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Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Crash
::tear::
Reviewer: IrisDraven (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Crash
This story got recommended by someone I followed on Twiiter Roselover24. I ended up reading all 18 chapters in two days. I love the spin you guys have on these two characters. I appericate how damaged they both are, it's not ever fanfic that you find two broken people trying to heal each other after basically tearing each other apart. This chapter really was a great combo of heartache and hope. Keep up the good work ^-^
Reviewer: tellingmelies (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Crash
Oh my god, I thought I was going to die reading this from his pov, but that last part...you saved me with that last part...thank God, I don't think I could take anymore.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Crash
YEAH!!!!
They are trying ..... I hope
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Crash
*Stares at screen in stunned silence...seriously you can hear the damn crickets*
I don't know what to say other than it was on Fabulously written chapter...I am delightfully stunned.
Reviewer: calemzoe (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Crash
Geez, I am so glad how this chapter ended, but I'm worried she'll end up taking 2 steps back in the morning. Like the good soldier that I am, I humbly wait patiently for the next chapter.......
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Crash
I hate the idea of these two being so broken. I hope that the conversation they have in the morning will include a full on confession about their feelings and fears and everything. They will never be able to move forward if they don't each share how they feel. It's really important for Bella to stop seeing Edward as perfect and for her to allow Edward to apologize. And Edward has some pretty major apologies to make...
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Crash
Now I think Lauren's an even bigger bitch than I originally thought!
So glad you gals posted this from Chubward's POV too...lots of jumbled admissions. I wonder how everything will go in the morning. I'm almost too scared to hope...
--Melanie
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Crash
WHAT'S NEXT WHAT'S NEXT!!!
lmao i am so impatient when it comes to these two.
very happy to see she went to him. it's a start.
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Crash
::sobs heavily::
I knew I should have waited until tomorrow. I'm too emotional right now...
But you were right, Tams. The ending does give me hope. Gah..I can't stop crying now...
...phew, I need snuggles. Is Chubward available? Just for like, a few minutes?
Oh..I nearly died reading Chubward's reaction to the Peen Rant. It's so pretty, Chubward. Oh, le sigh.
xo- SE
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Crash
Progress, bitches! This was such a sweet POV, I loved it! That's all I really have to say...Sorry.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Crash
Great chapter.
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Crash
WOW, that was pretty damn intense! I'm SO happy Bella went to Edward. :) I hope now they can help heal each other and find happiness....together :)
Thanks for updating! xoxo
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:44 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
Edward? DIE you motherfucker. DIE.
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Crash
Awwww!!!
K, I think that's all I can really say at this point.
Except for this: *squeeeeeee*
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Crash
man, this is angsty to the max! poor Bella, so traumatised in school and never recovered (mind you, i dont think the booze would have helped)
Reviewer: zoe harris (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Crash
Ugh, my heart! It HURTS reading this, it's so emotional.
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Crash
Bella is so broken God Edward needs to get his shit together and fast.
Reviewer: Tyranelson (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Crash
Wow that was rough. I really hope she wasn't too drunk and she remembers it in the morning. One step forward???
Great chapter, looking forward to the next!
Reviewer: mycrookedsmile (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Crash
I still want to pummel Edward's formerly chubby face. Of course I want them to have a hea, and for Bella not to be broken anymore. But dammit he makes me angry. I dunno about Bella, but I need groveling, I need begging, and I need a really really freaking good reason why this all happened in the first place.
ahem. apparently I am really affected by your story ;)
Reviewer: eclipsy84 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Crash
Why do I get the feeling that Edward still doesn't totally get it, how broken Bella really is. That seems just too easy.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Crash
Oh my GOD! She thought….she…..I…..NO! How could she believe that? How? I had to fix this now.
HOW, Assward? Because you CALLED her a whore in PUBLIC, you ugly bastard!
"Mine."? Well, how nice for you. You get to be a whore and then get a virgin for a reward. Die, Edward. Die.
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:44 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance
Frigging Chubward is so damn cute!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:28 PM · On: 1997-New kid
This is adorable!
On to chapter 3!
Reviewer: MovieMoments (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Closer
Thank you! I love it!
But how do you subscribe to stories on here? Sorry, Im just more used to fanfiction.net then twilighted.
Thanks,
MovieMoments.
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