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Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:52 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

ok, this totally broke my heart! i did NOT see this coming and i was so devastated for chubward!  poor thing.  i just wanted to give him a huge hug!!

awesome, yet awful, chapter.  i hope you know what i mean LOL



Author's Response:

He needs such a big hug.  We hated doing this to him :(

Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:51 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

oh yum!!!  what a kiss!  guhhhh!!!

great chapter!



Author's Response:

He did *so* well.  *sniffle*

Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:50 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance

aw, chubward!  how i love thee! 

Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:49 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

gah, bella's really been thru some crap! i can't believe she kept that from everyone!

great chapter!

Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:48 PM · On: 1997-First day

poor bella!  sounds like she's really been thru some shit, tho i'll admit, at this point i had no idea WTF that shit was LOL.  but i was crazy curious!

great update!



Author's Response:

You'll find out!

Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:47 PM · On: 1997-New kid

awwww, poor chubward! i don't like him being picked on...at all!!!  so glad bella stepped in!  and i love that alice accepts edward just the way he is =)



Author's Response:

Poor little Chubward!  He's so *cute*

Reviewer: sunshine00 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Prologue

imma try to generate some type of review for each CH tho i should have done it as i read cuz now i can't remember what i wanted to say LOL! so plz excuse the crapalicious nature of these reviews.  it's the thought that counts...???

i found this prologue to be verra verra intriguing when i read it!



Author's Response:

LOL!  We lurves you, bb!

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:48 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

DAYUM go Edward.

 

Trina



Author's Response:

He did so well:)  *sniff*

 

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 07:48 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance

I am now officilly in love with Chubward.

 

Trina

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:44 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

Poor Bella and Edward what an awful thing to go thru.

 

Trina

Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean

Beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:21 PM · On: 1997-First day

Umm What the hell happened?  Am I gonna find out in later chpaters?

 

Trina (HookaShewz)



Author's Response:

That you will!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:04 PM · On: 1997-New kid

HEHEHE.  Intreasting.  I hate Mike Newton in like everything, well cept for House of Cards. He was a good guy.

 

Trina (HookaShewz)



Author's Response:

Yeah, and we're not done with Mike yet!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Prologue

This chapter really pulls you in.  I am thinking I want to know what happened.

 

Trina (HookaShewz)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you tried the story out!

Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean

loved it!



Author's Response:

YAY!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean

I know Bella has been in the victim role most of her life, and having seen a therapist, shouldn't they be working on her breaking that mentality and getting a little backbone?  I DO feel bad for her, to a point, then I just want her to get MAD and take back her life!



Author's Response:

She should be, but I certainly know several people who don't always respond well to therapy.  But you're right, she just needs to get mad.  And maybe you will see that:)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean

Loved this update!  Both of them are so full of emotions and just don't know where to begin.  I hope that when Edward makes his attempt to explain, Bella will allow him to talk and will listen to what he has to say.  And when Edward hears of how his words have affected her for 8 long years, I hope he can somehow forgive himself and do everything he can to make it up to her.  I firmly believe that the primrose he gave her say he will do just that. 



Author's Response:

He's going to have worlds of patience with her and with himself, that's for sure!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean

*****SIGH*****  Primrose.  Uh, I wanted to hate him so much for so long...and now...I'm in love again!

Someone give me a damn Primrose!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

The primrose is melting hearts... and panties.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: carebear (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean

GAH..I'm dying on the inside...poor Bella, poor Edward...I hope they get their *h*t together soon!



Author's Response:

They are both a hot mess in their own ways.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Drop in the Ocean

P.S.  Perhaps you can write this story from EPOV...and call it "Becomes the Douche"  hahaah ;)



Author's Response:

Aw, poor Chubward!  Give him a chance! (LOL)

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Drop in the Ocean

Ladies, I'm sure I'm your last Edward holdout...but I want to shove that primrose up his ASS! HOW DARE HE!!  he has NO right to fuck with her head, especially as he knows how messed up and confuses she is! And calling her mon coeur?  She should rip out his heart and stomp on it! in heels, no less! or combat boots! he is taking liberties to which he is not entitled.

 

HMPH!  (sniffs in outrage)

 

POOR BELLA.  She should bolt from this wedding. Alice is evil, evil, evil!!! the whole family needs to GO.   And now with Charlie involved with Sue, and having Seth, Bella really has no home. And they should send that old bitch of aunt packing! maybe she'll trip on the glass, too, and cut her corotoid!

 

GAH. everything related to these people and wedding is just poisonous. Run, Bella, RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sigh. hate edward. hate hate hate! and I hate hating him!! waaaaaa. :)

Love you and the updates, though, ladies. :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  Chubward isn't that bad.   He's not trying to mess with her head, he just... loves her and doesn't realize the extent of the damage yet...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:24 AM · On: How to Save a Life

Still hating Edward! gah!!! grrrrrr...Bella's a hot mess and it's HIS FAULT! >:<



Author's Response:

Honestly, it's not his fault.  He was just the last straw...

Thanks so much for supporting us!

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Drop in the Ocean

I've seen the two of you all over Twitter talking about Chubward and I finally gave in and started reading this.  Holy Shit!  I couldn't stop once I started.  You had me crying and yelling and pissed and hurting.  I was completely useless all day at work because I had to see what happened next.

Bella is totally breaking my heart.  I want her to find love in Edward.  They both need each other so much.  I just know it is going to kill Bella when she finds out that Edward slept with Lauren.  Even though it meant nothing to him, it will kill her.  I wonder how she will react to his man whoring ways.

Will we see a conftrontation between Jake and Bella.  He so deserves a good kick to the balls for what he did to her.


Love the story and can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

LOL!  We do sort of blow up Twitter when we get all excited over Chubward!  Sorry!  But we are glad you gave him a go! 

They both do need each other so much.  They had a big role in each other's destruction, but they are the only ones that can put the other back together.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: marlievic (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:07 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

Gah! That chapter was soo good.  Wasn't expecting that. 



Author's Response:

We kinda snuck up on ya with that one.  Hope we did it justice.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Drop in the Ocean

Awesome chapter. How sweet that Edward sleep on the floor next to her side all night. I really wish Bella would just try to relax and let herself feel. I know it's hard for her but Edward is trying so hard that it hurts.  I really thought I was going to be able to make it through a whole chapter without any tears but by the time I got to the end, I had to give in. Thanks for that by the way, LOL!!!  Can't wait for the next update!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  It's so amazing people thank us for making them cry!  We're just glad that folks are connecting to the story!

Thank for reviewing!

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