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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Changing Channels
*DEAD*
Monumental chap with one of the best "first" kisses EVER!
*Thud* I can die happy now lol.
The picture, the letters, all so devastatingly sad and sweet at the same time.
They're trying, SHE'S trying. They have a long way to go but THIS here was a damn good start.
LOVED it Ladies :D
Lee <3
Gonna go have a good cry and dream of Chubward lol :)
Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Changing Channels
Aww so cute chubward is now hotward what the hell is bellas prob not going for some eddie lovin what a dingbat. At least she admited he had pretty junk lol
Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Prologue
*Grins maniacally and rubs hands together* Heeheeheeheehee! Bring it on.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Crash
ugh* I wanna cry SO badly!
I'm a little choked up at the moment, this was....no words.
Yes.I.am basically speechless.
The emotions, killed me.
Chubward was tired of being broken, tired of pretending to be okay *sigh* :'(
When he called Alice, and said he was out. I think, I died a little in that moment NGL.
Him thinking, that she would be only his after he found out she was still a virgin, was not unexpected, of course, he would feel good about that.
The love of his life, was untouched, plus It's a man thing lol.
She went to HIM!!! *squee*
you guys did a complete 360 turnaround with mah heart :')
*happy tears*
*snuggle* :P
Me love me some Parka Chubward *dreamy sigh*
Luv you ladies <3
Lee
Author's Response: *hugs you* We missed you sweet!
And an upcoming chapter was written w/you in mind. Chubward's parka is discussed in detail...
Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Changing Channels
I'm finally catching up on my reviewing. Great job ladies! Love it. This story just gets better with every chapter. Drunken Bella is funny and I loved the kiss it was sooo sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter.
xoxo
Amber
Author's Response: Poor Drunkella...
*sigh* The kiss. I think we all want a kiss like that...
Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: --Jakes-Girl-- (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Changing Channels
Yay! I'm glad they finally kissed. :)
I had been waiting for that!!!
Thanks so much for writing this story! It is amazing!
Please update sooooon!!!!!
<3
Author's Response: Update is in queue!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AliaBobbwa (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Changing Channels
cute story. I like it a lot!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ginginlee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Changing Channels
I just read all the chapters for ...Becoming the Swan today, and I must say, I cannot wait for the next one! I love this story, though it is heartbreaking as well. The writing is excellent and engrossing, I really feel the pain and anguish. Thanks!
Author's Response: We are so appreciative of your sweet comments!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Prologue
This story has been recommended by one of the members of the LiveJournal community Twilight Enablers.
Come check it out and while you're there, consider giving us recommendations for your favourite Twilight fanfictions!
Thanks!
GinnyW
Author's Response: *hugs you* We're so honoured that it was recommended! We'll have to come and check it out!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:06 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World
Yay! I love it when Alice takes charge.
Author's Response: She has their best interests at heart....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:58 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses
You covered a large span of time fluently, and filled in crucial details. If the fools would stop being so stubborn, neither of them would have ever been in this much pain.
Author's Response: We wanted to make sure readers got the full picture without having the separation years dragged out.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:52 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You
Heart wrenching.
Author's Response: It's definitely a SAD situation. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:47 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture
I thought that Edward would push Bella away after his parent's death, but was pleasantly surprised, and then Jacob waltzed into the story. Great writing, though.
Author's Response: So many things happened at the prom, all coming to a head at once. Darn it, Jake! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:41 PM · On: 2000-Christmas
And there goes the friendship....
Author's Response: This event, if anything made their friendship stronger. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:37 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip
Truth or dare first kiss....squee!
Author's Response: The start of so many first kisses ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:31 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance
Cute.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:26 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue
Bella and Edward have such a unique friendship!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:19 PM · On: 1997-First day
It was nice to hear it all through Bella's POV.
Author's Response: Certain scenes will be from both POV's. We won't do it much, but when we do, it's important.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:09 PM · On: 1997-New kid
Intruiging, you're setting up story that is going to be wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! We appreciate you giving our story a shot!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Prologue
Whoa. Great start.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cec (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Changing Channels
great so far, loving it!!! please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Changing Channels
I loved this chapter, and Edward's notes were so sweet. I'm loving Charlie, and I'm glad he gave Bella some food for thought, which I think is what gave her the extra push to open those letters. AND THEY KISSED! I know they still have more to work through, but ahhh.... progress!
Author's Response: YAY! They kissed! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jyliu (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Changing Channels
You have my heart breaking, literally it hurts inside. I am so relieved they kissed. I also love the french (your Canadian audience thanks you). Update quickly please.
Author's Response: Ah, the lovely venomousgal is Canadian and her hubs is our French beta:) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: darkwavs (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Changing Channels
sigh...i hope these two heal each other. and soon.
Author's Response: So do we! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Changing Channels
Ladies, Thank you for this chapter!!! it was really intersting to read and very soothing and hopeful experience after the last two chapters (whitch were really hard to read my heart ached for both of them seeing how hurt they both were with all that happened). I'm glad that Bella found the box with all those things and had the courage to read the letters. And that Edward was so thoughtful leaving her those notes around the house. I love it when he speaks or writes something to her in French.
I'm also very happy they were able to talk a little more been sober and that this healing process is moving forward. And I absolutely loved the kiss, it was such a beautiful moment full of new hopes and promises to try.
Can't wait for next chapter, it would be great to have a glimpse of EPOV of their conversation.
Always hoping real life is treating you well. I send you tons of...
Kisses. R.
Author's Response: The next chapter moves us forward a bit, although you do get Chubward's thoughts on what happened ont this night. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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