"I can't live without you"  So sweet!  I know why this story has so many reviews--it's beautiful.

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Aw, thank you!

We really do love working on it together.

What a lovely way to wake up.  Having your hands in Edward's hair and his face so close to you.  Yeah!!!  wish we all had one.  Still awkward but before Alice's call, Bella and Edward seemed to be slightly comfortable with each other.  Then having Amber talk about marriage between the two of them freaked Bella completely.  Alice double booked herself on purpose to throw Edward and Bella together on the errand to the florist shop.  Then Edward with his primrose placing it in her hair.  The floral meaning "I can't live without you".  Then let's go home.  These words should start to soothe Bella's heartache.  Amber said he looked at and left it blank, she wanted to say he looked at Bella like a man in love.  So hopefully Bella will realize that Edward feels the same for her that she feels for him now and before.  Looking forward to future chapters for more wedding plans, see Aunt Betsy get hers, and Bella and Edward to get together.

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You know, I don't know that Bella understanding that Edward does love her is the only thing that needs to happen.  Of course, I think if he can convince her, it will help endlessly, but she is so broken right now, as is he, that there is some trust that needs to be rebuilt as well.

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shes so broken it hurts to read almost. excellent chapter

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She is most definitely a broken girl.  Edward will need much strength and patience to get through this.

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Wow...it's so interesting to see Bella in this and the last chapter.  So much insight into her world.  I could totally see how she would be reminded of what could have been while they were at the florist.  I was thinking the same thing when Edward was making her breakfast--how if things had been different, they would be living together and he'd be making her breakfast...with the same low slung sweats and no shirt.  Yum! 

Is it bad that I like the melancholy in this chapter?

Wonderful job, Ellie!

--Melanie

PS Loved how she referred to the room as "my room" and how he says "let's go home" at the end.  If there's no HEA eventually, I think you ladies may have a riot on your hands!  =)

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This would be a completely different scene had prom gone different - one of domestic bliss.  Alas, things did not quite go that way for our two kids.  But maybe they can get it back.

And you know we're both HEA girls.  We just like to make it hurt a bit getting there.

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*Sigh*, another great chapter. Thanks for updating. Looks like they are making a tiny bit of progress. Must be marvelous to have Cutward a.k.a. Chubward a.k.a. Skankward a.k.a. Skunkweed cook cinnamon French toast half naked. We could only be so lucky.  :) 

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Now if only the could do this under better circumstances!  But we'd be happy to wake up to that!

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How did I miss this update?  I got the new update and realized I missed this somehow.  It was great though.  Isn't there always one old aunt who pulls crap like that!?!?!?  UGH!!!  But that was really good and now that she's with Edward maybe he can get through to her.  Oh, and that was cute having the doctor say he would call Whitlock in on it and she's in his wedding.  Nice touch!!!  Thanks for sharing.

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 Thank you!  A lot happens in this chapter...

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Great chapter! I LOVE this story! :)

Thanks for updating.

xo

Mel

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We're so glad you're enjoying the story!

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loved it.

 

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Thank you for reading and reviewing!

your doing a really good job potraying Bella as vulnerable in this story.  love it!

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She's a broken girl.  Alas, she won't be able to work through it until she faces Edward.

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What a sweet chapter.  Bella seriously needs some therapy.  She was horribly hurt but he's trying.  Hopefully its not too little too late.  And... somebody has to tell him how completely he destoryed her!  Alice knows... why didn't she ever tell Edward?

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I hazard to think that Alice felt it was not her story to tell.  You're right, Bella needs help, but she also needs to face Edward and he, her. 

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can't wait for more

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The next chapter is already up!

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What a selfish BITCH Alice is. First she bullies Bella into coming to Forks, knowing it's torture for her, then she lets that bitch aunt treat Bella like trash in public, THEN she demands that she stay around Edward.

Bella needs to run from these assholes before they end up breaking what's left of her.

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Poor Alice!  She asked Bella to be her maid of honour and said she would not take no for answer, not to be a bitch but because she missed her best friend.  Bella still could have said no. 

As for Aunt Betsy, Alice has no control over what she says.  Also the commentsw were not made in publice but in Alice's home.  Were they right?  Or course not.  Is Alice happy?  No.  Is it worth starting a family fued right before the wedding?  Probably not, although Alice will get her back in her own way soon enough.

Bella also has the option on going to Charlie's or a hotel, she chooses to stay with Edward.  While Alice wants these two to get their shit together and talk it out, she would never purposely hurt Bella for them to do so.

Keep reading, you may be surprised at where this goes......Thank you for reviewing.

Poor Bella.    I hope she is able to start healing soon.  And I love the meaning of the flower.  Aw!