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Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Two is Better than One

OOO, what an evil woman! Glad Edward got some revenge. I LOVE the exlax trick!

I'm glad to see Bella starting to open up a bit more!



Author's Response:

Aunt Betsy went down....woohoo! Kudos to Edward and Esme.

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Two is Better than One

And then they kissed.... Again. Sigh

So many emotions in this chapter, I don't even know where to start. This story is an emotional rollercoaster.

Jasper killed me with the "sick in my plants" comment, that was an awesome save, and Edward and aunt Betsy. What a bitch she is.

 

I already finished my nominations for Eddies and Bellies, and yes, this story was def on my nominationslist. 



Author's Response:

Sick in my plants.....snickers.....that was too fun and much needed after the angst fest.  So glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Two is Better than One

i hope he makes her feel safe again



Author's Response:

He does which is why she is going to him despite herself.

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Two is Better than One

I love that Aunt Betsy got what was coming to her.  E/B are coming along slowly.



Author's Response:

I rpomised she would get hers, and she certainly did!  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Two is Better than One

he's winning her



Author's Response:

Slowly but surely!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Two is Better than One

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

There will be more coming soon!  Thank you.

Reviewer: Jeannette (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Two is Better than One

I love this story so much.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much you just made my day :D!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Two is Better than One

Oh Tammy

That was great.  You have managed to capture their insecurities about how to proceed with their relationship so well.  The wanting it to work but the worry that they will ruin everything again; the pain of past hurts and the regret over what could have been.  I'm happy to say that I didn't cry this time but I did have some heart clenching happening.

Thank you again for Chubward.

Annette



Author's Response:

Annette!

So glad you are still enjoying  our lil fic.  They are moving forward, slowly albeit, but still making progress.

Chubward loves you too.....he says he is sending sweet kisses down under....

Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Two is Better than One

oh I love how you are bringing these two together slowly.  It's beautiful to read and I just want to cry for Bella and Edward. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: boosey (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:25 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

*Sobs*

Wow... that was one emotional chapter. Awesome writing!

Totally loving your story!

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Changing Channels

*DEAD*

Monumental chap with one of the best "first" kisses EVER!
*Thud* I can die happy now lol.

The picture, the letters, all so devastatingly sad and sweet at the same time.

They're trying, SHE'S trying. They have a long way to go but THIS here was a damn good start.

LOVED it Ladies :D

Lee <3

Gonna go have a good cry and dream of Chubward lol :)

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Changing Channels

*DEAD*

Monumental chap with one of the best "first" kisses EVER!
*Thud* I can die happy now lol.

The picture, the letters, all so devastatingly sad and sweet at the same time.

They're trying, SHE'S trying. They have a long way to go but THIS here was a damn good start.

LOVED it Ladies :D

Lee <3

Gonna go have a good cry and dream of Chubward lol :)

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Changing Channels

Aww so cute chubward is now hotward what the hell is bellas prob not going for some eddie lovin what a dingbat. At least she admited he had pretty junk lol

Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Prologue

*Grins maniacally and rubs hands together* Heeheeheeheehee!  Bring it on.

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Crash

ugh* I wanna cry SO badly!
I'm a little choked up at the moment, this was....no words.
Yes.I.am basically speechless.

The emotions, killed me.
Chubward was tired of being broken, tired of pretending to be okay *sigh* :'(
When he called Alice, and said he was out. I think, I died a little in that moment NGL.

Him thinking, that she would be only his after he found out she was still a virgin, was not unexpected, of course, he would feel good about that.
The love of his life, was untouched, plus It's a man thing lol.

 

She went to HIM!!! *squee*
you guys did a complete 360 turnaround with mah heart :')
*happy tears*

*snuggle* :P
Me love me some Parka Chubward *dreamy sigh*

Luv you ladies <3

Lee



Author's Response:

*hugs you*  We missed you sweet!

And an upcoming chapter was written w/you in mind.  Chubward's parka is discussed in detail...

Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Changing Channels

I'm finally catching up on my reviewing. Great job ladies! Love it. This story just gets better with every chapter. Drunken Bella is funny and I loved the kiss it was sooo sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxo

Amber



Author's Response:

Poor Drunkella...

*sigh* The kiss.  I think we all want a kiss like that...

Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: --Jakes-Girl-- (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Changing Channels

Yay! I'm glad they finally kissed. :)

I had been waiting for that!!!

Thanks so much for writing this story!  It is amazing!

Please update sooooon!!!!!

<3



Author's Response:

Update is in queue!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AliaBobbwa (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Changing Channels

cute story. I like it a lot!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ginginlee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Changing Channels

I just read all the chapters for ...Becoming the Swan today, and I must say, I cannot wait for the next one!  I love this story, though it is heartbreaking as well.  The writing is excellent and engrossing, I really feel the pain and anguish.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

We are so appreciative of your sweet comments!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Prologue

This story has been recommended by one of the members of the LiveJournal community Twilight Enablers.

Come check it out and while you're there, consider giving us recommendations for your favourite Twilight fanfictions!

Thanks!

GinnyW



Author's Response:

*hugs you*  We're so honoured that it was recommended!  We'll have to come and check it out! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:06 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

Yay! I love it when Alice takes charge.

Author's Response:

She has their best interests at heart....

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:58 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

You covered a large span of time fluently, and filled in crucial details. If the fools would stop being so stubborn, neither of them would have ever been in this much pain.

Author's Response:

We wanted to make sure readers got the full picture without having the separation years dragged out. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:52 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

Heart wrenching.

Author's Response:

It's definitely a SAD situation.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:47 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

I thought that Edward would push Bella away after his parent's death, but was pleasantly surprised, and then Jacob waltzed into the story. Great writing, though.

Author's Response:

So many things happened at the prom, all coming to a head at once.  Darn it, Jake! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:41 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

And there goes the friendship....

Author's Response:

This event, if anything made their friendship stronger.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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