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Reviewer: marlievic (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Storm
I love this story SO much! I'm glad Bella got to hear how Edward was feeling and that they're being friends again :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: The next chapter has a big confrontation....are you ready for it?
Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Storm
I was so glad to see the update! I am so stuck on this story I need more!!!! =)
Author's Response: More is on the way! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Storm
OMG! I usually hate plot POV repeats from the other person, but we HAVE TO HAVE A BELLA POV of this chapter!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with Edward on top!
Author's Response: So sorry, you won't get BPOV of this but she is up next and it is a doozy!
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Storm
Wow what a change in Bella's demeanor since last chapter. I can't wait to see her side of things. I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you for your support!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Storm
Loved the update! So glad that Charlie can see that Edward has changed, that he really does love Bella and wants her back in his life. Edward needed to hear that from Charlie before pursuing her in earnest. And how lovely, how courageous for Bella to go to Edward at the cemetery in his hour of need. She heard everything, good and bad. And it says so much about her, about her feelings for him, that she was a friend to him even after hearing the bad stuff. Something tells me the good stuff she heard far outweighed the bad...
Author's Response: Charlie is a smart, perceptive man. he knows that these two will heal each other. Bella's accpetance of Edward is the first step in a good direction for them. Stay with us.
Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Storm
Wow, Edward got a lot out in the open in this chapter... Bella seemed to assimilate that little bombshell pretty quickly. I guess her underlying need to be there for Edward surfaced when she saw him so torn up in front of his folks' grave. I hope we get to hear a little about that transformation from Bella's pov next. :)
Author's Response: She has always been there for him in his time of need. It was a pivotal moment for both of them.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Storm
HO-LY CRAP. I squealed like a fangirl when I read this--so sweet. And Edward in his underwear left my hyperventalating. Seriously.
Author's Response: Edward in his underwear...coherency gone......sorry! LOL! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Storm
i read this whole story today and I must say I loved every word. Fabulous job ladies!!!
So maybe she is willing to try to be atleast friends again with edward, I hope so. I feel she needs someone to love her and so does edward. even with all the women he was with, there was never love involved.
Author's Response: So glad you have enjoyed our tale! The two of them need each other. More to come.
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Storm
Oh, wow, really good chapter. please update soon, I love your story
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you like it!
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Storm
AWW! Another step in the right direction yay!! I'm loving this story, so sweet! Great chapter, as always, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: More is coming up and it is oh so good!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Storm
"It should have been us."...OK, I am SO CRYING now!
I LOVE that he kissed her while she was asleep..Now, if he can just get her ready to recieve a kiss while awake.
"I know you have stopped sleeping around, and I am proud of you. I know life hasn’t been easy, and I haven’t always been happy with your actions, but deep down you were always a good boy, Edward.”..... “Don’t mess it up this time. You’ve got a second chance here.” ..... “Bring my baby girl home again, Edward. You are the only one that can.”.....OMG!!!! You go, Charlie!
"Did she like what she saw?"..OH YES SHE DID!! and I think she saw him NAKED!!Oh Yeah, Baby!!!!
Author's Response: Charlie is my hero! My absolute hero. So glad you liked this!
Naked Edward was...GAH!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Storm
Beautiful bbs... I almost started crying at work, thanks dorkfaces. Lol, I'm glad that Edward's voicing his thoughts aloud, even to some people who can't reply. It'll make him feel better and the fact that Bella heard him was priceless. I'm glad that they're falling in to their old comradery again.
Start mending the broken hearts...
Author's Response: LOL! I feel proud of that! I made you almost cry at work.....Ellie made me cry like a bitch once in front of my boss......
Broken hearts on the mend!
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Storm
Wow! <heart breaking>....how do you do it every time????? The wreck and then Charlie's talk.... then the cemetary.... I had to go to the bathroom to hide so my husband wouldn't laugh at me crying....again. You make the emotion just jump off the page and press hard on my chest. These two need each other....time together to heal each other. I can't wait to see it all progress. I really hope this will pick up where it left off. I love movie nights!!! Who wouldn't love sharing cover with Edward???? Once again suprub job. I squeel with delight everytime I see this updated!!!
Author's Response: It was ahard chapter to write...I cried a bit doing so.
These two so need each other! They are the key to healing the hurt each of them carry.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Storm
Edward just broke my heart in this chapter. I loved everything Charlie told him. He really needed to hear that. When he was talking at the cemetery I kept hoping Bella was there listening. Yay for that!
I can't wait to see what happens with movie night.
Author's Response: He did need to hear Charlie`s accpetance. He has been so lost and feeling so worthless.
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Storm
A few reasons I loved this update :-)
1) I loved how Bella and Edward both know where to find the other when they are hurting.
2) I loved the words of wisdom Charlie imparted to Edward. He indeed has a second chance with Bella.
3) I loved how you wrote Bella catching Edward in his boxers and by the sounds of it when he was naked *blushes thoroughly*
Do we get to see a little bit of wooing in the next chapter ;-)
Author's Response: Wooing will have to wait...these two finally have it out...it involves alcohol and alot of emotion! Stay with us.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Storm
at least things are looking up!
Author's Response: That they are! Thank you for reviewing1
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Storm
OMG, Loved it! At first I was tearing up with Edward talking to his parents but then I was wanting more of him and Bella. Can't wait to see why Bella stuck around so she could see him in all his naked glory. LOL
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I was tearing up writing the graveside convo.....and the nakedness....GAH!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Storm
I'm intrigued by Bella's transition. I'm very interested to read her thoughts... :)
Author's Response: You'll love the next chapter! Bella's POV is great!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Storm
Aww it appears a thaw is in the air!
Author's Response: 'Tis indeed!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Storm
Aww, ladies...an update from you two was just what I needed! Having an eh kinda of day...so thank you both! :)
I loved the moment with Edward and Charlie...Papa Swan has every right to hate Edward for what happened with Bella...but he knows he can never fight what the two of them have....and that its only a matter of time. :)
The scene of Edward at his parents grave.... :(....OMG! Just broke my heart! But I loved Bella for knowing just where to find him...and being just what he needed at the moment. Too cute when she walked in on him in the bathroom....I don't blame the girl for her reaction...lol! And finally...the last line...SO freaking cute!
LOVED IT ladies...Loved it very much! :)
Author's Response: So glad we could make your day better! Chubward is on his way with a care package in cluding bubble bath!
Chubward needs a hug too after that graveside confession!
Reviewer: mycrookedsmile (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Storm
gah- the part with Chief Swan was so sweet.
I hope that Bella and Edward will talk about what she overheard, as well as what happened at the prom.
Author's Response: We love Charlie! Thank you for your review.
Reviewer: ssmith_165 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Storm
I love this story and I know that Edward is sorry but he has no clue how much he has made Bella suffer. I usually want Bella and Edward to get together ASAP in fanfics but I really want him to suffer and work hard for it in this one.
Author's Response: He is going to have to work for it! n She won't just roll over and forgive everything.
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Storm
Oh my goodness! That was just an amazing chapter... really touching when he goes to see his parents and I loved that she was there for him. It was just great. Great writing and great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Storm
That was a beautiful chapter. Him going to talk to his parents, le sigh. I expected Charlie to give him a harder time but like he said he was a good kid and he is the only one that can bring Bella home.
Author's Response: It was high time Edward came clean!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Storm
Holy crap!!!!! So bella tell us about the view??!!! I'm sure he has a glorious backside but how bout them jewels??? Lol
Ok soooo now what???
Author's Response: The jewels are nice too...trust me. You'll see what Bella is thinking next chapter!
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