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Reviewer: sunshine-sue (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Prologue

I found 'Not Like This' yesterday read all there is of that - loved the angst! Moved on to 'Cullen Robotics' today read all there is of that - loved the smut! And I am now moving on to '... Becomes the Swan' - expecting great things!

Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Two is Better than One

Simply put, that was beautiful. I felt Edward's pain and deep love he has for Bella. The surprise birthday party was awesome. The kiss was perfect. They are slowly making their way back to eachother. Sounds like in the next chapter they are going to be busy for the wedding. I wonder how much time they are going to have with just the two of them :-)

Merci, beaucoup.



Author's Response:

They will have time and they will need time to make amends and re-establish their bonds.  So glad you are enjoying this.

Di rien!

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Two is Better than One

Edward would want a cake with real whipped cream. 

 

I'm raging right now. Edward and Bella are both so, so stupid. I don't know if I can keep reading, I'm so pissed. 



Author's Response:

Well they upset us too at times, but stick with us.  You may be surprised where this goes!

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Two is Better than One

very good. i love to see the true contrat between your carachters (not like this) where as bella is a tourchered, altered sould, edward is a man while the other is a boy... very good indeed



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: bellebookworm9 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Two is Better than One

I just love this story! I was listening to the radio last night, and I heard "Two Is Better Than One" for the first time. In my head, I seriously said to myself, "This is the song Edward and Bella were dancing to!" After hearing it, it's such a perfect song for their story. This is the story I most look forward to seeing an update from; truly one of the best I've read. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I absolutely adore that song.  It truly inspired me for the last chapter.  I could just see Edward in that god awful tux t shirt standing barefoot in the kitchen.....Gah!

Thank you for your support!

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Two is Better than One

Wonderful chapter. I 'm loving the fact that they are coming to terms with the situation and trying (slowly) to rectify it. I'm so happy they are making progress. Thank you for the tiny taste of Jasper that you threw in. He's like the cherry on top. LOL!!



Author's Response:

Jasper is so much fun!  Thank you for your review, more is on the way!

Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Two is Better than One

my favorite chap so far....it's agony....sweet agony.



Author's Response:

Gah!  Thank you *blushes*

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Two is Better than One

I so heart chubward. Great chapter.  I'm glad Aunt Betsy got her comeuppance, just mean. The fact that she made the bday cake his mom use to make, le sigh for real. 



Author's Response:

Chubward blows kisses at you and sends his love.  He even offered to share his cake with you.  Thank you for your review. :)

Reviewer: songster51 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Two is Better than One

Lovely and just the right note.  That wall is coming down one brick at a time but coming down it is.  I guess I never understood her total shutdown after the 'prom incident' but it is making much more sense in context with the abuse she suffered at her mother's house, Jake's forcing himself on her, etc.  It really tore her down a little bit at a time until Edward's betrayal took her down completely.  It had only been her relationship with him that allowed her to live a relatively normal existence in a little cocoon.  I think what she hasn't really gotten a handle on (neither has Edward for that matter) is that her anxiety and depression are related to a deeper problem stemming from longterm abuse.  They will both have to work at this to help her overcome her deepest fears of worthlessness.



Author's Response:

It will take time for both of these two to fully be in the place they need to be, but we are getting there.  Thank you for sticking with us!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:59 PM · On: How to Save a Life

that aunt....ugh, such a bitch!

the end of this chapter has given me hope for them!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Cry

this chapter made me tear up.....bella is so broken. i want to hug her.

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Stolen Away

i'm glad jasper said something to edward.......go jasper!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:40 PM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

wow, edward really did a number on bella. now i can't wait for her to give him a piece of her mind.

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:34 PM · On: 2009-Bed of Roses

what happened to you edward?? youe dad wouldnt want you to sleep around.....i feel sorry for him. I can't wait for the reunion for him and bella.

i can't believe it took me so long to read this......i'm loving it!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:28 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

so sad, so very sad for bella.....

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:24 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

i so did  not see that coming. i want to be mad at edward but a part of me can't but he should listen, he knows bella better than that. dumb edward.

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:19 PM · On: 2000-Christmas

that was so sad, i had a feeling it was coming but i so was not ready for it.....i'm glad bella was there for edward.

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:15 PM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

omg, i love being in edward's head and that kiss......so freaking sweet!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:08 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance

omg, i was so nervous he was actually going to go with kate....i almost started crying when he wouldn't answer, i should've known better! :)

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:08 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance

omg, i was so nervous he was actually going to go with kate....i almost started crying when he wouldn't answer, i should've known better! :)

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:02 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

oh so sweet edward is with bella.....i love how their relationship is growing!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:56 PM · On: 1997-First day

ohhh, i'm curious about her relationship with her mother!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:51 PM · On: 1997-New kid

it's refreshing to see Bella sticking up for edward and for him not to be so perfect!

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Prologue

i'm finally reading this, i can't believe i waited so long! eep! i'm excited!!

Reviewer: readingisbliss (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:09 PM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

omg. Nooooo! Why??? It hurts. Alot.

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