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Reviewer: mustaintiffany (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:54 PM · On: How to Save a Life
loved it! great job girls! ellie, still holding out on us girl? you know to what i am referring to! lol
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:50 PM · On: 2000-Christmas
Deep Breath. How does one lose a parent, or in this case two, at such a young age? So much to ponder, so much to bear. How fortunate Edward has Bella as their bond solidifies even more.
Despite the horrorific circumstances of the chapter it has quite beautiful to actually watch the experiences that contribute to the growth of their love. It is rather interesting that they hide behind the best friend facade. But I suppose that is natural for two that are so very young.
Sandra
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:28 PM · On: How to Save a Life
“I’ll try my best to be gentle, Mon Coeur.”
As soon as the words were out of my mouth I realized my mistake. She gasped and paled, squeezing her eyes shut and turning her face away from me".......My heart just broke and the tears started falling (and never stopped) when I read this.
I guess Edward is starting to realize how messed up Bella really is....
That old aunt should be shot, but, you know, every family has someone nasty and cruel like that...
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:25 PM · On: How to Save a Life
Great chapter, I loved it. Keep up the amazing job. Heart you!
xoxo
amber
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:23 PM · On: How to Save a Life
Awwww! I hope Edward gives that old cow what for, and I hope they can move on together.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:15 PM · On: How to Save a Life
Well, at least I waited to read until this much of it was written. Of course I'm now dying for more, but from what I've seen on Twitter, you update often, so...*fingers crossed* This is truly a wonderful story, and so different from anything else I've read. Yes it follows the tried and true romance formula, but the little changes you have made to that formula make this a truly unique fic.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:14 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Crossed the line indeed. As if our sweet boy wasn't in love before. And didn't we just know he would be a great kisser?
I love how you are taking these two through all the awkward phases of adolescence.
Sandra
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Cry
Oh....*sniffle*
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Cry
I'm so nervous! I want them together and I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop and I may just have a stroke before I run out of chapters to read.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Stolen Away
Oh thank God! I thought she was just going to hide from him and push him away from the get-go. I'm sure there's major dramz around the corner, but this was such a relief.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:53 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I love your Alice. Bella's stubborn as all hell, but Alice is a force to be reckoned with.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:50 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance
I am back ladies. So much to catch up on. Reviews will be short and sweet for a while.
I was so certain he would attend the dance with Kate but a part of me was very happy he didn't. So does she learn to dance this night?
Sandra
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Stolen Away
Oh gosh, I hope they don't mess this up.
Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:45 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Oh Bella... My heart hurts for her. Edward has a lot to figure out and his work cut out for him but his heart is in the right place. It's gonna take a lot for Bella to see it...
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:43 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Again, wow. That was so well-played. I love that Bella didn't just take it lying down, that Charlie stepped in and talked to Billy, etc. Normally I hate it when Bella runs, but this was so well-executed, like she was standing up and doing things her way that I couldn't help but like it.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:38 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Oh, now I want to hold poor Bella. God, won't people ever learn that simple words have more destructive power than atom bombs? *sigh*
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:36 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Wow. That was brutal. And poor Edward just standing there while their song played.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:28 AM · On: 2000-Christmas
heartfail :(
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:28 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Ahhh, now we're getting somewhere. And I'm having terrible flashbacks of truth or dare when I was a teenager ;)
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:28 AM · On: How to Save a Life
Guh, I love Dr. Edward!! And him speaking French... dreamy. He really did a number on Bella though if she spiraled into depression. Poor Bella. =0(
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:25 AM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses
I just want to hold Edward and tell him it'll all be okay. That, and smack both of em upside the head for being idiots.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:25 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance
I love this. The genuine friendship, the slow build...wonderful.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:24 AM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
That was frighteningly realistic without going overboard. Kids stuck in situations with irresponsible and unthinking parents have so much to fear, and yet I'm so glad you didn't take this down a darker path. Just the threat of something terrible happening was enough.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:22 AM · On: 1997-First day
Well, I've obviously read ahead, so I'm not so nervous about this anymore, but the whole mystery about what was so awful about Renee's place? Totally freaked me out. Maybe I've just read too many trauma fics.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:20 AM · On: 1997-New kid
Aw, this made me sad. Kids are just so damned mean, and being gthe new kid when you don't look like a supermodel must suck royally. Enter Bella, though, being all sweet and accepting. Great chapter.
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