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Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Two is Better than One
hey sweet chap its nice to see the changes starting in bella
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Two is Better than One
This story is truly one of my top 5 right now and I've been checking everyday for the last week for an update. So, sufficed to say, this owns me. That's pretty damn good for a lady with over 90 favs. ;)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much. You seriously made me squee with your review...you rock!
Reviewer: IrisDraven (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Two is Better than One
ACK! That was sooo good. I loved Edward's and Esme's revenge. The surprise early birthday party was great. I was almost as overwhelmed as he was about her remembering what cake his mom use to make him. I think this song chose was awesome for these two characters. Her kissing him because she wanted to almost made me cry happy tears. No joke. At the end when he said "I never want to break your heart"(At least thats what I think he said my french is rusty big time) I literally lost my breath for a second. Good work girls!! Can't wait to see what happens on their long road next ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your translation was pretty darn close...it is "I will never break your heart again"
So glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Holy crap, Lemon much?!?!?! What does the translation mean. I'm totally being a lazy ass, I guess I can babblefish it. Great chapter ladies. I can't wait until they get it on. It's going to be so sweet. I adore this story. Go Eddie, trying to make things right. Although, I'm a little sad for everyone that had to sit around his sweaty ass at the birthday dinner. They should have let Funkward take a quick shower. :)
xoxo,
Urs
Author's Response: The translation means "I will never break your heart again."
Thank you so much Urs for your continued support! We puffy heart you.
Funkward.....so funny.
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Another great chapter....can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Perfection! They are making steps (albeit tiny, baby steps) but still steps nonetheless. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: More is coming. Thanks for supporting us...:)
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Two is Better than One
That was a beautiful chapter! I love that Bella is coming around slowly. Edward is finally seeing her problem with the way she see's herself. He is healing here little by little. Edward as well has some things to deal with...as far as him relating to himself as a "whore" after he touched Bella. So in love with this story!
Author's Response: They both are broken, but they have both made a conscious choice to start healing. Starting by trusting each other. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Two is Better than One
sooo nervous and happy, and hopeful and heartbroken, and warm and scared.
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Author's Response: That is it in a nutshell! Thank you.
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Two is Better than One
That whole end scene in the kitchen was beautiful ladies...slowly but surely right?? Sigh....loooove this!
Author's Response: Slow but sure wins every time! Thank you so much for sticking with us! your support has been greatly appreciated, dear! :D
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Loved it! Hope they are finally getting somewhere. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, darling! xo
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Awww....What better gift could Bella give than herself? Edward is finally understanding the depth of what he's facing if he's seeking to have a relationship with her. It seems he has some issues he needs to work out as well...
Author's Response: He needs to work on his issues and he needs to keep reassuring her as well....big shoulders I say. Thanks for your support!
Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Two is Better than One
That was a great great chapter. It looks like finally they are turning around and starting to admit their feelings...both of them. I really loved Bella in this chapter...she seems more confident of herself and her emotions. And Edward's revenge was fabulous! Great job ladies!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Bella is slowly gaining ground and starting to trust herself. I am so glad you enjoyed this update!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Two is Better than One
could this get any more romantic -- i loved it! makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside! You are the best!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Aw, that was sad, beautiful and inspiring. I loved it! ~Ash
Author's Response: Thank you, Ash!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: yelshasanileg (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Two is Better than One
you guys are good!!!!! loved it :)
Author's Response: We love you loving it! Thanks for your support!
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Two is Better than One
So Bella is slowly starting to come around. Glad Edward is taking things slow. Love the connection that these two have. Great chapter!
Author's Response: These two have a long road ahead, but at least they are on the right track.
Reviewer: MistylovesTwi (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Two is Better than One
so heartbreaking!! I want to just cry for them...can't wait for the update
Author's Response: Passes the kleenex.....sniff...thank you!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Of course one kiss won't solve all their problems. It seems like Edward has just as many as Bella does. He just went to the extreme in the opposite direction of what she did. Both of them reacting to the extreme on opposite ends of the spectrum has to make it even more difficult on both of them to heal and move forward with each other.
I loved it when Esme and Edward worked together to get revenge on Aunt Betsy. I picture Aunt Marge from the Harry Potter movies when you guys introduced her.
Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Aunt Marge...snorts in laughter....yup that is about right!
Thank you for your review.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Two is Better than One
I loved it so much I like the way they are starting to take baby steps. One side of me wants them to just get over it all and make up but the other part knows that it will last longer if they take their time again, and find that true love again. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: They need to take their time....if they rush they will regret it. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Two is Better than One
just love this sweet story.....
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Two is Better than One
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! Edward is getting to see how much he fucked her up.Hence, the bathing suit scene. I mean, in all the time they were friends she totally was there for him 100% and always told him how beautiful he was to her. She loved him unconditionally and he broke her. He is getting a glimpse as to how much he messed her up. My heart is breaking for Bella. I hope Edward doesn't fucking hurt her anymore. Great job ladies!
Author's Response: He is finally waking up to what the consequences of his actions were. Now it is up to him to help her heal!
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Great chapter! Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
Reviewer: marlievic (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Two is Better than One
I absolutely love this story. Every time I see an update for "Not Like This" I know "Becomes the Swan" is coming soon!
Author's Response: LOL! That is true for sure, they seem to update in tandem although it is not planned.
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Two is Better than One
Well she hasn't had a breakdown yet! Good sign!
Author's Response: Definetly a good sign. A step in the right direction if you may...
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