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Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Storm
It was too short. :( But I love that Bella is getting back close with Edward again. It seems to be the right time. I love how he is acting now. He understands what he did was wrong and wants to get back what he lost. Can't wait to read about movie night. I know there will be some cuddle time. YAY!!!
Keep the magic flowing...
~Shani
Author's Response: Too short? The next chapters are monsters, so be warned! Stay tuned for more action!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:51 PM · On: How to Save a Life
What a range of emotions in this one. The anti-depressants, curious to know what brought on the need for them. The aunt is deserving of what ever tongue-lashing she receives for her remarks. Bella's breakdown in the meadow, and her mumbled words, highlights of this one for me. I see the baby steps happening, and I'm enjoying it.
Author's Response: There is a lot going on here. It'a painful and slow, but things are happening.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Storm
Another amazing chapter. You ladies can seriously do no wrong. I'm awaiting the movie night chapter! ;)
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Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying this! Thank you for your kind words.
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Cry
The reunion with Esme was the toughest one yet.
Her traitor mind was rather amusing as she took in his new form.
His eyes, her longing for home, and her constant insecurity, all nicely done.
Looking forward to seeing how the month unfolds.
Author's Response: Yeah, she notices Chiselward, even if she doesn't want to! And Esme, that was so difficult....
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Stolen Away
I adore Jasper. His straight shooting is exactly what Edward needs.
And Emmett? Too funny.
Great chapter. Looking forward to see what Bella thought of becoming reaquainted.
Author's Response: Jasper definitely has Edward on a tight leash! And Emmett is a big bear.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:12 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
I feel awful for Bella, having that thought and those words linger in her mind, not being able to dream.
Looking forward to seeing how things go when she goes back.
Author's Response: She has been brought done to her barest, most broken place. Now, if only she can be healed by facing her past....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:01 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses
Oh man. What a change! Glad to see he called for help and is willing to make the effort to work things out.
His visualizing of Bella as his only means of getting off was sad to see play out.
Esme's scare, the haunted memories, the condolence cards, the rooftop clean-up, all emotion filled moments expressed beautifully.
Author's Response: He's nearly as broken as she - he just went in a different direction with his pain...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:49 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
My heart is broken. She's gone. Really gone.
I was shaking my fist at Chubward for this one. Even though the events of prom were the same, seeing that Bella willingly accepted and believed that she was a whore and deserved it hurt. I can't believe he made her feel that way.
Then she feels the need to uproot her life and move across the country. Poor Charlie, his pleading was so sweet. Poor Alice for not getting a proper goodbye. Poor Chubward for being hurt and saying all the wrong things. Poor Bella for having to let it all go.
Nicely done.
Author's Response: She was utterly and completely destroyed by his words. Mind you, there was much going on allowing her to accept this as truth from him - it wasn't just what *he* said that broke her. But it was the last straw.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:36 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Gah. Again I knew what was coming having read the Smut Monday entry where Chubward popped his cherry, but this still hurt my heart. The comment about Lauren and Jessica being whores but being honest about it was especially harsh.
Looking forward to seeing things through Bella's eyes.
Author's Response: Oh yes, those words... How can one even take that back?
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Storm
I'm truly loving all the emotions that are so pronounced in this fic. It really enhances the characters and thier stories.
I think that it's sweet that Bella is trying to get past her insecurities a little for her friends. His reactions to her; taking care of her is allowing her to open up and take care of him right back, just like the beginning.
Author's Response: It is very brave of Bella to try to take care of Edward after everything between them. She is truly trying to get past her own demons.
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:24 PM · On: 2000-Christmas
Wow. I saw it coming when they opened the door, but that didn't stop it from hitting me hard. That was intense, and I write this with tears in my eyes and my heart in my throat.
Poor Chubward. Poor Bella.
The promise to never leave is a hefty one and it will sadden me when it inevidently gets broken.
Carlisle telling him he is his son touched me deeply.
Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: This was such a difficult chapter. Other than Bella, this was Edward's entire world ripped away from him.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Storm
OOhhhh. Did Bella get a peek?
Author's Response: She got quite the view! Yummy Yummy!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Storm
awwww!!!!!! i love how she got to hear how he feels for her!!! i hope we get to see her pov!!!!!!!! can't wait for more!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Her Pov is up next but is not a repeat of this chapter. I am sure you will enjoy it just the same....
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Storm
ahhhhh! How much did she hear?
And how much did she see? ; P
Author's Response: She saw the whole.....package.....
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:13 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
That was wonderful.
I got a little lost along the way and am back to get my fix of Chubward and boy did that hit the spot.
His dad giving him condoms, porn mags and lube cracked me up.
The knowing looks around the fire- well played.
The truth-or-dare kiss that got hot and heavy; the admission of an erotic dream by Bella. Loved it.
Looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response: They definitely were both forced to admit a lot of their feelings on this trip!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Storm
So um... how are you guys with updates? 1/week? 1/month? I MUST KNOW!!!
Author's Response: We update once per week, sometimes sooner if one chapter elicits a large response. So glad you seem to be enjoying this.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Storm
holy CRAP!!!! i need to know exactly what she heard at the gravesite!!! did she hear the "I love her" part??? did she?? DID SHE!?!?!?!?!?
GAH!!! I must know!!! and what's gonna happen on the couch??? any making out? declarations of feelings? sex? proposals, marriage or indecent??
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
(ok, I admit it....after that scene at the tomb stones, I'm not completely hating Edward any more.) :)
Author's Response: I told you that I would make you like Edward again. He isn't so bad, just broken too. The next chapter is a doozy, so be ready!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Storm
“My Bella won’t even look at me.”
Broken, destroyed, finished. Such is my heart at Edward’s greatest, yet most devastating truth.
But…
“I had a movie to watch with my girl.”
And then there was reprieve. Sweet, hopeful, promising reprieve.
Revelations are at hand, and agony has come to it’s epitome of release.
I say welcome to it all.
WELCOME.
Author's Response: The is hope, isn't there? Edward will misguided in much, is really just as broken as Bella. Be prepared for more revelations to come though, these two still have so much to say.
Thanks for your continued support.
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Storm
So sweet. We all deserve a second chance.
Author's Response: I truly believe that!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Storm
My heart aches every time I read a chapter. These 2 deserve a happily ever after wit hall the hurt they have already experienced.
Author's Response: They will get one.....eventually. Stick with us, the ride to HEA will be worth it!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Storm
Wow. Is it only me or are others feeling a sense of healing with this chapter?
The soft kiss in her sleep. The accident. Seeing Charlie. His visit to the flower shop. Her visit to the flower shop. She finds him at the cemetary and takes him home. The chapter as a whole was so powerful.
It is as if we are about to embark upon the road back.
My heart feels lighter already.
Sandra
Author's Response: It is but one step on the road to forgiveness and recovery for our two wounded souls. So glad you approve!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Storm
Well if it were any more poignant, I wouldn't have been able to write this.
You both have really written such a beautiful story. I've just been so amazed at the quality of writing I've read since discovering fanfiction. Do you all every get to publish anything?
Just so glad I discovered your story!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Your review blew us away! We are so truly thrilled that you are enjoying this so much. Thank you! Our goal is to one day publish something together....let's hope we are able to fulfill our dream!
Your praise is much appreciated!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Storm
Oh dear lord there are no words for how much I love this...
All is so incredible...will some of the healing between them be coming?
Author's Response: The healing has commenced, although it will be a long road.
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Cry
wow, this chapter physically made my heart hurt :( those last few chapters, especially. you girls are GOOD.
Author's Response: It is a painful chapter...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Storm
I think only a confession like that, where there was nothing to gain for him in the eyes of Bella (he didn't know she was listening), where she was sure there would be no lies, no deceiving, only then... the true healing could begin.
I think they are both hurting tremendously. Edward feels an unparallel guilt. And Bella... well, Bella is lost in herself and those words. She's locked within walls of shame. I think they truly need each other, no only in a romantic way, but also in a forgiving way. Edward needs to forgive himself, let go of the guilt and show Bella how much he loves her. And Bella needs to let go of the shame, the what ifs, grasp some confidence and love herself and him. :D It's gonna be a rocky road, I think. You can't just put aside years of hurting like it's nothing.
I loved Charlie's intervention. I think it was the beginning of hope for Edward. Hope that Bella, somewhere in her forgiving heart, she could give him a second chance.
I don't think there's any doubt she would give him that. Actually, I don't even think the problem is with Edward. I think Bella's problem is with herself. She will certainly give him everything, but I'm not so sure if she would forgive herself. Well, that's what Edward's for, right?? ;)
Awesome chapter as always. Loved it :D Especially now that we had that awesome scene :D
Thanx for the update :D
Author's Response: I truly agree. he never meant for her to hear him and was therefore brutally honest. She needed to see his pain in order for them to move forward and in order for her to believe his remorse.
Bella is wracked with self doubt. She will need time and patience before she is able to regain her former confidence.
So glad you enjoyed this chapter!
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