly across the country for her.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:56 AM · On: 1997-First day
Okay, now I really want to know what happened in Florida.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:56 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Great chapter
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