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Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:19 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Poor Charlie! Poor Bella!
This story needs to get happy!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Closer
bah....hurry up, i don't think i can take the suspense of waiting for the next chapter!!!!
jesus i love this story...
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:00 AM · On: 2000-Christmas
Oh, that was too sad. :(
Poor Chubward.
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:35 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance
I love Chubward! lol
Reviewer: whisperwind (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Storm
what beautiful words Edward said for forgiveness-they were so emotional
Reviewer: Jenn32 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Prologue
Hmm..seen this talked about on "Not Like This" and also "Rescue Me". Sounds good so far!
Author's Response: We hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Storm
love this chapter =]
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Storm
Poor #Chubward :(
he was so sad earlier on, and WOW charlie really surprised me, in a good way.
Go Charlie!
Oh.my.fucking.WORD! :O
*Mouth drops to floor* I literally gasped, when he stripped down to his
BBs. Dear lord in heaven then he took those off...and now I'm on the floor...also with the fact that he has a PARKA!! OMFG *DED*
LOVE U LADIES SO HARD!!
lee <3
Author's Response: Awww Lee! We lurves you too. And the Parka...it's all for you bb!
Reviewer: Aurabee (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:49 AM · On: 2000-Christmas
Rarely does fic actually make me cry, but you did it here.
This story is really wonderful.
Author's Response: It made us cry to write this. Ellie really made their emotions poignant. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Storm
First off --- I NEED MORE.
Second... again, what a fantastic chapter. I cried like a baby. I do hope we've turned the corner slightly, and I am ok with Edward not making up for anything anymore.
This is my new favorite roller - coaster story. Very, very talented ladies = )
Author's Response: We've created a monster! Welcome to the club.
We are both so glad to see you enjoying the fic, thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean
Seriously. You're trying to kill me right? Here I am, quarter to 1, totally engrossed in this story, crying. Such a good chapter but I must ask --- will Edward get it that he is the one that makes her feel this way? That she is haunted?
Author's Response: Edward needs a reality check! So glad you are supporting the Kleenex company.....they should send us a dollar for every one used by our readers, we'd be rich!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:31 PM · On: How to Save a Life
OK, few things. One, I started listening to the songs at the beginning of the chapter a few back, and besides my iTunes crying as I stuff more songs in there, your music choices are dead on.
I seriously called Edward an ass like 40 times through this chapter. I especially loved this line:
What had brought her to this point? <------ UM YOU?
Anyways, now that I am done talking to fictional characters, the chapter is perfect - tear jerking and just perfect. I know I use that word frequently, but it means the best in my book. ; )
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We have a playlist on Itunes too, and also on playlists.com. If you would like it PM your e-mail and I will send it to you.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Cry
God, everytime I read Bella's perspective I just feel like breaking down and never resurfacing. I am gonna own stock in Kleenex by the time this is over!
I feel so HORRIBLY bad for Bella just because there she is, reliving the horror of their last interaction... sigh. Heartbreaking.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Stolen Away
ahhhhh. Perfect chapter. I feel bad for Bella, living that lonely life in Florida, and then coming back to Edward who is sooo excited he can't deal.
AND I LOVED Jasper laying down the law. Couldn't have said it better myself!
Edward has a lot more groveling to do in my book but he is getting there = )
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean
more tears...This story is worse than 'Not Like This'!!!! My husband is going to think I'm mental... :)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:03 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
God...I'm in tears this chapter! This might be the most broken mess of a Bella I've ever read...
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:02 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
oh now this one was just awful!! More than the last chapter and that's saying something! It's amazing what a quick turn from angst to tortured sadness this story has taken. It works though! I'm off to see how the reunion goes.
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Storm
I love him again.
Author's Response: Are you sure, I can always make him eat more french toast.......
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Drop in the Ocean
I hope he eats more french toast.
He doesn't get to act all fucking sweet, because I'm still mad. Kick him in his oversexed formerly fat balls, Bella.
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Storm
I'm happy he went to see his parents. I was surprised to see that he actually moved back into the house. Great chapter.
Author's Response: His parents, sigh.....it was sad and hard for me Urs. It really was!
Thanks again for sticking with us through this angstfest!
Reviewer: Seraphslastkiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Storm
OMG! That chapter was fabulous! This story sucked me right in!. I wuv chubward and sexonlegsward. Yum! I can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: we wuv your review! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:02 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
It was this line : "I stared at it countless times, crying, wishing I could bring myself to deserve to open it. But I didn’t. I couldn’t." and the italicized whispers of Chubward's words that required more tissues and a FOURTH application of eye makeup. I should really switch to waterproof before reading FF.
Congratulations ladies. PHENOMENAL.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:55 AM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses
Damn. At least I didn't need tissues this chapter (since I just fixed my eye makeup for the second time before work. ) Edward needs to get his act together --- but I feel bad for him too.
I am gonna try for another chapter before work and then I think I am going to have "Meetings" all day that require me to keep my office door shut.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:23 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Damn. I had the tissues from the last TWO chapters (thank you very much) but I failed to wear the big girl panties. I should call off work now while I am still crying. Powerful writing here ladies, Powerful.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:16 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Well, glad I went for the tissues for the last chapter. Sheesh. I love Chubward but I want to hit him, hard. We all know Jake is always the bad guy... ; )
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